I! the Jewel in the Palm of the Gardevoir Tribe!

Finished, goodbye, I have a strange picture in my mind, I will pay tribute to you first, meow

An interesting idea, which can be regarded as a breath of fresh air, but I hope it does not involve the system panel and cold digital levels.

I'll read it when I write Seese with my sister, and I'll keep it for now Have you written it now?

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental, which is fine. The older brother is weak and needs more rest. The younger brother urged the elder brother like this, which was wrong for the younger brother and hurt the elder brother's body! [Sinister smile]

It's pretty good, but to be honest, having two bodies is not as good as switching bodies.

It's good-looking, the subject matter is innovative, and the author should ignore those little black people [eating melon] There is no need for clones. It is not like one soul and two bodies. I can't appreciate Narcissus. It's a bit poisonous. It's not that there is no heroine. I'll just combine the clones later. I want to see the protagonist switch forms. The protagonist Gardevoir doesn't have much plot. Gardevoir is the core. Now the title of the book is a bit deceptive. The result of chasing for Gardevoir is this [awkward laugh]

Wouldn't the protagonist do that with Gardevoir in his own body? [Laughing evilly][smiling][laughing awkwardly]

Japanese, Japanese [smile] It took a lot of effort to find a similar one [smile]

It looks good, the subject matter is good, but it's too short. This is the first time I've seen the main character's character. He's a Pokémon, but he has a human appearance. It's a bit inconsistent with the plot, but it's innocuous. Overall it's still very nice to watch. It's just really too short! @ Maple with leaves dance update quickly!

It looks good, it's a very novel way of writing, but it's too little and not enough to read. Also, let me ask, the heroine Gardevoir is not the protagonist, right?

Too few. Finally, I found one that attracted me [I almost cried] and it was really good-looking [smirking] [laughing]

It looks good, but one thing is that I hope that the protagonist and those who are with the protagonist will not have any ambiguity with any men, not even the slightest ambiguity. The protagonist can flirt with himself or his wife, but some things should not come true just by saying them. If this is possible, I will keep pursuing it.

Will there be a Shura field in the future? Isn't the heroine her own?

I feel that the writing is very good [love], and the daily battle extras are very good [like]. But I may be a bit stubborn, I just thought that the protagonist is a male, but when the body transforms into a female, something is very wrong [something]. Because the other body is constructed from energy and part of self-awareness, it makes sense to be both male and female, but the main body should not have been restructured into a female, otherwise the human model should also be a girl. But it doesn't make sense to transform into a female Gardevoir. This makes it seem like the protagonist is a female Gardevoir, with a male incarnation of male consciousness. From now on, we don't care about the other body, that is, whether the main body can be changed to a male [sending heart] [almost crying] [sending heart]. For example, the human mode is male, the main body is a male Gardevoir, and the other body in the Poké Ball is a female Gardevoir. [Almost crying] This is just my personal opinion, because it doesn't affect reading, and I feel otherwise fine.

It's very nice, and it's one of the better quality among the Pokémon fan books. The problem is that there are few updates, and some Pokémon are lacking pictures, so I plan to include pictures in the book where Pokémon appear for the first time. If you find any places that don't have pictures, you can @ me. I'll see it and I'll make it up. Of course, if this Pokémon appears multiple times, I won't include pictures. That would be too much work.

It's pretty cool. It's quite special to have a harem after rebirth in the rebirth story. I feel like the progress is very slow. Can I accept Na Zi into the harem later? She is my favorite in the TV I have watched

When did Mendel commit suicide? Wait, does that count as crape myrtle? ! (Great joy) Control your points

Although I have read less than 1/4 of it carefully, it is indeed very interesting, and the content is very novel, and the plot line of this book is also very good. It is a very excellent work for Pokémon fan fiction. It is recommended that you don't criticize it if you don't like it. Everyone has their own favorite works. Everyone has their own favorite style. Again, if you don't like it, don't criticize it. Feeling good now, still watching Brother, give me one more episode, I'm dying, please Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm covered in I'm shaking. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me. I will update one chapter, just one chapter, I will never touch it again, please Please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never I won't touch this thing anymore. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm going to read it now. I can't sleep over and over again, brother, I beg you, just add another chapter. Brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm covered in I'm shaking. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me. I'll add another chapter. Just one more chapter, I won't touch it again, please Please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never I won't touch this thing anymore. I really can't stand it any longer. I now I'm tossing and turning and can't fall asleep. Brother, I beg you, just add another chapter. Brother, give me another chapter. Awa

I still want to see one soul and two bodies, instead of the second body being like consciousness, I want to see the protagonist fully operate two bodies. Or the protagonist can directly switch between the two bodies. A human male and a Gardevoir female. [Shy]

I have seen more than 700 pictures so far, but there are too few female protagonists. This does not include Pokémon, but refers only to humans. There are only three female protagonists at present, and it is too far away from including all of them. I wonder if there will be more female protagonists when it is finished? The progress is really slow. Currently only in the second region. There are already 700 chapters before even going to other areas.

It looks good, but what's the author's group number?

It looks good and really hits my strike zone. For me, it is a top-notch novel. The content is not toxic and very interesting. It's just that sometimes some plots are a bit boring, but not much. The rest is no problem. @ Maple with leaf dance The continuation of Chapter 249, please make up for it. It's very uncomfortable to skip it without any clue.

Coordinates Chapter 140, so far it's okay, there are some things that bother me, but the whole plot is reasonable. A little bit toxic, not much, mainly for the continuity of the plot. There are also things the author does. Overall, the score is 75~80. (Percentage scale) Well, I gave up after reading chapter 170. I should have read it as soon as I saw the name. At that time there were only 100 chapters. (Although it may conflict with my idea. After all, those who persisted at that time were a little different from my point of view.

Not bad, the writing is not bad, and the author is very active. I recognize you, you are a real hero, It's so good to read, it's so exciting, the author is also very active, and the plot is particularly good, but it's a pity that the updates are too slow. There are no other shortcomings. I give it a five-star rating.

The writing is okay, but I really don't understand why the Chinese Alliance is available everywhere.

Well, what should I say? It doesn't matter╮(╯_╰)╭

To put it nicely, the description is detailed, but to put it badly, if you have never seen Pokémon, after reading your novel, you can say that you have seen Pokémon [facepalm] As for why I gave it five stars, it's because I'm also a pervert [laughing]

It looks good, it does look good, but I think the author should not overdo it ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ and give the protagonist more roles! Don't change the subject (´△｀) It would be better if it were like this

I feel like this setting is really great [Adoration] Can you write less about Fu Nina? I don't know why it feels so strange. Please [love] [love] [love]

The weather is so nice today, I'm going home for the New Year soon. My sister still has five days off, She took the exam on the third day, It takes two days to take the exam. We returned to our hometown in three days, But she will be miserable for the remaining five days. After all, there are still two days of exams. [Laughing evilly] I think this book is similar to the protagonist's family, but the qlla is a bit bigger. Family relationships are not so perverted.