After Traveling Through Time, He Cultivates Immortality in the Magical World

Tomato is a rare high-quality product. It's hard to find such a book. The author should hurry up and type. After reading it, you have to find the next one. Now the time to find the book has almost caught up with the time to read.

The development of the storyline is okay, there is no breakdown in writing, and the rationality is still online. The characters are fairly well-drawn. After watching it, I am still looking forward to the next plot. More than 90% of novels.

It's painful to watch once a day. Put it on the bookshelf first and look at it next year

It looked okay from the beginning, but I didn't like Eudora's confession. It was probably a harem story, but I liked that there was no heroine, and it felt a bit abrupt when the heroine came. There was no love at the beginning, but I fell in love with her after running around with her in my arms. So I give 4 stars. Now that I have read more than 50 chapters, I feel that this cultivation of immortality is like borrowing from fantasy cultivation to create a cultivation system in the magical world. What it currently feels to me is less like cultivating immortals, and more like the protagonist's cultivation method is more intense than others. There is also the author's explanation. It is actually unnecessary. Whether it is cultivation of immortality or magic, it is fake. There is really no need for the author to explain. It seems that a lot of words are watered down. The current realm is also a realm of magic.

I wanted to give it four stars, but I didn't because I only read the first part. Still like that, Qingmei is indeed a poisonous person. She swore not to tell and you really said it. It's amazing. Even the heavenly oaths in the world of cultivating immortals can be exploited. Not to mention your powerless oral oath. Cultivation of immortals is a dimensionality-reducing blow to this world. As long as you haven't grown up, you will be doomed once someone discovers it. I didn't know that the protagonist had lived two lives and was close to 40 years old. It was incredible to be able to do this. A few years ago, your first picture would definitely have been called Rebirth and Return, and you were stabbed by Qingmei and others, and then died unwillingly. In this life, you will take back everything that belongs to you and kill those who betray you. [Eat melon][eat melon]

It's really well written, with this flowing water texture among the many tomatoes, this book is really fresh and refined. An unconventional story line. A protagonist who is not vulgar. I think it's okay, really, I think it's really okay. From my personal point of view, I wish there were more emotional lines.

It's quite good, overall light-hearted and humorous, with multiple female protagonists, and the logic is okay. It doesn't feel like a matryoshka doll. It's a novel that you can finish reading.

It's okay. It's quite novel. I haven't seen anything like this before. I hope the author will keep updating and not be slow.

Currently 297 chapters. What attracts me most about this book is the power system, which feels very rigorous and logical. The plot and characters are also okay, but the scene with his childhood sweetheart is a bit weird, but the rest is very good and deserves my five-star rating.

I must give 5 stars if I write it myself

Having read this book earlier, I would have already opened up the Ren and Du channels.

I like the description of the protagonist exploring the path of cultivation.

It's pretty good. In fact, apart from being unserious, I can see that the author really wants to describe a system that is different from the traditional system of cultivating immortals. It is generally biased toward magic and souls. This kind of setting is more Western fantasy (connecting things). The principle is energy, but as a Western fantasy novel, it seems that the purpose and sense of story are not strong (I can't seem to find an explanation for the underground city). As for this golden elixir (Let me review it for a while)

The idea is good and the introduction is attractive, but the harem is not handled well. Especially the first one, the oath has no binding force, and it is so easy to reveal the foundation of one's life, even if it is a Taoist monk who practices traditional immortality, it should be helpful to him.

It's the type I like. It's well-founded and interesting. The disadvantage is that it updates slowly.

So far it's pretty good, but for me one of the few shortcomings is that my favorites are orcs and elves. When can I have a werewolf girl and a white-haired elf? Please! For the sake of giving five stars, please write quickly. I have been into this trap since the 20th chapter. I hope there will be an elf heroine. Now that I have read almost 200 chapters, I still don't feel uncomfortable.

When I started watching it, I thought it was pretty good! How come the score is so low? After reading Chapter 60, I understand a little bit. I remember a book said that the five major needs of human beings are the first physiological needs. Earlier, the protagonist was still having trouble eating for his mount, which gave him a headache! Now it jumps to the point that if you want to solve a problem that even Dharma God cannot solve, this is no longer the third social need, it is already the fourth and fifth need! But, in fact, the abyss is invading, my hometown is far away, and my fiancée is chatting at school for five hundred gold coins at a time. Your second security need is huge. Many locations ahead are working hard for safety. Suddenly, he interfered in other people's private affairs and spoke strangely to the Dharma God. Are you really not afraid of death? ! ! ! ! ?

