Oops, the World of Cultivating Immortals Has Been Penetrated by the Heroine

Here I come! I have been waiting for this book from another book. I am so happy. I finally met my Ranran again! [Love][love][love]

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I really like this book. Originally I was attracted by the novel subject matter of the first book, but later I simply fell in love with this book, Ranran, Yaya, Xiao Qingqing and Shigure. Now the second part is also playing steadily. It is very interesting. Xing Wen and Ye Lang are also two very interesting people. I hope more people can read this book.

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Overall, it's pretty good. The writing style of the first step is relatively continued, and the characters are quite interesting. There are some parts about the pets, especially the piranha, which feel very cute. However, in the last dozen chapters, the plot is a little incoherent, and it feels like there is something unfinished in the middle. Well, after reading it, I think it's okay. The 7.1 Rating feels that it could be a little higher. In fact, he originally scored higher in my mind, but because of his last battle between immortals and demons, there were some deficiencies in the battle that made me feel uncomfortable, so I still deducted some points. There was a feeling that the author was unable to follow up. In addition, the previous part was still very smooth, but the battle continued too coherently, which sometimes made people a little tired after watching it for a long time. In fact, what impressed me most in the article was that the author's views are quite good. The description of women and the like are quite comfortable, and there is nothing uncomfortable about it. At least there is nothing uncomfortable about the characters and descriptions. It is more in line with my basic requirements for a strong female novel. It does not deliberately match up, and there is a bottom line in the behavior. I personally think that the description of women's suffering and other things is more appropriate, not too much, but It's not offensive, and I can see the basic logic of the author's desire for women to become stronger. I really feel that the main deduction for this article is that there are some description deficiencies that may be due to the author forgetting to publish the article, but overall I don't think it's any worse than those so-called fairy cultivator articles with a score of 9:00 or so. On the contrary, some of their articles made me feel a little uncomfortable. This article generally gives people a more comfortable feeling, and I look forward to the author's other works.

I watched the first part and came to watch the second one, but the ratings weren't very supportive.

Really beautiful I feel that this world of cultivation has a unified and synergistic force towards the outside world, which is really different from other countries that try their best to describe the world of David and Goliath.

The long-awaited new book, I believe it will be wonderful

Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ah ah ah ah ah [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Looks good, good luck 💪

Come on, the author is great [sending heartfelt wishes]

Finally saw Ranran

I read the first part of this book about ten minutes ago and said that I didn't remember it at first.

I'm going to open a book now, I can't get enough of it [Like] First of all, it was because it was very interesting when I read the first novel, and the plot was also very good. After reading the first novel, it was so gripping that I felt that it shouldn't be finished so quickly, so I followed it to the second version of the novel. Wow, it's really great to continue the first book. I hope the author can come to the world of gods. I also want to know their follow-up story, but I still feel like it's still unfinished. Get one up, middle and down.

I hope the author will stick with it, I really like this book [please update] Come on, author, don't give up! I really, really like this book (//∇//)[Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Why is the heroine's sword called Zhanchun? The author cannot put Do you want to be more domineering?

Why does such a beautiful book have such a low rating? I caught up with this one from the top. I feel it is really good and it looks good, but there are too few updates.

I have read both books, they are good and I like them. I like the female protagonist.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking It's very interesting. I'm still following the first one.

Good looking, good looking, good looking😍😍😍😍

It's over, it's time to start a new book

Super cool, looking forward to the next one

I've been following the book from the first book to now. How come I only have this little score? It's a full five points! [Cool]

It's really good. It's not as bad as other reviews. You can try it.

Damn, when will the third part be released?

What, what are you doing? I haven't updated for several days. I haven't seen enough.

It's great. Will there be a third book in the future?

I hope to carry forward the style of the previous work and make persistent efforts.

It's really good-looking, no CP heroine story

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking