Genshin Impact: Journey to Teyvat I

Since no one has commented, I'll go ahead and give my book five stars. [Please read carefully] If you have any comments or suggestions, you can comment or leave a message [Send your heartfelt thanks]

The writing is very good, and the IQ and logic are all online, especially the argument against Paimeng is well-founded [laughing evilly]. The first volume is very interesting, but the second volume is a bit bland. Yingmei is too invisible, there is basically no emotional description, and she just follows the script. It's either sweet or sharp, and it's better to be sweet and sharp at the same time. For example, the first time you fight with Ying, the protagonist saves Ying who made a careless mistake and blocked the knife for her. Ying's sister felt distressed [almost crying]. Then, Ying went to Haizhi Island to fight the stragglers without telling the protagonist because the protagonist was injured. When the protagonist learned about it, he chased after her regardless of the injury. Ying was rescued, but the protagonist almost died. My sister is even more distressed [almost crying] [almost crying], but this kind of plot should not be too much, otherwise it will appear too deliberate. Watching too much of the invincible protagonist's exciting points will make you a little tired, and the struggle of a small character is more interesting. The most fearful thing is that once the protagonist's strength rises, he will start to grab the microphone and make decisions, causing the heroine (original protagonist) who should exist to become a background. Of course, the above is just my own nonsense. I don't want to teach the author to write a book. I respect the author's creative ideas. The author can write whatever he wants, and don't mind too much what the readers think. I'm just a little unhappy that I didn't see the heroine in the second volume. After all, I came here for the heroine. If there was some drama, I think it would be more comfortable to watch. Finally, I don't understand why the author cares about and changes the clothes of each girl. Isn't it good to maintain the original work? Old-timers like it the most [laughing]

When will Ying and Baiyun get together?

To evaluate, the book is still good and the plot is well-organized. However, it always feels that it is too fast. Mond, Liyue, and Dao Wife have many plots to write, and there are many characters that can be enriched, especially the emotions are too fast. And the author left a lot of foreshadowing. If the plot was slow, it would definitely be a good book. But the plot is fast, and I feel like I missed a lot. Can we slow down?

Speed update, no big problem so far But that feeling of closeness

Okay, the heroine is a girlfriend. When will the author confirm the relationship?

The writing is very good, the author will update soon [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good to watch. The plot hasn't been changed much. It's the style I like. However, the way they call each other after the relationship is established is a bit too intimate and I'm not used to it. I still prefer calling each other by their first names.

The writing is very good, and the interaction between Bai Yun and Ying is also very interesting.

The writing is quite good, but it's just not satisfying enough [laughing and crying] It's undeniable that it's really good to watch. I read the latest chapter in one day. Also: I hope it will give a good ending.

It's not bad. It's similar to the one I've read. They're all of the relaxed and aesthetic type.

It's so well written, I feel so comfortable reading it. The male protagonist's character is not as disgusting as the others. But can you divide the paragraphs into points? I skipped the long parts [face covering]

The xp party means that the competition is high!

Not bad, pretty good.

Very interesting, thank you to the author!

Not bad, why is there no one [what]

It's a pity that Paimon was forgotten by everyone in the end. Will Baiyun know?

It's good to watch, the original plot is okay

A very good book, the author is great, come on

The single female protagonist is pure love, the female protagonist is so cute, the protagonist has a sense of boundaries, and there is no other messy ambiguity. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's quite interesting. It's fun when Bai Yun and Paimon bicker. The protagonist's experience is also well written.

It's very good. The characters of the protagonist and the original character are well described. Kudos to the author.

Good, very good, very good, keep it up. I hope the protagonist's power will gradually improve and make up for some regrets. After all, he is the creator.

It's well written, I mean don't let it suck. I like you as the author [laughs]

It's a very good book. I don't want to say that I don't have a knife anymore. I just hope that I can have a he.

This book deserves a five-star rating (o^^o)

I think it's pretty good-looking, not that radical and not that conservative.