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I beg you in the next paragraph. Author [grievance] [grievance] [grievance]

The new sequel, please wait and see us tonight. We look forward to watching it. Recently I re-read what I wrote before, and suddenly I felt that some of the language was verbose, the words were inappropriate, and the punctuation was wrong. But in my new writing, I immediately reduced the errors.

Okay, the writing is pretty good.

I really like the yandere feeling in the first dozen or so pictures, that's when I like love. But in the back... And the sweetness in the back made me see... I believe that the male protagonist hates her and is pretending not to be tortured. Let's have another female protagonist, or not have one. The ending is okay. I look forward to the author's updates! Come on!

Author: Not many people have read your book. The reason is that it is not divided into sections and there are too many chapters.

It's okay, it's too cruel, the male protagonist didn't feel sorry for anyone who was beaten like a dog and still didn't die.

Ok, good author, please work hard and I won't treat you badly.

It's too difficult to see the front of Five Star Bar But it will be fine from chapter 40 onwards. The author added fuel to the fire and invited me to dinner.

The author's writing is quite good, but it's not divided into paragraphs, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read, so I reduced one star. Overall, it's not bad.

It's pretty good-looking.

Path of Suffering to Grace

The author's writing is great, and the four-letter word "high culture" was thrown in my face as if it was free of charge. There is also a wonderful feeling that the author writes about yandere with a super positive outlook on life.

Hope to return to single female protagonist drama

It can be pretty good

Fine. No one left?

The content is good, but the author doesn't divide it into sections. It hurts my eyes to read it.