Hongmeng Merchant

It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was about the male protagonist traveling through the heavens, and the timeline was so fast, but I didn't expect that I felt comfortable all over after reading it. 1. The author depicts the characters very vividly, allowing me to see the character's personality. 2. The author did not, like many novels, directly top up the male protagonist's cultivation level at the beginning, nor did he over-exaggerate his cultivation level. It was not until later in his cultivation that the strength of his cultivation level was revealed. 3. In the article, the male protagonist also serves the country and the people, which fills a lot of my regrets about history. Finally, I wish the author's writing will become more solid and this book will become more and more popular.

Very good, that's what the author writes. Don't mess with other readers. The author writes according to your ideas. As long as it doesn't deviate enough, it's ok? If you keep writing at your level, there should be more than 2,000 pictures.

The male protagonist of the author travels through many times and acquires many beauties The heroine invites Yue Lianxing, Shangguan Begonia, Dongfang Bubai, Ren Yingying, Yue Lingshan, Zhou Zhiruo, Zhao Min, Xiaozhao, Wang Yuyan, Huang Rong, Xiaolongnv, Plum Orchid, Bamboo and Chrysanthemum, Li Qinglu, the teacher's concubine, Xuan Shi Qingxuan, Shang Xiufang, Li Han Yi Xuanyuan Qingqiang Nangong Servant Xu Weixiong Empress Shuiyun Ji Nine Saints Ruxue Yan Fei Moon God Da Si Ming Shao Si Ming Zi Nu Nong Jade Flame Ling Ji Red Lotus Snow Girl Xiao Meng Blue Bird Sweet Potato Cheng Ling Su Shui Ling Guang

Although the writing style of this book is average, the writing is novel and the timeline is not that fast. I think it is pretty good.

Don't you want to talk about Zhang Sanniang's invitation to the moonlight in the palace outside the show? Why is there no Zhang Sanniang in the rouge list?

Just one word: cool

Are you going to Qin Shi Mingyue?

Can the author break it down into paragraphs [face covering]

Everything else is good, but there is a problem with the realm. Zhang Sanfeng's Golden Immortal cultivation level is this a low-end version of the Golden Immortal?

There are some places where I can write a little bit about that...

Good writing, keep it up

The Empress of Huanyinfang

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