Zhengyang**********

Brother, you really read it from the script.

You can drive away half of the people at the beginning, and the trick has reached a new level. People talk about three golden chapters, but it's useless if you just trick the player for ten chapters. Secondly, the fact that time travel does not give memory is actually a trap for the readers. Everyone knows what is going on, but the protagonist pretends not to know, which makes it awkward to read.

The explanation at the beginning is too boring, especially the part where you ask the question is really confusing, so I thought of asking it so carefully, and this is the age of gays. You call Yang Huajian and call people Lao Yang. This is not the information age. Without golden fingers, it will be gone. You don't even have the memory of your original body. , You can't even remember the plot after watching the TV series. Whoever reads the novel does not read the TV series to read a different story. The character of the protagonist is like a warlord and has no distinctive characteristics. If the contrast between the protagonist and the TV series is too big, don't write it. It will not become popular.

Why don't you want to pay attention to Su Meng? What was wrong with Su Meng was that she was just a little proud because of being pampered. She was considered to be rich and beautiful in that era! You are still highly educated and have a high IQ. You are much better than today's women, right? You are a 21st century time traveler and prophet with insights beyond the times. You have cheats and you can't control a girl? In the original work, she just disliked Han Chunming like all women for being a rag collector, right? Could you train him to be a good housekeeper?

Still good, looking forward to the next plot

I feel a little dizzy.

Boring [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]

Does it look good? The opening is too boring to write.

Rubbish, I can't stand it at all