(Many girls, more everyday, barely... Able to eat)
"Tsunade... I can understand animals talking, let me tell you."
"If you don't say anything, I'll come in."
"I'll tell you a story honestly, don't be afraid."
Xia Mu slowly opened the door...
Reader comments
My bestie! Malignant tumors, acute myocardial infarction, sequelae of stroke, end-stage renal disease, chronic renal failure, uremia, multiple limb loss, malignant brain tumors, decompensated chronic liver failure, sequelae of encephalitis, sequelae of meningitis, deep coma, bilateral deafness, paralysis, severe Alzheimer's disease, severe brain injury, severe Parkinson's disease, severe third-degree burns, severe primary pulmonary hypertension, severe motor neuron disease, loss of speech ability, severe aplastic anemia! Read a few more chapters before letting her go!
Author, you can write, the protagonist travels through a parallel world, Naruto is a female, Sasuke is also a female world, author, come on [learned]
The writing is very good. I have read a lot of Naruto books, but this one gave me a different feeling. The ones I have read before were either too violent, intrigued, or mindless. You will have a lot of fun reading this book. The author will also reply to the readers. If you have any ideas, you can tell the author.
The writing is quite good. There are no bad points at the moment. I'll give it a five-star rating first. I hope it won't be written according to the original work. After all, too many fans were in the Ohashi Chuunin Examination and then Konoha collapsed... There are almost no high praises like this. You can try to write some openings by yourself. As long as there are no big surprises, it's okay to open a little by yourself.
The writing is really okay. Most of the fanfics have plots that match the content flow of their own books. In some places, the writing is very bloated, and I have no desire to read it. Even if I like it, I can only skip reading. If the emotions of life are combined with a little original plot, five million words is not a problem, and there are no interruptions or unfinished work, it should be properly rated as a five-star praise [Thinking]
In fact, the number of words could be more so that it feels lost after reading it
Ape, you ruined the group and I have to admit it, okay?
Naruto's nanny, and Naruto appears in more scenes than the protagonist
It's nice to watch, but there's nothing exciting about it. I think we could do something like do something with Dashimaru or do something with Tsunade [laughter]
Okay, nothing toxic so far
It feels like the author wants to turn into a daily novel like Dave
Well written, please support it.
It's still fun to watch without thinking about it
Very interesting book
When will I go to Tsunade?
Very good keep up the good work.
Good, good, good, good
It's not bad so far, keep up the good work
A pretty good fan fiction.
Although, just try your best and support you.
I feel very good, but are there not many books destroyed by Shen He?
Come on author, you will definitely succeed, okay.
It's okay, it's already good for a newcomer to write like this.
It's really good, good luck to the author
How should I put it, if you have the desire to watch it, it's not bad. Personal opinion[Thinking]
Awesome, the author is great, it's a short chapter, please follow me more
It's quite interesting, but some of the settings are a bit problematic, but it's a solid and enjoyable article.
My bestie! Malignant tumors, acute myocardial infarction, sequelae of stroke, end-stage renal disease, chronic renal failure, uremia, multiple limb loss, malignant brain tumors, decompensated chronic liver failure, sequelae of encephalitis, sequelae of meningitis, deep coma, bilateral deafness, paralysis, severe Alzheimer's disease, severe brain injury, severe Parkinson's disease, severe third-degree burns, severe primary pulmonary hypertension, severe motor neuron disease, loss of speech ability, severe aplastic anemia! Read a few more chapters before letting her go!
Author, you can write, the protagonist travels through a parallel world, Naruto is a female, Sasuke is also a female world, author, come on [learned]
The writing is very good. I have read a lot of Naruto books, but this one gave me a different feeling. The ones I have read before were either too violent, intrigued, or mindless. You will have a lot of fun reading this book. The author will also reply to the readers. If you have any ideas, you can tell the author.
The writing is quite good. There are no bad points at the moment. I'll give it a five-star rating first. I hope it won't be written according to the original work. After all, too many fans were in the Ohashi Chuunin Examination and then Konoha collapsed... There are almost no high praises like this. You can try to write some openings by yourself. As long as there are no big surprises, it's okay to open a little by yourself.
The writing is really okay. Most of the fanfics have plots that match the content flow of their own books. In some places, the writing is very bloated, and I have no desire to read it. Even if I like it, I can only skip reading. If the emotions of life are combined with a little original plot, five million words is not a problem, and there are no interruptions or unfinished work, it should be properly rated as a five-star praise [Thinking]
In fact, the number of words could be more so that it feels lost after reading it
Ape, you ruined the group and I have to admit it, okay?
Naruto's nanny, and Naruto appears in more scenes than the protagonist
It's nice to watch, but there's nothing exciting about it. I think we could do something like do something with Dashimaru or do something with Tsunade [laughter]
Okay, nothing toxic so far It feels like the author wants to turn into a daily novel like Dave
Well written, please support it.
It's still fun to watch without thinking about it
Very interesting book
When will I go to Tsunade?
Very good keep up the good work.
Good, good, good, good
It's not bad so far, keep up the good work
A pretty good fan fiction.
Although, just try your best and support you.
I feel very good, but are there not many books destroyed by Shen He?
Come on author, you will definitely succeed, okay.
It's okay, it's already good for a newcomer to write like this.
It's really good, good luck to the author
How should I put it, if you have the desire to watch it, it's not bad. Personal opinion[Thinking]
Awesome, the author is great, it's a short chapter, please follow me more
It's quite interesting, but some of the settings are a bit problematic, but it's a solid and enjoyable article.
Give it a five-star support.
Come on author, you stand up
It's okay. Let's take care of it first.
Well written, support it