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After reading Chapter 8, I think you should have graduated from kindergarten, what a mess!

Not only are there typos, but even the most basic sentences are not fluent, making the reading confusing.

Too many typos

The sentences don't make sense, there are too many typos, and it looks difficult.

I can write a book about anything. Now, when I was a child, my parents raised the placenta.

Is the author a foreigner? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Elementary school students can write better than you, but they don't understand what they mean.

The sentences don't make sense and are confusing, this is the writing style of a primary school student! ! ! I worked very hard to read Chapter 16, but I just couldn't stand it anymore. It made me angry! ! ! I really hope that the author will carefully smooth out his articles when he writes again! ! ! Hope it gets better and better! !

I have read no less than 200 Siheyuan books. This is the first time there are so many typos. They keep repeating the same paragraph. It's just a patchwork of words. It's rubbish.

I'm irritated. I didn't watch it for long. I was very interested in watching it, but I was so confused by the content that I couldn't regulate it. The content was messy, the scenes were confusing, and my head hurt.

I really don't understand why the front and back of the courtyard are not matched. Although the golden finger is good, I can't continue to watch it.

It has been verified that it was written by a human and a computer. Repeat the poison points on each card. A pig is written as a flower. It can feed a family for several days, then it can feed a family for a year, then it can feed a family for a lifetime, and finally it can feed a hunting team for several years. Then there is the deaf mother-in-law and the deaf grandma. This stuff is 100% written by humans and machines! Even if you are a novice, you won't be able to write it like this! Yi Zhonghai is written as Yizhonghai, and Siheyuan in Sijiucheng must be written as "in the capital"! [Laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

Just remember to read this book without thinking. Don't take any with you. Because this is mindless writing, don't compare it with the TV series. Because it's not the same at all.

What are you writing about? , Find a factory to drive screws, I can't even read it straight.

No one is as good as a primary school student. In the 1950s, silver was used and flour was made from rice.

What the hell? It's okay if the character's name is wrong. The sentences don't make sense and I can't understand it.

What the hell is this written about? It's completely false. Did you have mobile phones in the 1950s? Did you still make phone calls? What the hell is that?

What is it written about? Is this a courtyard house? Why do you feel like a bastard!

It's quite rubbish, the plot is messy, and the characters are expressed in rubbish. Either you just jump out of it, or you can be more detailed. I really don't know what to say.

In the third chapter, some people are wrong, talking nonsense, and using wrong words.

Read a few more books and then learn how to write novels. You can't read them here.

The name is pretty good, but the content is in vain.

There are so many typos and there is a language barrier

Everything I wrote was full of typos and the sentences didn't make sense.

There are so many typos. It was written by a fucking robot.

My predecessor committed suicide by drinking pesticide. Did that stuff exist in the 1950s?

The writing is messy, with a hammer here and there.

After reading less than ten chapters, I can't tell the truth.

Difference! ! ! ! ! ! !

I haven't watched the TV series. Jia Xudong was brought up by Jia Zhang, and they are about to get married 50 years ago. How could Jia's father still be there? The protagonist's character is dark and extreme, and it's not interesting to read. Other characters have nothing intrinsic except disgust;