Fate: What If Kiritsugu Summoned Shining Shining

[Facepalm] I have to say that this is the nth time I have posted this book review. My book reviews are all invisible. I don't even understand why. [Facepalm] I have wanted to write this book for a long time. Kiritsugu summoned the Golden Sparkle. This is a question I have been thinking about. [Thinking] The character setting of the novel will respect the original work. Masters are welcome to comment and complain [Blow kiss] Is there any kind person who would like to give me a book review? [Crying] The friend code of FGO was posted in the book circle. Friends who play FGO can play together [laughing]

I hope you can keep up the good work and get the four people who went astray, Kotomine Kirei, Emiya Kiritsugu, Kenneth, and Weber on the right track. The rematched Servants will all interact with the rematched Masters. It's great. This will be twice as good as a masterpiece.

It can only be said to be a good book. The author is very imaginative. He not only expresses his feelings, but actually writes them. The writing is very good. At least some of the knives have good endings. It is a book that can be recognized

There are not many Fate fandoms, and there are even fewer high-quality ones. This book is a good-quality article written while ensuring the character design. Compared with other fandoms, it is more to my liking. Come on, don't stop.

Although there are some parts I don't like, most of them are well written. I won't care about the fire. It makes me feel like something has changed and something hasn't changed. The characters basically don't have OOC, but they still look like the original. I got what I needed to knock, and what I didn't hit seemed to be nothing. It feels good to look at it this way, but why are there not more extra chapters [smile]... I read novels to entertain myself. For the sake of making me feel good, I will reluctantly give you a five-star rating. I hope to publish some more excellent fan works.

Well written. The lineup is reversed between good and evil. But it can still melt back, and the design is not too stiff. It's a pity that some things are not available. The Emperor's deep friendship with Director Ken is not to that extent. The Trial of Three Kings became the Trial of Two Kings. Lucky e's Lancer has a much better ending than the original but it's still miserable. And that part. Lancelot recalled the glory on the lake, and Gill recalled the flying battle flag, which really amazed me. By the way, will you write about the Fifth Holy Grail War?

To comment, I personally think it is a very good fanfic. Here you can see different masters meeting different servants, and the intertwined new story lines allow people to see the different possibilities of the characters. However, I still have to complain that Director Ken is a bit inconsistent with the original work, but the flaws are not concealed. It also allows us to see a new possibility of Director Ken. In short, I still like this book very much, and I hope the author's next book will not disappoint me. Looking forward to it (*°∀°)=3

After reading it in one sitting, it is the best fatezero fanfic I have ever read. Each one has a happy ending, so satisfying! All the original regrets have been filled, especially the author's confusion of servants and masters, resulting in many strange combinations. Hehe, watch Red A and Kiritsugu meet in the fourth battle! I like! Illya and Sakura's happiness! I like! I like the ending between Director Ken and Sora! And Guildre, who has been darkened, turns back into a marshal! What a great book!

It's a great fanfic. There are no extra-standard forces coming to cause trouble. It's just a simple exchange of character positions to lead to a better future. It can be completely regarded as the fourth battle if line. I just like to see this kind of awareness and brilliance of humanity. At least Chase Papa will no longer be as neurotic as in the original work, and the second flash will not be as disgusting as the flesh flash.

It's very good, the progress of the plot is very interesting, and there is no OOC, making it very enjoyable to watch. High praise and recommendation! Although it is not without its shortcomings, overall it is very good! Ah, although I have seen other people's book reviews saying that Kirei's character is not outstanding enough. At first I thought that it might be because Mapo didn't appear many times in the previous chapters, so I didn't have a good chance to portray it, and I wanted to see how it goes in the future... Looking at it now, it is indeed like this. Although I have only seen fate/night, I always feel that the character of this priest is quite eye-catching. Also, attached is a void emoticon package (Why is this Mapo boring? Jpg) Come on, author, at least the characters of Shining and others and their reactions when they face some things are well-shaped (this is also difficult to control)

It's great that the same people can come up with such new ideas by just changing the combinations (and it does give the characters new future possibilities). Is the author interested in trying a few more combinations (although it is a challenge to the ability to innovate) Seeing that you were writing in such a hurry, I thought it was about to be finished. It seems that you still plan to write about the five battles, right? [Thinking]... Ah, no, it turns out you really want to end it [shocked] That's a bit rough to be honest [laughs awkwardly]

Although there are some flaws, it is undeniable that this is one of the few excellent FZ fics from Tomato, and it feels like it could be pulled out as an active chapter [face covering]

A true Fate fan, the author is familiar with the plot, the plot is ingenious, and the characteristics of fate that ridicules the world but also redeems and educates the world are vividly described.

😭😭😭 Oh my god! Tomato actually has such quality fanfic! The boss wrote it very well! I've always wondered what it would be like to exchange heroic spirits during the Fourth War, and I was very lucky to see the boss's work! Oh my gosh, it's such a masterpiece. I can't get enough of it. Why is the article so well written and so restored? Will my wife publish similar articles like this again? I really like this If line! My heart felt warm after reading it. It was really good to read. I felt so empty after reading it. I begged the goddess to write something similar to the If line. It was good for four and five battles. I want to see more exchanges of heroic spirits! Mommy is hungry for food. If it comes out, I will definitely praise the teacher as soon as possible every day. It's so awesome that the goddess is hungry for food😭😭

I can say that this is the best fate fan novel written on Tomato. It has no system and no ability to mess around. There is basically nothing out of the ordinary in the character restoration. It feels like the style of Mushroom's original work [laughs]

There may be some minor issues with the character design, but the plot is very good, keep it up!

It was well written and I read it in one night. Although Sparrow is small and well-rounded, it involves several characters and has a relatively complete growth arc. The only bad thing is that Mapo's final jump seems to force the world line to be closed.

This is the second novel about feta that I have read

I think it can be used as the if line of battle 4, the logic is completely fine

At the same time, a Holy Grail War was also going on in another parallel world. Lancelot, who was originally a Berserke agent and was summoned by Matou Kariya, was killed by the opponent in a battle with the outsider Cuculin Byakuya. Then Cukulin Byakuya took Lancelot's place and responded to Matou Kariya's call. From then on, the strongest Master and the weakest Servant in the history of the Holy Grail War were born.

Very good, I feel like I can contribute to the official fate [laughs]

The characters' personalities are quite restored, and everyone has their own ending. It's very interesting. I hope the author will make more updates.

I like it, it's good-looking, but it's a bit short. Should I write about the five battles?

Very novel subject matter, very reasonable plot, I really like the way Shining portrays, proud to live, proud to dissipate.

The highest quality fanfic currently

A very interesting rewrite of history, the key is to complete the book

A very good book worth reading

For me who has read fz and fsn and also knows about fgo, this book is really interesting. The fanfic written by the author is not as illogical as others. I hope other people who are interested in fate fanfic will read this book. And I finished reading it in one sitting, it was really smooth.

It's great. I read it in one sitting. It's an excellent fanfic.

It's a good story. As an old moon man, I feel excited ~