Shoot and Shake************

Although it is a systematic article, it is very close to reality and very enjoyable.

This business empire can spread. It's best to get to know some powerful people, otherwise they will be taken away directly. Don't have too many emotional lines, otherwise other content will deteriorate. The most important thing is to update more [face covering]

The subject matter is very fresh to me. It's the characters' thinking and code of conduct that made me uncomfortable watching it. If the author cannot grasp the plot of the conflict, there is no need to create a conflict. The writing method of plain daily prose is also suitable for this theme. There is no need to deliberately create opposition. For example, with the two girls at the beginning, the protagonist can use some tricks when introducing himself, there is no need to tell the truth. After failing to reach an agreement, it is better for the protagonist to sit and look at his mobile phone and hand over the initiative to the other party than to leave directly. This can make readers feel more comfortable and pave the way for the subsequent plot. The time limit of system tasks is also a problem. What should the protagonist do if the platform limits the current flow. The uncomfortable part of the whole book is that the protagonist keeps giving up the initiative and becomes the passive party.

Brother, please give me one more chapter. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, I beg you. Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter. I will never touch it again. Please, brother, it's really just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. Brother, I kneel down and beg you. The author will add another chapter. I don't mind breaking the guard easily, but a friend of mine may be a little sweaty. He is not feeling well and wants to read another chapter. Of course it's not me. I've always been good at it. I read it with the mentality of a bystander. It won't break the guard. I just want to take care of my friend's feelings. He has broken the guard a little. I suggest adding another chapter. Of course, it's not up to you. I don't feel it. I just feel unfair for my friend. It's not that easy to break the guard.

Come on, this book has the potential to become a hit By the way, when is the update time? There is only one chapter today, bad review Brother, when will you collect it? It's too late.

Come on, update more every day. I have been looking for this type of book recently. Come on, author, I will send it to you in various recommendation circles.

I seem to have seen a movie about mcn before, but it seems that it was cut and removed from the shelves. Don't cut it.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I don't watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I won't play games, Not hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, and being refined into steel, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

It's very beautiful, I really want to watch it.

The writing is very good. The main character's appearance and body shape and the theme of losing weight are very good. It makes it more reasonable to make the main character handsome. MCN themes are rare. You wrote it very well, but there are even fewer. The plot of the novel is handled very well and reasonably. Recently, there are not many people watching because everyone likes to save chapters and read them together. Don't be discouraged, author. Come on, everyone will support the author more. The more people support, the more motivated the author will be to write.

To be honest, it's pretty good and the content is very novel.

Content can keep the pace

New theme, very nice [thinking][thinking]

Come on, author, come on!

This book is okay

Do it quickly, do it quickly, I have read similar books, and this book is the first

A rare good book, with novel themes, vivid characters, and no brainless plot. It made me dream back to the past. I was so sad. I read it all in one go. Please keep updating.

It was a pleasure to read, but it's too short. Come on, author!

I hope the protagonist works hard and buys handsome men from Fat Tiger Brother, and then writes more about emotions hehe

So far it looks pretty good.

Well written and very comfortable to watch Come on, it's very well written. You must stick to it. I don't see any problems. Why did you enter the dark room?

Very interesting, the content is very novel

Others charge for five minutes and talk for two hours, but you only need to watch the update for 24 hours for five minutes.

This damn memory killing of 2018 is generally not bad.

It's so pretty, please give me more of it.

Come on, love watching, the numbers are just a little smaller.

The writing is very good, but why is the score so low? Isn't it true that Tomato can't do anything other than those mindless articles?

It's great, very down-to-earth, I like this type, but there are very few of this type on the market.

Overall, it's pretty good. Although it does have some shortcomings, book lovers can take a look.

This type of novel is quite good, highly recommended