Li Ze was unlucky enough to time travel to a sick man who was used as a sacrifice. He had just arrived, was unfamiliar with the place, and was weak, so he had to stay in the hospital to recuperate...
Reader comments
It's very interesting to watch, and the character of the protagonist is very good, giving people the feeling of a truly peaceful and wise immortal cultivator. It really makes people feel a pity that he was forced to time travel. The feeling of layers of fog at the beginning is really well written and very immersive. Bisexuality was originally a world view setting. After this setting, it felt a bit like an Abo world view, a bit like A's need for O. Therefore, although there are people around who are kind to the male protagonist, he still feels very isolated and helpless. However, the surveillance and peeping are not as exciting as described in the copy, maybe the plot is not there yet.
Looking at it now, the writing is really good. Except for the feminine feeling that is inevitably brought about by the bisexual setting, some people may be angry, but the writing is very real and interesting. Anyone who is not particularly outrageous can enjoy it qvq
Let me tell readers about the situation. The distribution of this work has been stopped. It needs to be overhauled. I don't know how long it will take. I have already modified the changes requested by customer service, but the review submission cannot be submitted. I am still asking customer service.
A lot of details need to be changed in the front, the dialogues will be modified, and the grades related to schooling will be changed during this period. The main plot line remains unchanged, and the previous changes will not affect subsequent readings. The plot goes as it should. If you need to go to the sea front, go to the sea front. I will come back in a smooth way, don't worry.
It's okay, but maybe it's because I don't like AO settings.
I think I should have seen the scene where the protagonist attacks the stage, but I don't know why but I just can't stand them both.
Here are some personal thoughts
I feel that the protagonist Gong is attracted purely because of his physical constitution, and the protagonist also has to be with him for family reasons. Some of the close contacts between the two of them not only do not have that ambiguous feeling, but instead give me a very depressing and hypocritical feeling. This feeling is so strong that I wish the protagonist could be uniquely beautiful.
I've read a lot of pornographic books, but this one made me feel like this
I'm not saying it's not well written, maybe that's why I don't like settings like AO romance.
It's okay so far, I didn't intentionally torture you, but you should be careful not to deliberately limit your ability to be tortured in the later stage to get that sense of CP that is nothing.
In fact, I think it would be best if Gong is a mountain god. The other substitute players are hard to describe. The players currently on the field are all bloody participants. The sense of sight of the prize (receipt) after the divider wins, and luxurious garbage.
And the mountain god helps the scumbag Shou as soon as he appears. Shou is his only believer, which makes it even better.
Moreover, the strength of other substitute players does not seem to be worthy of Shou. Shou is still practicing and is very slow. There is no need to press for too long as he will feel tired. At least he must have some strength as an adult, otherwise he will not be able to run in the later stage.
I saw the latest chapter and found it quite interesting. First of all, the subject matter is novel and the setting is quite good. Secondly, I am involved in disputes with multiple men (although I feel very aggressive now). You can refer to the stock buying article, but I still like 1v1. I look forward to updates [laughing] [shy]
It's pretty good, come on
The content is not very popular, but I still insisted on reading it. I wanted to know the final ending of the protagonist, so I finished it,,, but no more,,, Fortune tricks people,,, cry,,, in short, I still like the content of this book [cry][cry]
Come on, the author is so awesome! ! ! I will always pay attention to you! ! ! ! ! !
It looks good, the specific feeling is closer to reality, and the feeling is also very novel❤️❤️❤️❤️
It's very beautiful. I think survival and dignity are more important.
，，，(๑óò๑)[]
I really like Zeze's way of doing things [laughs][laughs]
It's well written, the plot is good, the protagonist is bisexual, but it doesn't hinder his character and the tenacity of his soul [Sending my heart]
Really good
Looks good, keep up the good work!
Looks good, cheers for you [sending heartfelt wishes]
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I love Double Star so much
Great novel, very good to read, recommended to sisters.
It looks good, I like it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, it's very unique♡(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ
I love this book so much, but I just sigh that I can't go on with it. It's a bit regretful [grieved] [almost crying] [almost crying]
Do you want it to be so short?
It's better to be stronger, otherwise it would be too suffocating. Overall, it's good [shy]
1. The character description feels very special and the psychological portrayal is delicate.
2. The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are also very interesting.
3. The arrangement of clues in the plot is very attractive.
Woohoo, I still want to read and write quickly
It's great to watch [eat melon], but I can't get enough [admiration] [crazy]
I like the protagonist's character very much. It would be great if it was finished. It's such a pity [Love]
Why? Why? Why is this so? Why don't you just finish [crying][crying][crying]
It's very beautiful. I didn't expect it to be gone. I feel like the author must also believe in Buddhism.
