Beaten and cursed at, Ran Ran was made to wash clothes by the river in the dead of winter by her adoptive family, just because she was so hungry she stole a steamed bun. They wanted the cold to teach her a lesson, and she nearly froze to death in the snow.
Luckily, Ran Ran’s biological father arrived just in time and rescued her while she was unconscious.
When she woke up, she found several handsome older boys gathered by her bed.
Big Brother: “Ran Ran, are you okay? Come on, I’ll take you to buy toys.”
Second Brother: “Hurry, let’s see if you’re hurt.”
Third Brother: “Come on, little sis. I’ll take you out for something delicious.”
But they didn’t know that their little sister was a true genius, with abilities far beyond the reach of ordinary people.
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Well written, keep it up!
The writing makes people want to keep reading, but the plot needs a little more polish, and the potential is quite high.
It's so annoying. Why do you have an adopted daughter? Why didn't you just kick her out from the beginning?