Lost Forever: I Will Eventually Become a God

Come on, I'm counting on you. The author, I really like it. I feel that both the protagonist and the director have good personalities, and they don't look as shabby as others. It feels very gentle and optimistic. Like a normal person.

It's good to watch, and the story of Lost in Time is actually pretty good. This fanfic can actually be said to have improved the readability of the story, and then lowered the threshold. It's quite comfortable to read, and the main character's ability is not super-model, which is a positive point. However, the protagonist's character is a bit too thin. It doesn't matter that the characters in the original work are thin. After all, it is a fanfic, and the characters in the original work will be more familiar. But to be honest, the protagonist currently doesn't feel that three-dimensional to me, and it may be my own problem. In short, the plot insertion is reasonable, and the logical illogicalities about the protagonist's current situation that I had been wondering about at the beginning were smoothed over by the conversations between Langley and the director in the following chapters. The original protagonist is not a backdrop, and the story logic is self-consistent. The original character did not become a female puppet who serves the plot and the protagonist due to the "interference" of the protagonist. In addition, the writing style is of a good level. As long as the author remains at this level, it will definitely be a masterpiece in fan fiction. However, Lost in Time is a bit niche after all, and the data may not be that good. I can only say that I hope the author can persevere.

I think the writing was okay, but the plot felt a bit too rushed. It's like trying to advance the plot in the book as quickly as possible to be consistent with the main plot of the game. Also, the author hasn't updated in a few days. The previous updates were almost once a day. The author doesn't want to stop updating, right?

The author should update soon, Whole Tomato is such a good novel about wandering around in time (✪▽✪) There are only a few novels in Tomato that are about being lost forever. I have also read a few others. Compared with the others, I think this one is better, both in terms of the description of the protagonist and the plot.

Come on, author, keep up the pace, it's a masterpiece!

Not bad, it's rare to find a fan who is lost indefinitely

Wu Qi's only masterpiece so far!

One of the few indefinite fans

Wuqi is the most beautiful fan I have seen so far, and I will reward you with the popularity that Wuqi deserves [sneaky laugh] Come on, the author, I wish you three golds in a row in the new year, the limit is full, and Sister Du Ruo will also take it home.

The protagonist's personality is okay