Showbiz: Selling Ice Sugar at Sky-High Prices, Did Uncle Dong Break the Law?

The author is also true. For the sake of plot, just write the misunderstanding in the first 10 chapters that corresponds to the title (misunderstanding that Uncle Dong is really involved in Tang Dynasty and then clearing up the misunderstanding). There is no need to write about the rest of this rock candy. The rest can be written according to the divergent thinking of the acting roles given by this system or the golden finger. If you write it like this, it will easily make people think that you wrote this book just for Uncle Hei Dong. In this case, it would be strange if the score is not low! 😏😏

Your writing style is still too messy. As an old bookworm and a writer, you are too subjective. The book written in this way is full of pitfalls, and it is easy for people to see a feeling of "self-righteousness". It really takes a lot of practice to write a short paragraph without paying attention to the end, but I still hope that this book will be a journey on your journey of experience, and you will gradually get better.

The plot is interesting, but the content of the article is inconsistent (it was said to be unsystematic at the beginning, but later there was some kind of charity feedback system; it was said at the beginning that it had played Qi Tongwei, but then it was said that he had not). In addition, the reduction of intelligence was a bit too much. Why did it just stop updating it in the end?

What do you think of a narcotics police officer? Bundle. . It's so stupidly written.

66.67.68 What are these 3 chapters written? They are written in a blind way.

The subject matter is novel, but not enough to watch.

@ A cotton slipper ya

I think this novel is still very good, keep it up 👍

This title is okay, but I feel like the pacing is too full and it's always watery

In two words, rubbish