[Radiant, Heartless Wild Rose x Smiling-on-the-Outside, Scheming-on-the-Inside Devoted Hound | Secret Crush Comes True]
[Younger Man + Long-Planned Pursuit + Childhood Friend Takes the Lead + Two Powerful Families in Beijing + One-on-One Romance, Both Pure]
The first time Luo Yao met Jing Huai, the elegant young man was trapped in an old alley, beaten until he was covered in wounds.
The aloof Miss Luo had never helped anyone before, and then he clung to her for three whole years. But just when Luo Yao liked him most, he left without a word and vanished without a trace.
Later, the poor young man transformed into the eldest young master of the Jing family, one of Beijing's most powerful families. Yet the first thing he did when he reappeared in public was announce his engagement to someone else.
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Everyone was waiting to laugh at Luo Yao.
But they didn't know that Miss Luo was heartless and cold, and had already put him behind her.
"He's just a man. When I like him, the stars and moon can't compare to him. When I don't, he's nothing more than a passing cloud."
Sure enough, the man never got another glance from her.
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In a dim corridor, Jing Huai held onto her hand. His eyes behind his gold-rimmed glasses were restrained and tormented.
"A Yao, please hear me out."
There wasn't a flicker in Luo Yao's eyes as she pulled her hand away. "Mr. Jing, if you keep grabbing at me like that, my little dog will get upset when it sees us."
As soon as she finished speaking, the man behind her swept her into his arms and laughed with carefree arrogance. "Sorry, I don't like other people touching what's mine."
Then he lowered his head and coaxed her gently and tenderly. "Baby, let's go home."
Very nice, five-star rating. But I have a few personal thoughts. First of all, I personally think that what attracts me more about this article is the emotional line, so there is no need to introduce so many messy relationships, such as foreign forces and the like, that part is not attractive. Secondly, if you want to treat the seven-year story as a long-term and important reason, mention it less often and bury it; if you mention it often, try to explain it as early as possible. If you keep mentioning it without an answer, it will make people more disgusted. Finally, try to update the book in 4K during the new book period, otherwise even if you think the text is very good, you won't particularly want to add a bookshelf. Finally, the emotional lines written by the author are really good. Please write more about this aspect. (The above are all personal insights. If you have different opinions, you can discuss them, but don't criticize them if you don't like them.)
Looks good, come on, come on, come on