The Outcast: Taking in a Young Xia He from the Start

After reading three chapters, I found that the male protagonist should be a good person, which is very good. I don't know what's going on now. The male protagonists in the fanfic all wantonly express the evil of human nature like the people of the motherland. Good people who have a bottom line and are decisive are more suitable to be male protagonists. Speaking of this book, if it is a single female protagonist Xia He, it will be a killer. If there are multiple female protagonists, I hope that I can save the second high school student Zhuang and Chen Duo in the early nine years. After all, the main reason for reading fanfics is to save Yi Nanping. Come on. After reading it briefly, I agree with the author's ideas very much. Mi Er has built a huge world view, why does it have to follow the plot of the original work? In this worldview, you can design original plots. The author is very good, and Xia He doesn't need to join Quan Xing, which is also a good comment. Many other fans have obviously saved Xia He, but they still insist on letting her join Quan Xing. They really can't write without the original work. But there is a suggestion to integrate the settings of other anime, but do not integrate other anime into it. So far, this book is the best fan fiction I have ever read. Come on, I feel like I can publish a full-length novel this time. I look forward to the author's million-word testimonial.

The writing is very good, keep up the writing✊, the protagonist is very smart, I personally feel that there can be more female protagonists, after all, it has traveled through time, at least two updates a day, no unfinished work, no eunuchs

The Golden Light Curse is a secret method of Longhu Mountain, which is more likely to cause trouble. Why not practice the third level of rebirth, beautify and nourish the face, which is also a dual cultivation of life and life? In addition, it only has these three hundred skills? Have you smoked it before? It can't be a new player, right? It is impossible to perfect the cultivation method of an innate alien, but it is possible to combine it with mutation to reverse practice and reshape the innate third level of rebirth and Xia He. Also, this should be considered a cool article, after all, the content is really ordinary.

It seems pretty good so far, but there are still some bugs in a lot of things. For example, it was mentioned at the beginning that the protagonist is an old player. Maybe many common skills have been used before, but what will happen if they are repeated? Is it to improve proficiency (more practice will be written later to improve proficiency) or to increase stars? Is it turned into skill points or gas filling? There is no way that all three hundred draws except for the two Eight Magic Skills can be counted as wasted draws. Otherwise, the game feels too low in playability, and it would be weird not to shut down the server. Generally speaking, I feel that the early setting is still a bit incomplete. It takes several months for the protagonist to practice the Sky Splitting Palm, which is worse than Xia He's talent. Even if the Eight Magic Skills are sent to the protagonist's face, it will be difficult for the protagonist to practice. Without skill points and experience points, I really don't know how the protagonist can compare with the old master (there is no way Shuangwen will not fight with the old master [laughing]). From the current point of view, even if the protagonist practices for nine years until the plot begins, it will be difficult. With limited talent and limited energy, I really don't know what the use of hundreds of skills is. Maybe Zhang Lingyu can just rely on the Golden Light Spell to fight the protagonist. He has been practicing for more than ten years, but you have been practicing for nine years at most (until the beginning of the plot). The talent is higher than you, and the person is hardworking. If you don't have it, Xia He will probably be in trouble. Unless the skill bar is upgraded later, or a comprehension level is opened, the writing rhythm is good, but some problems are really difficult to ignore. This is just a bit of personal opinion, or maybe I haven't read too much and don't know what the author's future plans are. Don't suggest it, it's already at the forefront of Tomato fandoms, come on! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

The writing is okay, but there are a lot of flaws, but it's still good [shy]

It feels okay. Come on, author, it meets the requirements in my heart. If the book does not have a long idea, the author can write the overseas chapter quickly and go back as soon as possible. There is still a lot of domestic content. Don't write the foreign chapter until you finish it.

Originally, there are very few fan fictions under one person. I just want to keep it for everyone. Just write more about daily life and interesting things. It's very interesting. Come on, write more and don't finish it so quickly. Heroine Feng Baobao. Can it be done? Can it be done? [Send heartfelt]

Personally I think it's very good, and the positive protagonist is pretty good too. I hope the author won't describe doing good deeds as doing stupid things in the future.

It's okay. It's one of the top fanfics among the Under One Person fanfics. It's just too little. I read it all in one go. Please update it soon.

It's good to read, I hope the overseas chapters will be well written later.