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Great author! ! ! Don't write too many love plots and erotic stuff, okay? I think Hermione and Shitou (the main character's name is a homophone) can be just like their childhood friends, and they can fall in love, but visual fatigue combined with love makes it easy to write poorly. Now this feeling is very comfortable. Whether the protagonist is a solo beauty career type or a slightly ambiguous relationship, they are all very good! ! ! (I don't really like articles with female protagonists, but I really like the author's plot, which helps the author write better!!)

Although I haven't read much, I feel that the writing is still good. The author wrote this book carefully, but from the beginning, I feel that Hermione appears a bit too frequently. I don't know if I missed the plot? Hermione's appearance feels very deliberate. Anyway, regardless of whether there is a female protagonist or not, this book is considered wonderful.

I like it~ This kind of plain feeling unexpectedly appeals to my taste... The things written about alchemy are also very novel to me! Hermione? This kind of water-like emotional line is very good. I hope it won't become sticky later...

It's a very interesting book, but can the main character concentrate on his career and be beautiful? Hope there is no cp

It's pretty good, but I don't know when I will be able to use those eyes that can see data. Although the eyes are special, but! Not enough!

The plot is pretty good, I like the male protagonist very much, the writing is okay, it's not a harem story, it's 1v1, but maybe the author is not good at writing about relationships. At present, it seems that the relationship between Shitou and Hermione is a bit too deliberate and abrupt, and it just feels like they can't get along. After the male and female protagonists fell in love, there are some things that I don't understand. It may also be the reason why I didn't fall in love when I was eleven or twelve years old, of course. It may also be because I have only been in love once in 18 years. Anyway, it may be my reason, so I don't like the love line. I persisted in reading a few chapters of their love, but I still can't accept it. Other than this, I like this article very much. I think it is well written. It is very well written. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is the love line. Of course, if you don't mind, it is really worth reading [][] (If anyone feels that my personal opinions are too strong, not objective enough, and cannot express my own opinions clearly, please ignore me! Thank you [for sending my heart])

Yes, the protagonist's working state is clearly different from his daily state, so that we can feel the alchemy of the book's theme, and the gradual progression of emotions is closer to reality and enhances the sense of immersion. Come on, author, I support you! And the heroine must be Hermione, I love Hermione so much (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It looks good, not bad, the story structure is very good, it is rare to see novels with the protagonist as the main character and the original work as a supplement. Please support [like][like][like]

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

Why was it removed? I only watched the beginning, and I was addicted to it...

Although I don't know whether these alchemy concepts are original content or derivatives of the original work, it is still quite interesting. The relationship with Hermione seems to be pretty good so far, and I hope there won't be as many disputes in the future as in the original work.

The early stage was pretty good, and it finally didn't follow the original work too much. But there's no need to write too much about teenagers being jealous or something like that.

Are you interested in the whole curry stick [eating melon]? Who would refuse a holy sword?

Blocked? Why can't I see it?

It's pretty good. It's much better than the old-fashioned ones where you know the plot and then interfere in various ways. It's nice to come here once in a while and not know the plot.

+1 Star The detailed description of alchemy is very attractive. The protagonist can think for himself, but he is not too involved in the original plot. -1 Star is a bit biased towards the harem, but it can be seen that the author currently wants Hermione to be the heroine.

Alchemy, which is different from magic, has been debunked by the author's pen. Stone's research in the article is like my mood when playing "Potion Craft". I hope to see more of his strange failed alchemy products, the kind where the male protagonist successfully creates something useful that is useless in the original direction.

Where is the author? Why was it taken off the shelves?

I like the plot very much, and the writing method of alchemy is quite novel. I feel that the plot is also very rich. Characters from other schools were added very early, as well as competitions and so on. I really like it. I have been following it and I feel that everything else is good, but the only slight flaw is that after the protagonist falls in love with Hermione, the personality of the protagonist suddenly seems to be a bit different from the protagonist's personality at the beginning. I accept all the settings and have no preference, and I have no problem falling in love with Hermione, but it feels a little weird, as if a person who was a little aloof at first suddenly started to feel sticky because of love. Everything else is very good, thank you to the author!

It's a pretty good Harry Potter fanfic. If anyone who wants to read this book can read my review, I'll give you a piece of advice. The current heroine of this book is Hermione, and there is no harem. Not Gryffindor. If you don't want to see it, please don't hurt it. The most unfortunate thing about this book is that it has too few words and its rating is too low. It is a good quality seedling, but it is very easy to die young. [Thinking] I hope to see the finale without too much supervision.

The expansion of alchemy is very attractive, and the original chapter Alchemy Competition is exciting. One star is deducted for the writing. Some of the plots in the first grade are a bit stiff, but there has been some progress recently. I hope to keep it updated.

Gone? Why not?

Such a good book will definitely receive rave reviews from you

"Campus violence is all about violence."

The writing is okay. I think it's okay if the heroine is older. The main thing is that Hermione is a bit of a drama now.

It is indeed very good. Many things have been added to make the world view of "Harry Potter" more realistic, as well as a complete set of alchemy concepts. Not only does it follow the main plot of the original book, but the characters are also more fleshed-out. In short, it is recommended for fans of Harry Potter to get involved!

It is different from other fan novels, and the writing is good. The character creation needs more work, but the flaws are not hidden. It is a very good fan novel.

This is the best Hogwarts fanfic I've ever seen written about alchemy. Hope the author can stick with it. [Laughing out loud]

Brother, why has it been removed from the shelves? (

Okay, can be very good