One Staff to Shatter the Heavens

It's quite good, I can't say, the subject matter is relatively novel, anyway, this is the first one I've seen in Tomato [face covering] [face covering] Well, the descriptions of the protagonist's characters are very interesting and make people want to read it.

There are currently 69 chapters, which is average. I don't know what the author's outline is, but with the current pace of writing, it is indeed very slow. After all, I haven't seen a single climax yet. The plot rhythm is really lackluster. The writing style is between pass and good. A little better than pass, barely good, but not excellent. Get rid of these, and the rest will generally be fine and you can proceed.

It's very interesting, but the author didn't stick to it until the end like a great sage. I don't know why the author started writing this book, and I don't know why the author stopped writing it. If the author can see it, I hope the author can take a break, regain his condition, and write the sequel, just like the great sage failed, but he left a legacy and changed another person.

How can I put it, the overall feeling is pretty good, but there are a lot of typos and some things that don't make sense, but I can still read it, and the protagonist is well portrayed.

Very good. Personally, I feel it's bland but passionate.

I've been looking forward to it for so long, you come directly to the finale [smile][smile]

There's a little bit of ink staining, but it's okay.

There has been no update for three days, what do you want to do? ! ! It's really good. The content of entering the military academy is very novel and different from other schools. You can think more about it. I hope you have better content to present [Love] [Love] [Love] I think a slow build up is good for creating a more complete character, but the plot also needs to unfold. Come on, author, I support your failure.

It's okay, the rhythm is pretty good, it's pretty good to watch, I hope the author can update it more

I finished reading more than 60 pictures in one night and it wasn't enough.