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The author is quite good. He updated it for 3 years from 2023 to 2026. I have to give him a thumbs up for insisting on updating. Besides, this kind of immortality style made me dream back to the early fantasy novels I read in 2016.17, And I worked hard to defeat monsters and level up. It's fun to find treasure chests at level 1. The writing is good, the characters are not single, damn things die quickly, and the author himself is also diligent. He wanders around the comment area and corrects typos in time. The platform should support more articles like this [Like][Like][Like][Salute]

This book is very good to read. It is a rare good book. It suits my taste and fits my imagination of the world of cultivating immortals. It is fascinating. I hope to write it into a long article and describe the moving story of the world of cultivating immortals. I give it a thumbs up.

It's so good-looking. I hope it can become a double male protagonist in the future. It's okay even without CP.

Having finished reading the first volume, I have to say that many of the plots in this novel are unconventional, at least not like some cool novels where you know how to develop without reading. There are quite a lot of twists and turns. Although some parts are somewhat unreasonable in my opinion, as a novel about mortals cultivating immortals, it is really good, and there are also rare twins (although I have not seen the plot of twins yet). It's really beautiful, good luck to the author! 🥳🥳 After reading the latest chapter, I have to say that the author is really expressive in depicting various aspects of cultivation. Although there is no emotional line, it is actually very reasonable from the perspective of respecting the strength of the cultivation world. I look forward to the two of them meeting at the top in the future. Come on, author, I wish this novel will become more and more popular!

It's really good-looking. It's really a male-style novel with two male protagonists. I've read many Qidianfeng dual-male protagonists. This one should be the most popular one.

The two-male protagonists are in the male style of writing. It's beautiful and well-written. I've been looking for this kind of writing for a long time, and I can actually read it for free on Tomato. It's very profitable, and it's quite enjoyable. The most important thing is that even if the protagonist has someone he likes, it will not affect his pursuit of immortality. I like this kind of character😋😋

It's nice to watch, the plot is very engaging and the writing style is very comfortable. There is no male-concentrated style that is common in ordinary novels, and the main character is so ecstatic that it suits my heart so well❤️ I'm tired of saying it's good-looking. It focuses on the protagonist's cultivation of immortality, but it also occasionally and implicitly mixes in a small amount of emotional drama. It suits me very well! I hope that if the protagonist has CP in the future, it will be Senior Brother Mo~

This is the type I like. No matter how many handsome guys and beautiful women are around me, I always focus on cultivating immortality and freedom. This is how to cultivate immortality.

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, the writing is online, IQ is online, superb, I personally think it's very good-looking, Yi'er's wife loves it so much (I'm sorry for the other protagonist, your partner is temporarily mine before you appear again)

Raise the flag to Yi'er and Mo Wangchen's CP! The author's writing is super, super good, and it's very to my liking. It's pretty good in terms of plot and characterization! The plot is very exciting, and it would be even better if there were more upgraded plots where Yi Er slaps her in the face! In terms of characterization, some people really make me hate them! Some people really feel that they are a pity and regret their experiences! It is a more traditional immortality novel, with the main line of immortality as the main line and the emotional line as a supplement! PS: But please, author, I think it would be great if Yi'er had Mo Wangchen as a CP! Because I think if someone wants to be in a relationship with Yi'er, then you have to be at least as strong as Mo Wangchen! At present, apart from Mo Wangchen, the people who have a crush on Yi'er are not as big as Yi'er. Why do you deserve Yi'er?

The overall writing is pretty good and can be read in one sitting, but firstly it is quite slow. Secondly, the first volume is basically not that exciting. The female characters who appear either have CPs or are female villains, and the most beautiful one is someone else's concubine. The second volume is a little better after it is not so frustrating, but this type of novel basically does not have a good score on tomato. Then I read the author's reply. Are there going to be two male protagonists in the future? It's very rare to be able to write a pet beast well in this kind of beast-control novel. If you add a male protagonist to share the role, I guess there won't be much space to write a heroine. The author's writing power may not be able to withstand it. In the end, there is a high probability that the two characters will not be the same. It is a pity that such a well-organized and well-organized novel about cultivating immortals is a pity. But it seems that the author is also an amateur writer. I guess he just wants to feel comfortable writing, so that's fine.

It is a rare orthodox fairy tale with two male protagonists, and the emotional drama is slow and intense. I believe there will be readers who will like it. I hope the author will stick to it and update it soon, it's not enough.

