Mortal Cultivation of Immortality from a Broken Kung Fu to a Transcendent One

It's very interesting. Why are there so few people? I've only read more than 40 chapters and can't stop. The author is very thoughtful and the plot is very novel. The only shortcoming is the punctuation marks, some of which are not very appropriate. However, after about forty chapters, the punctuation is no longer a problem, and it seems that the author is constantly improving. I hope the author will write well and I will not be stingy with my praise and savings. To avoid not having to read it after finishing it, I will read it slowly and the author will update it soon. [Shy]

The author has a good idea, come on, write it well, it's very thoughtful, the male protagonist Chu Ge can do it! In the early stage, the author wrote with the shadow of a mortal, but in the later stage, he found his own way. The funny style is not bad. Keep it up, you can do it!

I shouldn't give myself too much praise for the Five Elements. Thank you all for your reading support. I hereby promise that I will continue to update it until the book is completed. Updates will generally not be interrupted unless something major happens, as evidenced by this post. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] This book is written in plain language and is easy to understand. It explains some things in the world of immortality in great detail and has a broad world view. The plot is novel. The opening chapter borrows a little bit from the legend of mortals cultivating immortals. The subsequent plot is completely new, unprecedented, and an absolutely new way to cultivate immortality. If you like it, remember to give it a good review after reading it. Thank you very much. [Smile][smile][grievance] The Ancient Race to the First Secret Realm is about to end. Lu Yun will make up for all his shortcomings in the secret realm. When he leaves the secret realm, he will be like a dragon entering the sea and soaring into the sky. The follow-up will be very exciting. The writing and punctuation in the front are very unfamiliar, and many of the ideas are rough, but the writing in the back is already very smooth. Friends who like it may wish to read more, and please be merciful if you don't like it. I am a new author. I hope that friends who like it will give it a five-star review after reading it. Please like, comment and follow it more. This book has a beginning and an end, and will not be abandoned halfway. However, the profit is very small. A new book is in the process of being brewed. I plan to double-open the next book and polish it word by word, striving to create a fine product.

The plot is okay, the writing is good and the author will keep up the good work! Come on and support you [like]

The book ✍️ is very smooth and I am willing to read it. The plot is coherent and coherent. The characters are vividly written and the coherence is very good. I hope to write more good books for our readers! Thank you author!

It's beautiful and attractive, and I can't help but want to continue watching it.

This novel is currently rated 8 out of 10! Well written! Everyone can take a look! It depends on what the author writes in the future, but don't leave a huge harem! Not good!

The content is exciting and the scenes are captivating.

The characters are vividly drawn, the story has ups and downs, and the writing is quite good. It would be even better if it were updated sooner, hahaha.

Overall, it's okay. The key writing is good. It's up to you, the author of the storyline, to edit it. Small flaws are unavoidable. It's still a long way from being a masterpiece. If you want to come up with a masterpiece, you'd better spend more time polishing it. To what extent does the work as a whole belong? It can best be described as a bottle of bulk wine. It is definitely better than the mass-produced goods.

The plot of the story is neither too fast nor too slow. The story of a mortal cultivating immortality is very interesting but the progress in the early stage is too slow. The progress of the current story of cultivating immortality is too fast. This one is good. Among the new treasures, the protagonist Lu Yun started his sect after entering the secret realm of "Ancient Road to Immortality". At this stage, he is still in the process of practicing and improving his cultivation. Let me explain: the "spiritual consciousness" of a Qi Refining monk can only sense the fluctuations of spiritual power, but cannot see it. For example, if there is no spiritual power in a mortal body, the "Spiritual Consciousness" of a Qi Refining monk cannot detect it. Only monks at the Foundation Establishment stage and above can cultivate their spiritual consciousness and be able to see objects on the basis of sensing the fluctuations of spiritual power. When Lu Yun understood the power of the rules, he went crazy and became obsessed. When he was about to die, the little green bottle forcibly woke up and spent several years of recovery power to condense a drop of the source fluid of creation. The awakening vision of the little green bottle shook the three realms and countless alien spaces, and also heralded the alien catastrophe that would come soon.

Although opening a path is a bit cliché, it is not bloody and more in line with common sense. A very good article on farming.

Good, very good, very good. Good job, author, keep up the good work.

The novel has clear logical thinking and exciting content.

Very well written. There are fusions of predecessors and there are also innovations of our own. Very exciting, looking forward to the follow-up works.

The voice is clear and the storyline is good. The more you listen to it, the better it gets.

The characters are vivid and vivid, and very brilliant.

The story line is clear and the priorities are clear. It is an excellent work.

Each character is vividly created and has his or her own merits.

It's another path to becoming a talent for cultivating immortals with five spiritual roots. It's a good read!

Very beautiful, logical and step by step. Support

This book is very nice. Thanks to the author for the daily updates. Give the author a thumbs up and a thumbs up.

The plot is very rigorous and there is not a single nonsense word in the whole story. Very good

I have been looking for this novel for a long time and this novel is indeed my cup of tea. I am very grateful to the author for his wisdom! Five stars, must be five stars!

It's my cup of tea, it's too much fun to watch, not enough to watch at all.

The scene is described in detail, as if you were actually there.

The author works hard and the content is exciting.

It was slow to warm up in the early stage, and the personality of pig's feet is in line with the normal personality, and it is worth collecting

Step by step on the road to immortality, I like the author's writing style, it's so beautiful

A very interesting fairy tale novel with great imagination and flowing plot. I like it.