Ning Ning is a little goblin who made the mortal world restless in heaven and earth, but then she disappeared.
The Demon Suppression Tower in Kunlun was empty, and she couldn't be found on Penglai's Green Island. The world of cultivation was turned upside down by Master Wuxian, but he still couldn't even smell a trace of her scent.
The Wuxian master Zhang Lanting, who was born in his youth and was astonishingly talented, joined the Wangtian Sect, the largest sect in the world of cultivation, at an early age. In less than a hundred years, he defeated all the uncles and ancestors in the sect and became the leader of the Wangtian Sect and the leader of the world of cultivation.
Such a person who had the best chance of ascending to immortality within a hundred years almost went crazy after Ning Ning disappeared. Even though he saved the day at a critical moment, his cultivation had come to an end. He made no progress in the next ten years or so. He even resigned from his position as the head of the Wangtian Sect and locked himself under the Siguo Cliff at the back of the Wangtian Sect and never left for more than ten years.
Reader comments
I rather like the setting of this book, but I don't really like the time-traveling and time-traveling books. The author is also writing carefully and has worked hard on the writing style, but there is a serious flaw, that is, the plot is too bland.
The text seems to be displeased with mountains. After reading the first part, my desire to continue reading is not that high. The plot is too flat, and some conflicts and reversals are too weak. This is one of them.
Secondly, even if it is just the first big segment, there should not be too few characters, as few as only two people. The characters do not have to be human beings, they can also be some spiritual beasts encountered by chance, or plants that have developed intelligence. Fortunately, when Ning Ning feels lonely, it can lead to the subsequent plot, not just the interaction between the two protagonists.
However, there are also advantages. First, the writing method is similar to that of a TV series, and it has a very visual feel. It is difficult for novels with many narrations and few dialogues to achieve this.
The second is the portrayal of characters' personalities and hobbies. Although this seems to be a relatively common technique, there are still many authors who only depict the character but ignore the description of hobbies (I have always been like this, it's hard to change, I'm worried~).
Finally, there are some other comments, which are not considered advantages or disadvantages.
It's not that there are no titles like Author, it's just rare. But the title plays a big role. Some authors write titles that are a general summary of the chapter, while others use a single sentence from the chapter as the title. The function of the title is to let readers know what the chapter is about. No matter which of the above statements is used, it at least has a hint of the plot. The title is well written and combined with the ups and downs of the plot, the effect is excellent.
Of course, this title belongs to the author's own style, and there is no need to follow the public. Just have your own ideas.
Although the author's level is difficult to compare with those of the big guys, if he can persist in finishing the book, he will definitely gain a lot. I wish the book a great success!
I rather like the setting of this book, but I don't really like the time-traveling and time-traveling books. The author is also writing carefully and has worked hard on the writing style, but there is a serious flaw, that is, the plot is too bland. The text seems to be displeased with mountains. After reading the first part, my desire to continue reading is not that high. The plot is too flat, and some conflicts and reversals are too weak. This is one of them. Secondly, even if it is just the first big segment, there should not be too few characters, as few as only two people. The characters do not have to be human beings, they can also be some spiritual beasts encountered by chance, or plants that have developed intelligence. Fortunately, when Ning Ning feels lonely, it can lead to the subsequent plot, not just the interaction between the two protagonists. However, there are also advantages. First, the writing method is similar to that of a TV series, and it has a very visual feel. It is difficult for novels with many narrations and few dialogues to achieve this. The second is the portrayal of characters' personalities and hobbies. Although this seems to be a relatively common technique, there are still many authors who only depict the character but ignore the description of hobbies (I have always been like this, it's hard to change, I'm worried~). Finally, there are some other comments, which are not considered advantages or disadvantages. It's not that there are no titles like Author, it's just rare. But the title plays a big role. Some authors write titles that are a general summary of the chapter, while others use a single sentence from the chapter as the title. The function of the title is to let readers know what the chapter is about. No matter which of the above statements is used, it at least has a hint of the plot. The title is well written and combined with the ups and downs of the plot, the effect is excellent. Of course, this title belongs to the author's own style, and there is no need to follow the public. Just have your own ideas. Although the author's level is difficult to compare with those of the big guys, if he can persist in finishing the book, he will definitely gain a lot. I wish the book a great success!
Beautiful and funny
Not bad, pretty good