Oops! the System Pays Out Money on Time, so You Can't Spend It All

It's very good-looking, I was almost fooled by the rating. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

To be honest, the writing is good and deliberately bland, but even with this feeling, I can still read it.

I really like the type of heroic novel, it grows slowly like fighting monsters and leveling up, and the heroine is portrayed quite well! I like it very much. It's a powerful novel with a system and multiple female protagonists. It fits my xp very well.

Well, I haven't written a book review for a long time. After reading more than sixty chapters, I couldn't help it. Overall, this is a relatively slow-growing novel, but the author has written each stage more completely and in place. With this praise, I feel that the author has a strong sense of structure and writes very realistically. The section about school bullying is really memorable. The writing is very good and can be directly used to deal with real-life campus bullying. After reading more than 60 chapters and the part where the brothers are reunited, I have a strong feeling of a down-and-out literary youth. I feel that the author should be between 25 and 38 years old. In short, for now, this rating is sorry for the writing style of this book. I gave 4 stars because I heard that five stars cannot improve the overall rating.

This label of Shenhao's novel turns out to be not thorough enough. You can change the label. It will still look good if you don't read Shenhao's novel.

The real life of getting rich is much better than the brainless tycoon article. The rating is low, so cheers for the author!

As a bookworm for ten years, I like the freshness of I Love You. I don't like the kind of cool articles that give the host a certain amount of money or a house and a car as soon as they come. It looks boring. The characters depicted feel flesh-and-blood and full of emotions. The writing is very good. I hope I can read more.

What a coincidence, my surname is Shen, and the names of the cousins ​​of the protagonists in the book all match up with the brothers and sisters in our family. I even suspected that the author was from our side. My cousin is Shen Yong, my cousin is Shen Fei, my cousin is Shen Yan, and I have another cousin named Shen Jian [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Let me start with the conclusion: it is worth recommending. It is a rare plot and routine in the system god novel that is not bad street. The same routines and plots are really unsightly, but this plot finally gives a different perspective and rhythm. It stands to reason that such a good subject matter as the System God Problem should have wider space. I hope to see more plots as rich as this one in the future. My only complaint: A lot of the plot was not written, and it ended before the pitfalls were filled. Although it is not a hasty ending or a bad ending, it is still unfinished and I want to continue to see the follow-up development.

What happened to Yu Yao? The author forgot about this person? Don't mention it without beginning or end?

Very good, it fits what I want

The writing is good, and the current situation and helplessness of beaten workers are clearly seen.

The writing is very good, not so exaggerated. The girls' writings are all in place, reflecting their own inner activities, and also writing about the love between brothers and parents. This book is still worth reading. I suggest you not to write too much, just a few. It will depend on your performance in various walks of life. Struggle is definitely inevitable [laughing and crying]

It's okay. Tuhao writers don't like to read about emotions, and they have to write about emotions and they have to be scumbag. I personally like the kind of emotions where everyone gets what they need. It's more realistic and comfortable, which is in line with Shuangwen's point of view.

In the first half of the plot, the characters are all good. In the second half, the four girls have all become love-minded. Most of them are talking about the entertainment industry, which is not as exciting as the previous part! The last few chapters are pretty good, quite satisfactory! !

It's so beautiful. It turns out that you can live very comfortably with only 60,000 yuan. I'm so envious! I have to work hard to make money, and when I earn 60,000 yuan, I will also enjoy life!

It's a good subject matter, but it's a pity that the author's ability is limited, and the transition from front to back is uncoordinated. Many things are just mentioned in one stroke and there is no follow-up. I hope that I can write carefully in the future and write a possible future.

Different from stallion stories, it is very well written. It is impossible for the protagonist to have a powerful mentality and temperament from being a loser. Step by step, I personally think that this is the mentality that a normal person should have when he gets the system! Although the ending is a bit messy and the seven-star doctor robot hasn't even had time to use it yet, I still give you five stars, come on!

Really good, recommended by a ten-year-old bookworm! ! ! The protagonist is passionate but not romantic, affectionate and righteous, which is very refreshing but a bit close to reality. The character mentality is constantly growing. People have many thoughts a day, but not everyone has obsessions. As a day passes, only the present is the most important. I recommend this book. There are very few books that I can read patiently.

Some flaws but overall good Forget it, it's seriously off topic, and it's a waste of such a good subject. I live for your buddies every day, why don't you give me some girlfriends?

A real sense of immersion. . . I won't spend a disgusting sum of trillions at every turn.

It was pretty good, but the ending was a bit rushed. [Laughs][laughs]

2024-10-28 14:08 Monday The whole book feels good. The best part is the last chapter. It feels like it should turn into the first chapter. It's a different beginning. I also want to see the stars and the sea! Looking forward to the follow-up! Finally I want to say something: I love Zhao Liying [blowing kiss] I wish you good luck in writing!

This is the last best book I've ever read by Shenhao

It's really good to watch. I finished reading it in one go. The characters and characters are all very three-dimensional, which makes it look like a picture. The writing style is very good, and the overall work is well organized. Although there are some minor flaws, they are insignificant. Overall, the review is excellent. The plot has come to an end, probably because of too many parallel imports and bad reviews, but actually it looks really good and can pass the time. In fact, I can continue to write sequels, there is still a lot of room for development.

I will follow this book to the end. It is rare to see such high-quality divine novels on Tomato. It is relatively positive in terms of overall outlook and values, and it is also in line with the psychological changes of many people towards sudden wealth. Compared with other great novels, this book is indeed written more closely to life. Good luck to the author!

I actually finished reading it, please update soon! And fill the holes dug It feels pretty good, why are there so few updates? Don't let it end, don't cut it in half, don't not update it! ! !

The best Shenhao novel I have read so far. Full marks. Others gave it a low rating. I'm really sorry for the author's writing style.

The author's writing style is very good, and the psychological descriptions of characters from all walks of life are relatively objective, but the author should not forget that what he writes is a heroic novel, not a romance novel! Too much emotional foreshadowing is a big mistake, and too many male and female emotional descriptions of the protagonists even lower the rating. The reason why a good article is a good article only requires appropriate emotional resonance. Too much emotional elaboration will be counterproductive and make readers feel unhappy! Five stars are a recognition of the author, not the novel itself. Come on

The portrayals of several female protagonists are very good, vivid and vivid, and the emotional lines are also good. The only thing is that they are not all included. Yu Yao and Wei Yingying are a bit regretful. The descriptions of relatives and friends are also very good. In a family, everyone gets along well with each other, which is quite good. I cannot say that it is 10% good. An 80% is still okay. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. I personally like this book.