I Wanted to Become a Hashira, but Became an Upper Rank Instead

First of all, as a system text, it's still not satisfying enough. After all, I started fifth in the game. The original protagonist group developed too fast, and the protagonist seemed a bit slow in comparison. It gave me the feeling that a wave of big ones were developed in the early stage, they were bad in the middle stage, and they were invincible in the later stage. This kind of development rhythm is a little bit chaotic. If it is a development story, the system should help the protagonist reach invincibility as early as possible. If it is a combat story, it should make breakthroughs and insights in the battle, instead of the opponent bursting out in the battle, but the protagonist keeps giving the opponent a chance, and then runs away if there is no other way. Secondly, I personally think that the protagonist is not decisive enough (it is a matter of development after all. Whoever is invincible will be shot to death if he is unhappy). The more decisive and calm the protagonist is, the more likable he is (of course, the funny guy is also good [laughs][laughs]). Finally, I feel like the emotional line could be written a little more delicately. No matter how much battles are written in a book, a little bit of daily life is necessary. The rhythm must have ups and downs. It would be a bit rushed to add it after the ending, right? At the end, it's still very interesting, otherwise I wouldn't have finished reading it in one night [Send my heart] [Send my heart] It's the first time I've written it like this and it's already great [Send my heart]

It's so good, even if you give me five stars, this is the only one that's better this year. The author keeps sending you razor blades [angry]

It's very exciting, and the feeling of fighting can be imagined directly by reading the text. Finally, there is a novel that is continuously updated and the main character is serious about being a ghost.

Wow, it looks great. I finally found one who is not from Zhu's side. I like that the protagonist is the villain. It's so interesting (this is purely my personal opinion. I really hope that Wu Mei and the protagonist Jin Yu will form CP [smirk])

I'll give it a serious review. The author is very attentive in portraying the protagonist. The plot line is very smooth and not too big. The protagonist's strength is gradually getting stronger without the feeling of being cheated all of a sudden. I like this type of novels. As I read it, I consciously entered the perspective of the protagonist. I just feel like the protagonist's harem has a lot of men and women.

I really want to cry, woo woo woo. Jin Yu and Shinobu really made me cry to death. From the beginning when Jin Yu almost died to now, Jin Yu has really taken one step at a time and made a lot of efforts for the final plan. Wow woo woo. The system disappears and the last half of the ending made me burst into tears... I have watched it all in one go since I saw it in the morning and now I will cry to death! It is worth spending so much time to watch it. The combat part is also very well written. π_π I'm done (don't) finish it! Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, yeah, right thing, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo approach. Why are only three hours of comments shown? Is it because I was scrolling through Douyin and switching to other novels while reading? (Angry

The writing is good, but I feel that the pace is too fast. We need to outline the three major chapters and then add other elements, such as the Mugen Train chapter. Since the map has been mentioned before, we will first decide on a hundred or more chapters, and then conceive of Mugen Train's other forces. Join in, etc., So that the fanfic feels more novel, and the Infinite City chapter also includes other forces. The original villain does not have to die in battle, and the protagonist can save other powers if he doesn't want to, etc. I just have these ideas, and I still envy the author's writing skills to express his thoughts.

The characters are very vividly drawn, and there are jokes in the sentences to add interest. The battle process is very detailed and makes people excited. The happy ending is also very good. In summary, it is too little, but the structure is perfect, so it is not bad. So, my evaluation is--five stars!

It's average, but it's still worth watching. I give five stars to anything that makes me read it carefully. I hope the author can write better in the future and not be too messy in the later stage. The ending can be more perfect [laughing]

It's good to read. Although I probably guessed the ending from the beginning, it doesn't stop it from being a good book. The author writes the conflicting and darkened psychology of the protagonist very well, but there is a little less description of other characters, like Rain on the Other Side. Very beautiful, recommended