The subject matter is okay, but he suddenly tells her about the cultivation methods and teaches her how to practice, and his own strength is not that good.

A very interesting setting, which seems to be a "magical" interpretation of the "immortal cultivation" system; there is also a comparison of "Chinese and Western cultures"; it can also be seen that the author has an "obsession" with "Xiao Wu"! ... Like it. But... There are really not enough to read. The author will update it soon [crying][crying]

The writing style of this novel is very beautiful, every sentence is carefully crafted and every paragraph is full of emotion. The author uses various rhetorical techniques, such as metaphors, personification, symbols, etc., Making the whole novel full of poetry and artistry.

Halfway through the movie, the three heroines Dongfang Jing Xiaowu and Eudora have appeared. Although everyone says that Eudora is a poisonous character, I think Eudora is the most successful and realistic character that the author has created so far. Dongfang Jing and Xiao Wu are the classic female protagonists in Shuangwen. They have a strong background and unrivaled strength. They are brainless and kind to the male protagonist, and have a particularly good personality. I don't reject this image, after all, cool articles should write about these template heroines. But as for Eudora, from her awakening as a child, it can be seen that this character is inherently inferior and pessimistic about herself. There will be little thoughts, and she will even be secretly happy when she knows that the succubus will not live long. There will be a sense of crisis when you see the male protagonist become stronger. But he has never done anything to betray or hurt the male protagonist. On the contrary, he is still working hard to improve himself and try to keep up with the male protagonist. But because the author didn't give her enough roles, she thought that it was unnecessary for her to have a distinctive personality and be poisonous.

I still agree with the author's writing ideas. Before time travel, he was not an outstanding person. After time travel, without a very strong golden finger, it is impossible to beat the local creatures and be superior to others. The descriptions in this book are more realistic and really well written.

93 Points or above. It looks comfortable and not toxic! The logic is also smooth. Unlike some spicy novels, the more you read, the more you feel aggrieved and the more you read, the more useless you become.

Give it 5 stars to support it, but if you don't accept girls for a while, you will accept several girls. I suggest you don't add more people, otherwise the harem will usually collapse.

Not bad, this doesn't feel like cultivating an immortal, it feels more like a dual cultivation of magic and martial arts combined with acupuncture points

I only posted this book review after reading 200 chapters. I personally feel very good about it. It's not like Golden Finger becoming a mindless murderer in one step. Through thinking, understanding, and summarizing, it climbs to new heights step by step. It's very interesting to watch. I feel that the rating of 8.3 Is indeed low. It should be a potential stock. If the author handles the plot and writing more delicately in the future, it will not be a problem. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it [laughing] [top post] [please update]

I quite like this book. The main reason is that the logic is clear, especially on tomatoes. Most of them are fast food. It's delicious, but it doesn't stand up to scrutiny. In the early stage of this book, I felt a bit like a jobless reincarnation, a different world with a sense of immersion. However, in the middle stage, the writing power was not enough, and I started to advance with leisure and SeSe over the main line. However, I opened new maps several times and they were quite distinctive. Plus, I also like to watch SeSe [laughter] However, the last copy went from the fake immortality cultivation system in this book to a real (perhaps semi) immortality cultivation system. The span was too big and the integration was not very good. In addition, the results were not good and the ending was hasty. But at least the author has a conscience, at least there is a beginning and an end. The ending throws out the outline. The pitfalls of the main plot are basically filled in. I didn't take into account the branch plot, but I understand it. I hope the author will publish another book of this type if he has a chance in the future (remember to kick me if it comes out @White Finger) [OK]

Lin Li, Dongfang Jing, Xiao Wu, Eudora, Christine, Dongfang Kerr, Youfei, Ye Zi, Kitty, Lily, Yu'e. The whole book is okay. Although the ending is a bit fast, it is very reasonable and there are no big problems [Like]

The novel is not bad, I like it, hehehe. I like magic the most.

The subject matter is good, but the description of the skills is too detailed and cumbersome, leaving little room for the reader's imagination. I hope the skill descriptions can be simple and easy to understand. Each skill only has a few hundred words. If you don't know, you might think I'm studying the game.