A cringe-worthy relic from my past. I was forcing myself to write angst for the sake of sounding profound, just blindly following trends, back when my mind was immature and my thinking was still hazy. I tried to report it and take it down myself, failed, and then completely lost it.
Even stylistically, I was determined to churn out memorable lines, so every sentence was some bizarre attempt at sounding grand.
There are some truly awful original poems in there, and it's so pretentious. At the time, I was an arrogant wannabe intellectual.
Also, I'm not really into BL anymore (to put it politely). People change...
So what if it was my first novel? Isn't that what a first novel is for? If I say this dark chapter never happened, then it never happened. Still, this book really is terribly written.
I once tried to make peace with my past self, then reread the whole thing and nearly got dizzy.
I'll say this, and I don't mean it as an insult: isn't this basically The Legend of Da Qi?
Combining martial arts and dual male protagonists, the subject matter is exciting, the writing is also good, and the character creation is very successful. High praise!
Without further ado, I would like to recommend it. In this era when there are countless articles on the Internet, the subject of martial arts is indeed becoming more and more niche, but the heroes are happy in the world and act chivalrously, and they still have the feeling of true nature between joy, anger, sorrow and joy. Rejoice! It's not a coquettish love affair, it's the love, hate, and hatred of children in the world! The author seems to be a martial arts fan at first glance, and his writing has that feeling. Highly recommended.
It's a very interesting story, and the protagonist is very open and sincere in both attack and reception, never being coy, which is refreshing! Gong is affectionate and jealous, but the author has a good sense of proportion. Gong is jealous but will not lose his mind because of jealousy. People will never get tired of this jealous little jar. I particularly like this type of person who is free and easy with a hint of divinity, and I also particularly like this kind of frank and tacit lover relationship where they can say whatever they want and fully accept and agree with each other! Moreover, the main line of the story is also very smooth, with a strong Jianghu charm, and there is no problem of being mysterious or digging holes, ahhh, I love it!!!
This article has at least three unique features. The first unique thing is poetry, all of which are original poems, songs and poems. Those who are not outstanding in literary talent cannot do it. The second best thing is the scenery. The author's descriptions of scenery are always moving, eclectic and touching. The third best thing is the characters. Not to mention the two protagonists and famous supporting characters, even the unnamed characters can make people feel life. Finally, the author is detached. It is in this book that he is detached. In the first book, he slowly writes his own style. Although the first article is good, it cannot escape the style because I read too many famous writers. The latter article has more and more its own style, and I feel like I have integrated everything I have learned. At the end, I just hope to listen to the song written by the author himself, but I don't know where Mao Mao and Xiaoxia can sing it? Feeling disappointed, but extremely satisfied. The best work, the best work! Wow wow wow, start a new book soon, there is nothing like this that suits my taste.
Many people now like mindless novels. I still like traditional martial arts novels like this. Although martial arts is an unpopular subject in Tomato, I hope the author will continue to work hard. There are still many I like to read. Highly recommend this book!
"I love wandering and wandering. I don't envy the good old age. I go looking for the wind, don't chase it." Zhao Qinian is like that gust of wind. Bao's literary talent is so good, and the artistic conception of his poems is great. Inexplicably, it reminds me of "Ashes of Time" and it feels a bit like Wong Kar-Wai's artistic conception. I'm looking forward to your new book.
With outstanding literary talent and a platinum appearance, I really wronged you in Tomato Portrait. The plot is smooth and the writing style complements each other. It can be said to be one of the few excellent martial arts novels in the world. The relationship between the two male protagonists is smooth and natural, without any strange plots, just like it was made in heaven. And there are no probing plots. It is very direct between the two characters. Some people may be suitable for ambiguity, but the personalities of these two people are destined to be straightforward and unrestrained. The two protagonists have already established their martial arts skills at the beginning, so this is not a boy's coming-of-age story. The protagonists are more like two passers-by, but they are truly involved in life. I really like this sense of maturity. After getting together, there are a lot of sweets. Mao and Yuer are another young couple. Zhao is really tolerant and Xiaoxia is really direct. Moreover, Zhao is very humorous. He often plays homophonic jokes and gives Yuer nicknames. He is really good at teasing people, hahaha, and it is inevitable that he will be moved by his songs. In fact, although this book has two male protagonists, it focuses more on the description of friendship and human nature. Sometimes it is inevitable to feel a little emotional about the people in the book. It is really full of martial arts style. Sons and daughters of the world, love and hate, meet each other even though they are far away from each other. It can be said to be an ancient friendship. Watching it made me laugh and cry. It was so memorable that I couldn't help but watch it a few times. Five-star praise is the upper limit of the platform, not the upper limit I want to give this book. If I were asked to give a score, I would choose to give it 10,000 points. In the end, it's still the same sentence: Platinum appearance, quick updates, sleepless nights [laughing] The ending of "Spreading Flowers", although it is finished, makes people have endless aftertaste, and I can't calm down for a long time. It is a pity to finish it, which means that there will be no follow-up chapters of this book, but the author's new books in the future should have a certain relationship with this book. I am extremely looking forward to it, and I will give you a five-star review!
The author has greatly presented a different world of martial arts to readers, and I like it very much. Like the protagonist in the story, I don't like drinking. I drink alone again and again, tasting the bitter taste!! Bring it on!! Take a look at the different world of martial arts!!
Zhao Qinian is a character that makes my heart beat. Give me one of these male protagonists. I envy the other male protagonist hahaha~
"Two grains in the lake, half ink, form a pair, and they are also two grains in the human world, walking side by side." I finished reading it, but it was too short. I cried, but it was still unfinished. It's rare to find such a good-looking duo of martial arts men, highly recommended!! ❤️