The System Gives Me Immortality, and I Conquer the Nine Heavens with My Sword

This book is well written, approved by a bookworm of almost 20 years [smirking] At least I didn't jump to the end to finish it. I hope the author can keep writing.

The impression is okay. Now it seems that there is nothing poisonous about it. I have to say that Chen Dong really created a genre. I have seen similar restricted areas in too many books. The Great Emperor and even the red-haired monster paid tribute. Hahaha. His old age is unknown [laughing evilly] I think Chen Dong is the one who will really be unknown in his old age.

This Immortality-style book is well written. The male protagonist's system can pick up attribute points on corpses to remind him. There are many system articles about this kind of thing, but the author cleverly avoids the matryoshka-like upgrade method by changing the map and plot. This is mainly reflected in: in the early stage of this article, the male protagonist works as a jailer in Tianlao and collects corpses to obtain attribute points. He changes the map and joins the Immortal Cultivation Sect and goes to the Sword Tomb to collect corpses to obtain attribute points. Then he changes the method of obtaining attribute points, such as fishing for law enforcement, luring the king into an urn, sitting on a mountain and watching tigers fight, and other strategies to collect corpses to obtain attribute points. I hope the author will write more than 1 million words. It is not recommended to label the male protagonist as a savior. Since he is immortal, he should do whatever he wants and be unrestrained. The prerequisite for solving the crisis of the human race must be in line with personal interests. I am commenting and have spent more than 10 hours reading this book.

I personally think it's okay [laughing], I'm not trying to flatter you, don't scold me [currently working on the manuscript] I can't stand it anymore after seeing it, so I insist on accepting a disciple [face covering] [awkward laughter]

It's very beautiful. Brothers, please read it carefully. It hasn't been updated yet. I don't know. The update is too slow. Please hurry up.

Overall it looks great, but has some holes. But overall it can be overshadowed

I think the plot is okay, the protagonist is invincible, the pace is relatively gentle, and the characters are quite fleshed out.

The plot is smooth and the main line is clear and has a beginning and end. The map is grand and the sea of ​​chaos in all the worlds and there is an ultimate BOSS. The writing is delicate and the words are sharp. It is worth watching. However, the dozen or so disciples he recruited did not match the character of the protagonist, and the portrayal was not full enough. One or two good supporting characters were enough, and the emotional line was relatively weak. Qin Yue's sense of existence was almost nonexistent. Worth a look and a five-star recommendation.

Good-looking, cool writing, laid-back, that's it. . Either I am accepting a disciple or I am on the way to do so. I saw that in chapter 158, I have already accepted 6 disciples. Did the author not forget to write an article about becoming stronger by recruiting disciples? [Chigua]

Young newbies who like to fill cups will like this, but experienced ones will have a lot of troubles. Changing pictures, finishing things, pretending to kill, finishing things, and looping. In fact, infinite nesting dolls are boring and visually tiring. Erha looks cold and cool on the outside, but is crazy on the inside. The characters who are different from the outside are actually annoying, and writing is not easy to support and encourage [sending heartfelt]

Cool article, it's good to be able to write it like this

Let me give you a real review. According to my opinion, this book should be a 3.5-Star novel, but it is still good as a refreshing novel. If I don't like it very much, I will give it four stars. There are three major shortcomings or flaws in this book. The first one is that there are too many disciples, which is not bad. The second one is that the realm is slightly broken and the suppression in the Great Sage Realm is too harsh. The third one is that so far, I have been injured and ran away twice. Although I have not written an invincible article, I still feel a little uncomfortable. Overall, it's a pretty enjoyable article, and I enjoyed reading it. I give it four stars.

It's quite good. It belongs to the semi-shuang style. It is somewhere between affectionate and ruthless towards its own people and absolutely ruthless towards its enemies. The disadvantage of the setting is that most of the attributes come from the human race, so it is difficult to improve quickly and it is too troublesome. In the human world: humans, monsters, devils, and ghosts should all have attributes. The main theme of this book is human nature. The number of enemies is too large and killing is not a good idea. There are not too many opposing ethnic groups to the human race, so the only way to kill the human race is to kill the human race. It feels a bit too deliberate. Overall, it's very good, and book lovers can read it.

Nice looking and neat! The plot has constant ups and downs and climaxes. The map is large and worth a look. As for the heroine, there is too little plot. By the last chapter, the relationship has not been confirmed and it is just a secret love. I can still accept the lack of CP. The main content of the whole text is to constantly improve the realm through fighting. Note: It's too much to say goodbye!

Awesome, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch!

Awesome, this book is first-rate in system literature, but it is not a system text. It explains the origin of the system reasonably. Thumbs up! Recommended reading for old bookworms! Invincible articles that you can stay up late to read [snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker]

This longevity article is the real longevity! Invincible all the way! Other longevity texts have various restrictions and suppressions... Contradictory individuals

So far so good

In fact, this book only has three stars. The writing is average and the plot is not particularly attractive. However, I still give it four stars. This book attracted me at all. It has no ink and invincible writing, and I like to read this kind of book.

Although it is a kind of matryoshka doll with infinite cool stories, what I like a little bit is that this book ranks immortals higher than gods. I feel very unhappy when I read so many books in which gods are ranked higher than immortals. This time I finally encountered it. If you like reading cool stories, you can read it.

It's really super good-looking. Brothers who like to watch invincible killings and decisive killings without female protagonists should hurry up👍

How should I put it? From the perspective of the basic martial arts in the early stage, there are traces to be followed in the middle and later stages. I thought it was quite unexpected when I read it completely. In the end, the origin of the system was actually quite shockingly explained, and there was not too much about the earth. Anyway, the progress was a bit slow in the early stage when the protagonist was developing, but later on it was very good and very satisfying.

The writing is good. The author's ideas are generally good, but some places are too omitted and the writing style needs to be strengthened. However, as a debut novel, it has surpassed many others. Generally speaking, my evaluation is that you can read it but don't go too deep, and don't chew it too carefully. Just treat it as a transition between Shuangwen fast food and fine rice noodles [I understand]

Later, when I went directly to the immortal, I didn't go on consecutively. It felt like ghostwriting, and suddenly I reached the immortal all at once.

It is a good book. The subject matter is based on immortality and adds some corpse picking and one's own things. It is also an innovation. The character creation mainly focuses on the protagonist, and the description of his disciples is a bit inappropriate. The plot is quite good, but the foreshadowing is buried too deep, and it is buried a little late, and the twist is a bit abrupt. Overall, it is good and worth recommending.

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I have read the first 50 chapters so far, and as a 30-year-old bookworm who came from novelists such as Jin Yong, Gu Long, Liang Yusheng, etc., I think it is okay. What I have seen so far is a development line that uses system immortality to pick up experience to upgrade, and can easily express freedom and do whatever you want without being regulated by the world and upgrade while killing.

It looks so good, but it's just too little. It's so short. Can it be faster? It's not enough to look at.

It's a truly invincible article that doesn't sell dog meat by selling sheep's head to dog meat, and doesn't hide anything. Just constantly changing worlds and universes to show off and slap in the face, but the same plot follows [smile]

I hope there is no woman in my heart who draws the sword and the God of Nature kills and kills and turns the world upside down. Five-star reviews will be updated until death.