A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality!

The ordinary, enthusiastic and kind-hearted male protagonist met his own opportunity on an ordinary night. The fairy sister in white opened another door to life for Xiang. From then on, the male protagonist began an extraordinary life. It's a bit slow at the beginning, but becomes more and more exciting later on.

Hey guys, give me a shot, I thought it was another one, but this one looks pretty good too

It's a very good book about cultivating immortals. It's very to my liking. It feels very real, not exaggerated, and has a lot of laughs. Young Master Jin and King Niu in the article are very distinctive. I still remember these supporting characters after reading it. The subject matter and level setting are novel but not inconsistent. It is a bit slow in the early stage, funny in the middle and late stages, and the rhythm is good. The author's writing style can only be average, without too many gorgeous words, but the article is easy to read. It is best to change the title of the book in the later stage. Although the title does not affect our reading, it will definitely affect the spread of the work. I read few books, but this one suits my taste quite well. I hope the author will stick with it. After reading the introduction, I am looking forward to the follow-up plot of Huang Yi's Journey to the Starry Sky. I wonder if Young Master Jin and King Niu will go to the Starry Sky with him. The heroine Qingyun is my favorite novel heroine. She is a bit silly in front of the male protagonist. In fact, she is smart, decisive and not clingy. She is a favorite of men.

A very good fantasy novel, the author put his heart into it. The author's imagination is wide open, his writing is delicate, the story is exciting, and the characters are well portrayed. Like it! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The author of this book is very imaginative, and the characters described are vivid and beautiful. I read it in one sitting, cheers for you!

Especially love to watch! The theme is novel! It is different from any other immortality themes I have seen before. The characters have distinct personalities and each supporting character has his or her own personality! The handsome and wealthy Young Master Jin is Huang Yi's biggest fan. His daily quarrels with Young Master Jin are very interesting! A master at flirting with girls, but a badass as well. The timid cow is bold. Qingyun is silly in front of Huang Yi, but strong and decisive in front of others. There are also many interesting characters! Looking forward to the follow-up!

The introduction is great, the context is clear, and the characters are okay. I look forward to a good story.

The plot is interesting and interesting, and the main line is clear. It's so interesting.

The author's writing style is smooth and delicate, the human body is three-dimensional and vivid, and the stories are wonderful and eloquent.

The author's writing style is very good, but not enough to read.