It's very interesting to watch, and the character of the protagonist is very good, giving people the feeling of a truly peaceful and wise immortal cultivator. It really makes people feel a pity that he was forced to time travel. The feeling of layers of fog at the beginning is really well written and very immersive. Bisexuality was originally a world view setting. After this setting, it felt a bit like an Abo world view, a bit like A's need for O. Therefore, although there are people around who are kind to the male protagonist, he still feels very isolated and helpless. However, the surveillance and peeping are not as exciting as described in the copy, maybe the plot is not there yet. Looking at it now, the writing is really good. Except for the feminine feeling that is inevitably brought about by the bisexual setting, some people may be angry, but the writing is very real and interesting. Anyone who is not particularly outrageous can enjoy it qvq
Let me tell readers about the situation. The distribution of this work has been stopped. It needs to be overhauled. I don't know how long it will take. I have already modified the changes requested by customer service, but the review submission cannot be submitted. I am still asking customer service. A lot of details need to be changed in the front, the dialogues will be modified, and the grades related to schooling will be changed during this period. The main plot line remains unchanged, and the previous changes will not affect subsequent readings. The plot goes as it should. If you need to go to the sea front, go to the sea front. I will come back in a smooth way, don't worry.
It's okay, but maybe it's because I don't like AO settings. I think I should have seen the scene where the protagonist attacks the stage, but I don't know why but I just can't stand them both. Here are some personal thoughts I feel that the protagonist Gong is attracted purely because of his physical constitution, and the protagonist also has to be with him for family reasons. Some of the close contacts between the two of them not only do not have that ambiguous feeling, but instead give me a very depressing and hypocritical feeling. This feeling is so strong that I wish the protagonist could be uniquely beautiful. I've read a lot of pornographic books, but this one made me feel like this I'm not saying it's not well written, maybe that's why I don't like settings like AO romance.
It's okay so far, I didn't intentionally torture you, but you should be careful not to deliberately limit your ability to be tortured in the later stage to get that sense of CP that is nothing. In fact, I think it would be best if Gong is a mountain god. The other substitute players are hard to describe. The players currently on the field are all bloody participants. The sense of sight of the prize (receipt) after the divider wins, and luxurious garbage. And the mountain god helps the scumbag Shou as soon as he appears. Shou is his only believer, which makes it even better. Moreover, the strength of other substitute players does not seem to be worthy of Shou. Shou is still practicing and is very slow. There is no need to press for too long as he will feel tired. At least he must have some strength as an adult, otherwise he will not be able to run in the later stage.
I saw the latest chapter and found it quite interesting. First of all, the subject matter is novel and the setting is quite good. Secondly, I am involved in disputes with multiple men (although I feel very aggressive now). You can refer to the stock buying article, but I still like 1v1. I look forward to updates [laughing] [shy]
It's pretty good, come on
The content is not very popular, but I still insisted on reading it. I wanted to know the final ending of the protagonist, so I finished it,,, but no more,,, Fortune tricks people,,, cry,,, in short, I still like the content of this book [cry][cry]
Come on, the author is so awesome! ! ! I will always pay attention to you! ! ! ! ! !
It looks good, the specific feeling is closer to reality, and the feeling is also very novel❤️❤️❤️❤️
It's very beautiful. I think survival and dignity are more important.
，，，(๑óò๑)[]
I really like Zeze's way of doing things [laughs][laughs]
It's well written, the plot is good, the protagonist is bisexual, but it doesn't hinder his character and the tenacity of his soul [Sending my heart]
Really good
Looks good, keep up the good work!
Looks good, cheers for you [sending heartfelt wishes]
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I love Double Star so much
Great novel, very good to read, recommended to sisters.
It looks good, I like it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, it's very unique♡(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ
Beautiful(♥∀♥)[almost crying][almost crying][almost crying]not enough
Haven't you read it yet? Is it 1v1? Shuangjie?
I love this book so much, but I just sigh that I can't go on with it. It's a bit regretful [grieved] [almost crying] [almost crying]
Do you want it to be so short?
It's better to be stronger, otherwise it would be too suffocating. Overall, it's good [shy]
1. The character description feels very special and the psychological portrayal is delicate. 2. The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are also very interesting. 3. The arrangement of clues in the plot is very attractive.
Woohoo, I still want to read and write quickly
It's great to watch [eat melon], but I can't get enough [admiration] [crazy]
I like the protagonist's character very much. It would be great if it was finished. It's such a pity [Love]
Why? Why? Why is this so? Why don't you just finish [crying][crying][crying]
It's very beautiful. I didn't expect it to be gone. I feel like the author must also believe in Buddhism.