The plot begins from Chapter 10 (Ruyi Golden Cudgel, Eighty-nine Mysterious Skills, Seventy-two Transformations of the Golden Body). The spiritual energy is revived, and another world invades. I have a stick that can break the sky. As a human being, you must always have a little confidence, believe that you can have the ability to break the sky, and have the courage to match the sky. Are you right? Great Sage.
Reader comments
It's quite good, I can't say, the subject matter is relatively novel, anyway, this is the first one I've seen in Tomato [face covering] [face covering] Well, the descriptions of the protagonist's characters are very interesting and make people want to read it.
There are currently 69 chapters, which is average. I don't know what the author's outline is, but with the current pace of writing, it is indeed very slow. After all, I haven't seen a single climax yet. The plot rhythm is really lackluster. The writing style is between pass and good. A little better than pass, barely good, but not excellent. Get rid of these, and the rest will generally be fine and you can proceed.
It's very interesting, but the author didn't stick to it until the end like a great sage. I don't know why the author started writing this book, and I don't know why the author stopped writing it. If the author can see it, I hope the author can take a break, regain his condition, and write the sequel, just like the great sage failed, but he left a legacy and changed another person.
How can I put it, the overall feeling is pretty good, but there are a lot of typos and some things that don't make sense, but I can still read it, and the protagonist is well portrayed.
Very good. Personally, I feel it's bland but passionate.
I've been looking forward to it for so long, you come directly to the finale [smile][smile]
There's a little bit of ink staining, but it's okay.
Good, good, good
I finished reading more than 60 pictures in one night and it wasn't enough.
There has been no update for three days, what do you want to do? ! ! It's really good. The content of entering the military academy is very novel and different from other schools. You can think more about it. I hope you have better content to present [Love] [Love] [Love]
I think a slow build up is good for creating a more complete character, but the plot also needs to unfold. Come on, author, I support your failure.
It's okay, the rhythm is pretty good, it's pretty good to watch, I hope the author can update it more
This book is very good, but you have to work hard. I hope the protagonist can have his own opportunities instead of relying on inheritance for everything.
Still
Yossi, it's pretty good.
Very good, I hope there is no female protagonist
The author adjusts his mentality. We like to read it. For those who give negative reviews, I can only say that wild boars cannot eat fine grains and have never eaten good pork in their lives. Come on!
The story is pretty good, but the author is a bit short
The author should write it faster, it's not enough to read
I have to say that the cover of this book is really eye-catching!
Okay, keep writing, I have a feeling, it is different from traditional high martial arts novels
It looks good, I hope the protagonist can be a little more arrogant later on! (I like this kind of protagonist) [laughs][laughs]
It's very comfortable to read, the protagonist's character is very distinct, and the plot unfolds very smoothly. This book has a promising future.
After reading a few chapters, the pace is not sluggish and the characters are well drawn. The main plot should be the growth of the protagonist instead of completing dungeons and changing dungeons. It surpasses most Tomato books.
After reading Chapter 26, I feel like Zhou Yifan's little life will never end?
Very good, keep up the good work!
Clear logic and exciting plot
Grandma's legs are really good, why are there so many negative comments?
Brother, don't be a eunuch
Rich and colorful content
Hey hey hey hey hey hey
This book sucked me to death
The plot is okay, but the ending is too sudden.
That's right, when will the protagonist's brain light up?
It's quite good, I can't say, the subject matter is relatively novel, anyway, this is the first one I've seen in Tomato [face covering] [face covering] Well, the descriptions of the protagonist's characters are very interesting and make people want to read it.
There are currently 69 chapters, which is average. I don't know what the author's outline is, but with the current pace of writing, it is indeed very slow. After all, I haven't seen a single climax yet. The plot rhythm is really lackluster. The writing style is between pass and good. A little better than pass, barely good, but not excellent. Get rid of these, and the rest will generally be fine and you can proceed.
It's very interesting, but the author didn't stick to it until the end like a great sage. I don't know why the author started writing this book, and I don't know why the author stopped writing it. If the author can see it, I hope the author can take a break, regain his condition, and write the sequel, just like the great sage failed, but he left a legacy and changed another person.
How can I put it, the overall feeling is pretty good, but there are a lot of typos and some things that don't make sense, but I can still read it, and the protagonist is well portrayed.
Very good. Personally, I feel it's bland but passionate.
I've been looking forward to it for so long, you come directly to the finale [smile][smile]
There's a little bit of ink staining, but it's okay.
Good, good, good
I finished reading more than 60 pictures in one night and it wasn't enough.
There has been no update for three days, what do you want to do? ! ! It's really good. The content of entering the military academy is very novel and different from other schools. You can think more about it. I hope you have better content to present [Love] [Love] [Love] I think a slow build up is good for creating a more complete character, but the plot also needs to unfold. Come on, author, I support your failure.
It's okay, the rhythm is pretty good, it's pretty good to watch, I hope the author can update it more
This book is very good, but you have to work hard. I hope the protagonist can have his own opportunities instead of relying on inheritance for everything.
Still Yossi, it's pretty good.
Very good, I hope there is no female protagonist The author adjusts his mentality. We like to read it. For those who give negative reviews, I can only say that wild boars cannot eat fine grains and have never eaten good pork in their lives. Come on!
The story is pretty good, but the author is a bit short
The author should write it faster, it's not enough to read
I have to say that the cover of this book is really eye-catching!
Okay, keep writing, I have a feeling, it is different from traditional high martial arts novels
It looks good, I hope the protagonist can be a little more arrogant later on! (I like this kind of protagonist) [laughs][laughs]
It's very comfortable to read, the protagonist's character is very distinct, and the plot unfolds very smoothly. This book has a promising future.
After reading a few chapters, the pace is not sluggish and the characters are well drawn. The main plot should be the growth of the protagonist instead of completing dungeons and changing dungeons. It surpasses most Tomato books.
After reading Chapter 26, I feel like Zhou Yifan's little life will never end?
Very good, keep up the good work!
Clear logic and exciting plot Grandma's legs are really good, why are there so many negative comments?
Brother, don't be a eunuch
Rich and colorful content
Hey hey hey hey hey hey
This book sucked me to death
The plot is okay, but the ending is too sudden.
That's right, when will the protagonist's brain light up?