There's Something Wrong with My Female Apprentice

Not bad, but the author is too short. Also drive slower, haste makes waste. After all, the car next door is overturned, so you have to take it easy. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Three apprentices? I think it's three succubi! [Sinister smile]

This book continues the story of the book where the author was banned [laughter]

This is what a real time traveler should do, not a eunuch [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Good! I have another bag of electronic mustard!

It's so uncomfortable, so uncomfortable, super uncomfortable. I always knew that as long as one apprentice succeeds, the remaining two will succeed immediately, and then it will be the finale. Ahhhhhhh, it's so uncomfortable, but if we are not together, we will always be ambiguous. Even if I win anyone else, I feel sorry for the female apprentice. They were obviously the first. I cried fainting. I feel like this book will be over after a hundred chapters, woo woo woo woo

The people in the novel are all flesh and blood, with feelings and desires. This novel took me to a whole new world [learned] [learned] to challenge masters and rebel against disciples [think]. The characters were lifelike and the story plot was full of ups and downs, making it hard to put down. The author's description of psychological activities is particularly good, making me feel as if I was actually there, feeling the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of the protagonist. Highly recommended to friends who like reading. The author is also very successful in portraying characters. Each character has a unique personality and characteristics that are impressive. ,,,, Oooooooooooo So I took her to the hospital, lined up, registered, and had a consultation. . . After struggling all afternoon. Finally the doctor told me to ask her to go back and drink more hot water... What happened?

The car, it was such a fast car, it almost threw me off [laughing evilly]

Judging from the quality alone, the frequency of words such as charming body, charming voice, pretty face, etc. Is too high and sometimes makes it a bit awkward to read. The writing style needs to be improved, but from a personal point of view, I don't want to care about this anymore. Come on, the author [Top post][Top post]

There is nothing particularly poisonous, only a few minor poisons are dispensable. The male protagonist's character is also good. At least he did not fool the female protagonist into saying something for their own good. There are no very embarrassing parts in the sentences. Although there are flaws, it is considered good among Tomatoes. I have been thinking about whether to give it four stars or five stars. Because it is relatively short and has some minor flaws, I want to give it four stars. However, I feel that this is unfair, because this book has just been published and it is a bit shorter. The flaws are much better than other Tomato books, so after thinking about it, I will give it five stars. Let's see how this book goes in the later stages. If it can be written with this quality, it will be pretty good. Also, the heroine is almost enough. It is best not to exceed 10. More than ten in the later stage will easily miss the heroine, and some heroines will appear once for a long time, which is not good.

It's delicious and I'm a foodie hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Too 6. Why is the rating so low? I almost missed this book

The author must have read it quite a lot. If he is so knowledgeable, it would definitely be popular in other places to find an artist to create a comic. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] The more I watch this, the more boring it becomes

Super pretty! The car is going very fast [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Those of you who gave bad reviews didn't even read the plot behind it [laughing evilly] They often drive in the back, which means Qingyu often drives with them Zuo Ai [laughing evilly] Hope you don't get banned…

I have read this type of book before, and I thought it would be as cliche as before. Unexpectedly, this book seemed quite novel. At least it didn't make me unbearable like before. Overall, I felt pretty good. I recommend everyone to read it. I thought it was fine before, but now I can't stand it. I'm in SS every day, and every chapter has that description. It's really, it gives me a headache [smile][smile]

[Laughing evilly] Why don't you fellow Taoists practice the Heaven-Opening Technique together?

No, why did you enter the dark room?

There are more complex emotions. For example, if you want to write about those psychological feelings, if you want to write them down in a few sentences, and some words like gentle smiles, etc., The author may want to limit the number of words. The main theme of this kind of novel is a kind of emotional drama or battle, and the growth is dealt with in one stroke. At present, I feel that the best order is: improving the relationship (the premise of having a yandere) the awakening of the yandere, the Shura field (possibly) broadening the plot, initial domination of the world (possibly an upper bound) expansion of power (possibly) defeating or subduing the heroine (possibly) there may be mutual emotions in the middle, and there is nothing to say in the following words (only for reference) Recommendation: Reading is good, listening to the book makes my head hurt.

Very good, very good, life is already very hard, I just like reading novels like this that are so sweet that they can make my mouth curl up and make me laugh like an aunt. In the future, you can study the atmosphere of a few romance novels, be optimistic about the author, work hard to update, don't be a eunuch, come on💪.

Dear author, this is the first time I read your book. I feel that you write with good details and describe various characters very delicately. I hope the author can continue to create and let more gentlemen see your works [Sending Hearts]

It looks good, full of desire, and looks very comfortable. It's just that some of the details are not perfectly written, but that's okay. As long as it looks good, that's all. Especially for a person like me who is astringent, I encourage the author, the author is great, I like the author, keep up the good work [love] [laughing]

More people must be allowed to review it. I can't feel uncomfortable like this alone. Let's all have a taste of history.

The plot and character descriptions are good, but I feel that the author is a little vague about the concept of realm. It is like the male protagonist is a being who transcends the avenue in the novel, so the various functions of the body should also match it. There should be no such thing as physical weakness, and the novel Zhong also said that there is an insurmountable gap between each major realm, so with just a few transformed gods, Nascent Souls, and even Taoist companions of the Golden Core, the male protagonist should not be "suppressed" often. Of course, the above is just a personal opinion. Please forgive me if I say something bad or wrong.

The master is also recovering from his madness, but this one uses a straightforward writing style, without writing about tangles of emotions, and everything comes naturally. This writing style is simple and rough, and it is easy for a reader to read. And who said that the harem can't write sweet stories? It would be great if every heroine was written sweetly. Come on, nowadays, most of the stories about time travel and crazy torturers are about how to restore the relationship with the disciple, and then turn against the master and rebel against the disciple. There are very few stories that are as simple and fast as this one. The plot outline is as fast as this one. This book is highly recommended

The author is great, I want it, please code it for me

I really like this book, but it's a pity that it's discontinued [crying]

It's quite interesting, but the writing is a little lacking, the main character and the repeater are, yes, the comment section is going to make me laugh to death. There are many poisonous places

After reading for a long time, the more I read, the more familiar it became. I suddenly realized that if I deleted some of the content in ys Alchemist or albd Age of Festival, this book would be no different from them. If the author updated it on the network disk, it might become a classic like ys Alchemist.

I don't want to explain too much, but I feel good just listening to the book. It satisfies the thoughts that a man should have, and there is not so much fighting and killing. I am very tired after a busy day in reality, so it is good to have this kind of relaxing text.

Except for the emphasis on the original work before Chapter 15, it is all very good. It is definitely right to read Seese [laughter]