(Wu Yitong, traveling through the wilderness era, unifying primitive tribes, farming, trade, business wars, uniting vertically and horizontally to fight against the sword and magic civilization)
Temporary worker Zhang Shaolong, due to a work accident, traveled back to the era of primitive tribes 5,000 years ago. He faced various beasts, difficulties and crises, and met all kinds of girls, brother-in-laws, and the girl next door. She was gentle and kind, sinister and yandere, high in attack and low in defense, and had a crush on his boss at his workplace... Saving the primitive aborigines was really just a matter of luck!
Reader comments
Interesting. It's not bad that the first person is used sparingly. (Even other characters also use the first person, which seems a bit confusing.) The protagonist feels quite innocent and ordinary, just like an ordinary person today. As for the protagonist's emotional line, it's normal in primitive society, haha. (After all, the protagonist has been influenced by modern society)
Overall, the new writer needs to improve but is still pretty good.
Big cheers for the author [laughing] [like]!
I hope you all like it, a new writer debuts
I hope students who are passing by will stop and take a look. It may not be a good beginning, but the story will become more and more exciting later on.
Interesting. It's not bad that the first person is used sparingly. (Even other characters also use the first person, which seems a bit confusing.) The protagonist feels quite innocent and ordinary, just like an ordinary person today. As for the protagonist's emotional line, it's normal in primitive society, haha. (After all, the protagonist has been influenced by modern society) Overall, the new writer needs to improve but is still pretty good. Big cheers for the author [laughing] [like]!
I hope you all like it, a new writer debuts I hope students who are passing by will stop and take a look. It may not be a good beginning, but the story will become more and more exciting later on.