CLANNAD: Kotomi's Childhood Sweetheart

It was very well written. I only read Chapter 13, and I am more emotional, so I was made to cry twice. Once in Chapter 8, the protagonist desperately tried to stop Kotomi's parents from going to the airport, and once in Chapter 13, the protagonist shed tears when she felt the love she had always longed for. This scene is almost as lethal as Hanada Roshi crying in Tomoya's arms (because I like CL very much, I was very immersed in watching it, and that's why I was emotionally touched so easily. The moment I saw the protagonist crying, I really couldn't help it, woo woo [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]) Supplement: Chapter 14 when Kotomi learns the truth is also a little tear-jerker [almost crying]

Thank you everyone for watching and commenting If you want to give a negative review, please mention the shortcomings in the book in the comments, and the author will correct them in time. If you have any comments, you can post them under this comment. If you post them in a chapter, the author will not be able to see them [face covering] Hope everyone knows: Since this book has been completed, the typos, wrong sentences, and some disliked plot points pointed out by readers cannot be modified. The author hereby apologizes to everyone QAQ

Come on! I was recently recommended to watch Clannad by a friend. Although I haven't finished it yet, I am really attracted to it. The writing is nice, but a little too short. . .

The author's description of emotions is very delicate. There are too few CL novels. Please do your best.

After reading the first ten chapters, I really felt pretty good. The plot was quite reasonable, and the protagonist had a good personality, and he was able to set up a trap for the domestically violent father. I hope there will be no domestic violence or school bullying in the world. If you read further, you can see that the author's writing style is not very good, and it feels like there is no outline. He writes impromptuly and writes whatever comes to mind. So let's give it four stars.

Marvelous! Marvelous! I'm really Hi! The author's writing is very detailed, which makes me, a goblin, feel very involved. Then, come on, author! Finally, please give me more updates! [Please update]

This book is very suitable for me

The author has his own ideas, unlike other fan fiction authors who only follow the protagonist, but looks at it from another perspective, and the content is also very interesting. At least it's not too poisonous. I hope the author will continue to maintain [love][love][love]

The writing is good, but I can't accept the yandere attribute. I have a friend (this is a real friend!) Who had a girlfriend before who was a little bit a little bit different from what he described. She called more than 10 times a day and even in the middle of the night. She was just possessive. After all, he was disgusted after sharing it. But it looked really good, but I was a little scared.

This is the best "CLANNAD" fanfic I've ever seen, bar none. Personally, I feel that after all, there are very few "CLANNAD" fanfics, and some of them are harems, so it's really hard to keep reading. So keep up the good work, I will catch up to the end!

The author's writing style is very good, the emotional description is very delicate, and it looks very interesting. I read it in one sitting. Please update it soon. It is obviously a good book, but why are so few people reading it?

It's amazing, it brought back memories just watching it. I really liked the second dimension when I was in middle and high school, so much so that I lived my underage campus life in the second dimension. This is the best fanfic I've read this year [Blow Kiss]

After reading it for two days, the ending is indeed rushed, but it does not affect my evaluation of the book. The characters are not deviated, and the overall atmosphere is very consistent with Clannad. I feel that the 5-star review is missing. I hope the author will open a new book soon so that I can keep it on my bookshelf [Blow Kiss] The word count is indeed a little short. To be honest, I didn't even plan to read it when I first saw it. I read it because there was a shortage of books. I'm really glad that I didn't miss this book. Don't read it because the word count is too small. Then you will really miss a masterpiece [Code]

The author's writing is very good, but the number of people in the comment area is better than the last 🍬Especially the one in the front. The protagonist commits suicide, and you still want others to talk about etiquette and so on. Most people who commit suicide have psychological problems. Have you ever seen a normal person commit suicide, or a person with a happy life commit suicide? Actually, what I really don't understand is, are they all watching King Crimson? Or is it true that Japan is a natural idiot? At the beginning, it was said that the main character came out of an orphanage and committed suicide. He is like a passerby who doesn't understand the truth. If you can't write it yourself, what else are you going to read? To disturb other people's moods, right? Then you have succeeded 👍

The character of the protagonist is well established and the emotions written are very delicate. It is a rare masterpiece. This is a redemption, the redemption of a world-weary patient. The protagonist successfully abandons his former self in the company of his friends. He embraces tomorrow and embraces everyone. I was very moved by this book! Thank you to the author for allowing me to see such a beautiful ending! Thanks! !

Sparasi, this is my first time reading CL's novel. The emotions are described very well.

It's nice to watch, the author's writing is good, and it makes up for cl's regrets. The protagonist and Kotomi are also super sweet! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I hope it won't end too early. I had a premonition of ending it when I read the title of the latest chapter: Wedding Dress. Don't end it too early. The update frequency is slow. I understand it during the New Year. I update it two or three times a day before the New Year, but don't end it in a hurry. The worst thing is that you write whatever comes to mind. There are really very few people who write this, and the author is not bad at it. Remember, don't end it, okay author?

Don't have a knife, it's true to be plain and simple

It's a pity that not many people see this.

The trumpet of the author of this book, give yourself a good review, there is nothing wrong with it [Sending heartfelt wishes]

It looks good and makes up for the shortcomings of the original work. The characters are also drawn in a more three-dimensional way. It's just that Kotomi's character is a bit too... But it's still pretty good. Overall it's worth a visit.

I've seen Chapter 41, how many of them follow the main storyline [face covering]

Will there be a knife in the back🔪?

Very good work, but I don't know why the rating is so low

I give you a thumbs up for this rare Tuanzi article.

Come on, author, wonderful stories are waiting for you to present them. The storyline is reasonable and the characters' angles are consistent with the original work. Come on!

Great, looking forward to other if lines other than Nagisa

It's very beautiful, but the rating given by Tomato is too low, damn Tomato

Take a souvenir after watching it, cl is invincible