Under One Person: What Are You Talking About as a Cultivator Like Me?

Very good. There are relatively few stories about Xia He as the heroine in Under One Person, so I especially cherish every Under One Person fanfic in which Xia He is the heroine.

I can see that there is nothing particularly toxic, the combat power is not too broken, and the story line is quite good. Although the writing skills may not be very good, it is not bad at least there is no particularly embarrassing part. But I still want to say that one of the sentences is Xia He's idea: It's not that she doesn't want to look for him, but because she can't even handle the protagonist, so she doesn't dare to look for others. I still hope it can be changed. The meaning of this sentence is a bit too different. It gives people the impression that if she can cope with the protagonist, she will find another man. This sentence is really poisonous. To be honest, many people will retreat because of this sentence.

No, the protagonist is abnormal! I learned the Yang Yang method, and it was delivered to my door, and my Yang and Yang were not coordinated, so I didn't even eat [shocked][shocked][shocked][shocked]

Very good, come on, this is a very good fan novel

The so-called multiple female protagonists, there are only two now, the author doesn't give Liang [thoughts]

Okay, just don't stop, we'll see what happens next

Come on, author! Keep at it

Come on, come on, come on, come on!

Will the author Feng Shayan accept it? Begging for a response, begging

I would like to give the author a five-star review. Don't say that I am maliciously lowering the rating. Farewell. My life is at stake. Go back and drink a few bottles of antidote to stay alive.

It's not bad so far. It would be better if we just kill the company.

Xia He Lu Linglong Gao Shayan

I feel like I'm watching Dragon Ball and I'm dying to experience the thrill of battle.

So far, it's good. As long as you don't change it later, it shouldn't be bad.

Very nice, but it ended too suddenly

It was well written and very exciting to watch, but the ending was a bit hard to accept, and I didn't go to another world to fuck Shura afterwards.

This is the first time I have read a fan novel under one person. To be honest, the writing is good, the details are good, and I also added some of my own elements. Personally, I feel that the ending is a bit rushed, because some of my own elements are added, and some are better than other worlds, and he does not go to other worlds. Well, how can I put it, the character scale of the protagonist is really good, and he is quite personal. It seems that he only has 4 wives, or two wives.

The ending is also normal. After Luo Tian Dajiao, his stall became too big and difficult to round.

This book is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Take elixirs to upgrade and spend time consolidating the foundation. What did you take? Why don't you just spend time upgrading? Just take off your pants and fart.

Five stars must be five stars! ! !

Come on, well written

Not bad, don't stop, I'll give you five stars.

How come you seem to have seen it?

Okay, I hope it won't break down in the future [Learned]

It's okay, that's it. The author should work hard.

There's not much to say, except that I enjoy watching it.

Five-star recommendation, everyone hurry up and watch it😦, I guarantee it will make you feel uncomfortable.

I rarely give ratings, but when I encounter something wonderful and beautiful, I really can't help but give the author five stars.

Not bad, good and refreshing article! ! ! Highly recommended