It's good-looking. Forgive me for my lack of vocabulary. The protagonist is a bit of a heartthrob. Well, the main plot is the main plot, and the emotional plot is supplementary. The other main plot doesn't have many appearances, but it won't make people forget it. The novel is really long. In the book review, it was 23 years old, but now it is 26 years old. It feels like the main plot is not even halfway through yet🌚

Well, I hope there is no cp. It's just that the female characters are a bit less interesting. Although most of them either have Taoist companions or are villains, they appear too frequently and it feels a bit like a harem. If you have cp, please tell me. I still prefer no cp @ the little shopkeeper who loves to eat chicken wings [send heartfelt] I like the others very much [blowing kiss]

Yes, it does have the flavor of a male fantasy novel, but the description of the emotional scenes is a bit awkward, and I don't know if it's a bit of foreshadowing. It's very interesting. If this book is discontinued, I will shed tears😭. It really has the flavor of fantasy and spiritual cultivation. The author is very thoughtful and the plot rhythm is very good. Compared with some stories about cultivating immortals who can get golden elixirs overnight, and have two male protagonists who transcend tribulations and rise to the top, it has a more logical sense (personally I feel it is really boring, the improvement of cultivation level is as exaggerated as a joke, all upgrades completely serve the emotional drama, the key is that the relationship line and career line are not well written, it is very routine)

It's really an upgrading stream with a starting point flavor, and I haven't seen any love scenes. It's great. I don't really like relationships that are too sticky. It would be better if both parties are career-approved. This emotional line, um... Makes me feel like my toes are gripping the ground. It's really not working, so I don't need the emotional line.

It's very interesting. It's really interesting. I especially like to read such fairy tales, but there are too few of them with two male protagonists. I've always read them without female protagonists. What I want is this kind of strict hierarchical world of immortality. The other two male protagonists who are cultivating immortals are too holy, and the upgrades are all given by others, which is called the upgrade flow. I must save up 100 chapters before reading [crying]

I finished reading the latest chapter in one go, it was great! The writing is really good, I look forward to the update, but don't be greedy and save it for fun! [Adoration] So far the plot arrangement is pretty good, and there aren't too many foreshadowings. It's a breath of fresh air among all the sweet stories, but it feels a bit like Conan is possessed. Yi'er really wants to see who dies hahaha, but I like it. It feels very real. Fighting and killing in the world of cultivation is very cruel. I hope the author Da Yi'er will arrange some handsome guys. It's so cool [Adored]

It's so beautiful! I've become numb after reading fast food novels for so long. It's been a long time since I've seen such an orthodox and beautiful article about cultivating immortals! It actually made me feel like I was chasing after a mortal to cultivate immortality! Big cheers for the author! Don't stop updating!

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. Although it's a furnace, it keeps improving itself. The protagonist also grows up step by step. The subject matter is also relatively new. You can give it a try.

The writing is very good, I hope it can be written in the future like a mortal cultivating immortality. [Praise]

I just want to read this kind of novel with few love lines and two male protagonists. Please continue writing. I believe that there will definitely be more people who like this in the future. Don't make the male protagonist soft in the future. You must continue to maintain this style of straight men being emotional towards men [shy]. This is simply much better than too many male protagonists who are bent into mosquito coils and insist on being straight! Although the rating is very low now, I believe it will become higher in the near future [Sending Hearts]

It's really beautiful [a heartfelt gift], I like it very much. I just feel that there is still a long way to go before ascending to the spiritual world, so I keep up with the updates. It has been a long time coming that something in the protagonist's body will awaken.

It's so good to read, and I finally came across Shuang Nan's novel, an orthodox fairy tale that focuses on plot, that suits my taste! Is the author going to update a lot? There are so many [Blow kisses] It's so uncomfortable to update like this [I'm about to cry]

I have seen the author in the comment area many times. It can be seen that the author also likes this book. It seems that he does not have to worry about abandoning it halfway. I have already read half of it and really like it. I will give it a good review [laughs][laughs]

Those who focus on the plot line can enter. The plot is great, but the emotional line is average.

It's pretty good, at least it's rare to see unpretentious protagonists in female videos, but I think this is more of a male channel article, and I suspect that this article was a whim of the author when he was watching a male channel called Immortal Cultivation. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this book.

Shuang Nan is particularly good-looking, but the emotional scenes are a bit lacking. I hope there can be more emotional scenes [laughs]

A very serious article about cultivating immortals! It's rare to see a novel with two male protagonists that is not cliche!

I like this type of fairy tale with a world view. I have read it since 24 years ago. I have read more than 200 and nearly 300 chapters. I read it again after more than a year. It is very good (˵˚ ω ˚˵)