Crimson Box

The storyline is wonderful and the characters are relatively complete, but the span of the plot is too big. Especially when Aoi erases the memories of people in school, I feel that there is a big gap in the story. Moreover, Aoi's character now gives me an indescribably weird feeling. I feel that Aoi's character has changed too much. I can refine the character. Of course, the writing is still very good. Please give me a lot of support~ [Love]

Each one looks good when taken individually, but if you read them together, it will feel very messy. The author's writing is very good, but the plot is too messy. As an old reader, I can't understand it at all. The author has left too many holes. From Chapter 5 to Chapter 69 (I have now read Chapter 69), many holes have not been filled in, leaving many questions for readers. There are too many fragments in the article, and some parts require careful consideration before you can understand it. However, many people read novels and just glance at them, and few people pay attention to those details. This leads to people who really want to read the novel not being able to understand it, and people who specifically want to complain about it carefully read it. There are many flaws. But there is no doubt that the author's writing style is very good, but the readers of this article are too general. Only those who have read this book can understand his meaning, and there is too little summary of the main line. Although writing too much of the main line may make many readers who have read Bungou Stray Dogs impatient, if this is the case, it can also ensure that some readers who entered the book because of the title or introduction (who have not read the original work or similar fan fiction) will successfully become fans of the book. If you skip some dialogues and so on, you will lose these fans. All in all, this is a very good article, but the plot is too jumpy. The author has the potential to become a great writer, but the plot still needs to be changed. After all, you are not writing a suspenseful detective novel. As long as the character design is not too brainless, no one will come to complain that the character is too stupid (not to mention not deviating from the original character's personality, thank you). The above are personal evaluations and comments. I understand and appreciate it lightly.

I don't quite understand why Mrs. Haowen's names are so confusing to people. Highly recommended! Go and see it (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)

It doesn't fall into the clichés of other novels, which is pretty good.

Looking forward to the next plot.

It's rare to see a well-written literary novel on Tomato 😭 I really cried to death

Anyway, I think it's very good, it's pretty good to watch, the character setting is also very good, and the emotional aspect is also well written. It's just that the events jump a bit fast and there needs to be a transition. The rest is very good.