Villain: You Asked to Break Up, So Why Are You Crying Over My Change of Heart?

What do you think a level 4 warrior can beat a level 9 warrior saint [cover face][cover face][cover face]

I originally didn't want to give this book one star, but it needs at least two stars for Tomato. 1. One panel per picture on average. I hope the author is clear. Tomato readers mainly want to feel good when reading novels. To be fair to the author, you are feeling good. I will give you a network delay. Do you like it? 2. The strength of the battle is so low. The male protagonist kills the grandmaster when he is only at level 4. Will he go to heaven in the future? 3 This novel is a villain novel. As far as I am concerned, I read this kind of novel just to kill decisively. I can only say that it is relatively rare for the male protagonist to be so useless as the eldest son. The above are only my own opinions

① Hydrology, make up the number of words ②Harem Stallion Story ③Fighting becomes too big as you move up the levels. ④Character creation is unsuccessful ⑤There is nothing to say. The author remembers to change the tag. I only read stories without CP or single-female protagonists that successfully create characters.

I hope it will be a single female protagonist. If I see multiple female protagonists in the future, I will quit.

Dry! ! What a first family! ! ! If you are at level 4, you can fight for level 6, and if you kowtow to become a disciple, you can be at level 7! ! Readers can throw away the book🧠, but the author doesn't want yours🧠🧠🧠🧠 either? ? ? What's more, I have a lot of 9- and 8-grade products, but I still want to worship the 7-grade ones, which are made from gannet! ! ! This is my first time posting on 🍅🍅 to troll the author! ! The real special code is disgusting. A 7th grader can only be considered a high-level thug in his own family, yet he kowtows to become his disciple! Bainima's teacher! ! !

Too much nonsense, the system can appear several times in one chapter

I thought it was okay at first, but when he reaches the fourth rank and goes against the ninth rank, it is outrageous. Whoever reaches the ninth rank is not a genius. The family still doesn't care about him. He doesn't even protect his calf. I don't know how he is such a coward. He goes against the will of heaven.

First of all, it's really watery, second, the plot is cliche, and third, the characterization is unsuccessful. The above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. The plot is so awkward that I could dig out a castle with my toes.

Not only is it messy, but it is also a bit short. The story about Jie Hu's acquaintance with the harem is not mentioned. The protagonist of the book is dead. You should at least write about the process of those harems before killing them. For example, write about the process of Liu's illegitimate daughter's return to the family. If you don't write about what you do about Jie Hu's harem, you might as well just kill those harems.

I am also drunk. There are too many typos and there are too many nonsense words. Too much nonsense is fine. Cultivation is as slow as a snail. That is a small world, not even Xiao Qian. The author, the strongest taboo in this book supports S, that is, the three-ring great soul master, the most. It seems that the writing is very good, holy shit, in fact, the martial arts of the two worlds are different for the weak ones. They were forced to move it, and you can move it as much as you want. There are also those old routines like Xiao Xiaozhan, etc. It's a mess. Can't you write something new?