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Not bad, the writing is quite interesting. When I first read the introduction, I was still curious. How does the protagonist gain strength without any cheats and just rely on exercise? In the end, he played so hard, I admire him. Yes, I have a thorough understanding of the world power system of the Great Sword, and I have my own understanding and ideas, rather than just fabricating things out of imagination. It is not logical at all. Author, come on, please update more, it is not enough.

So far, I really like this book, but the word count and updates are too few. I don't know what will happen next. I'm considering whether to keep a book or not.

The protagonist is a ruthless person, with a good character design, and the large plot foreshadowing is the only shortcoming of this book for me. However, if the production volume is increased in the future, it will not be worth mentioning. I hope that some new settings that are incompatible with the original work will not be added in the future. Overall, this is the best sword fanfic on Tomato so far [Eating Melon]

The first few chapters are well written, describing a man in his 30s who has been tempered by society and is experienced, cautious and careful in his work. Just like an ordinary person living cautiously. The next 20 or so chapters are written about passionate young people, so energetic. As soon as the thought comes up, it comes out, and the mind is completely relaxed. If it weren't for the author's support, I believe that the little girl you are rescuing would be waiting on the Dajian Organization's operating table in a few days. To sum up, this book has some brains but not much.

There are very few people who write big sword novels. Please support me.

Feeling okay about myself. Originally, Daxian is a very cold subject. I have read only three Daxian fanfics, and this is the third one. At present, there are no major poisonous points. I hope I can continue to be an author. If it sucks, you might as well turn it into a 6 star

Five stars for the big sword, but where to wear it on the back is not clear yet, waiting for update

The writing is still very exciting

U1s1, in fact, if you take in Dinisha, Erdai, and Screw, and then take in Sister Yi, all four of you can push the organization in parallel, and Milia can clear the organization alone. Your lineup directly overran it, and the organization has no ability to fight back. Without the hands of Erdai, not even the three corpse girls.

It's rare to see a Dajian fan, and the writing is okay.

This is the first time I am so interested in fan fiction. The plot described by the author is very exciting for me. I stayed up all night to read the current chapter. The writing is also very smooth, and there is no contradiction or obstruction that makes me feel

The plot is reasonable, and there are traces to follow for the pig's feet to become stronger. The world line is Great Sword - Hunter - Main World (Home) - Wushan Five Elements. Personally, I didn't like the style of Western fantasy through fantasy, so I didn't continue watching it.

It's rare to see a fan of Big Sword, and the writing is quite good. I hope the author can continue writing.

Dajian is a rare good book, support it

The Great Sword fanfic is good. It's very novel to start from the perspective of removing the active demon flesh from the body.

The first one was good, until I entered the Hunter World again, I couldn't stand it anymore, but as a rare big sword fan, it's pretty good.

I didn't expect to see Da Jian's fans again after more than ten years. It was very interesting to go to Wushan.

Not bad, just a bit short, need to be raised

Why is the book gone? Will it be put back on the shelves? [Crying]

There are still very few books about big swords. This one is pretty good in terms of characters.

Overall, it's pretty good. So far, it's okay. To be honest, if you look at those protagonists who are unusually calm and intelligent and have everything planned, this kind of ordinary protagonist is not bad. As for some people who say that the protagonist is too stupid, don't talk from God's perspective. If you really want to be an ordinary person, he probably won't live for a few days. Anyway, as far as I'm concerned, I compared it and I probably died when the demon broke through the door.

I stood out among the many system streams and quickly traveled through the stream. I was astonished. The description of the two chapters before the time travel made me feel like I was back to the old articles in middle school textbooks. It had a delicate and fascinating feeling.

Come on, do you want to go to other worlds in the later stage? After all, the map of Great Sword is an island. There is very little information outside the island. I just know that there is a descendant of the dragon, and two countries are at war. If you want to write a longer post, you should go to Zhutianliu and go to other worlds to solve the physical problem of the sword. I'll be a full-time hunter later on, come on, it's been great so far👍🏻 A pigeon? I'm finally back. I've been waiting so hard. I've been getting some chicken blood lately. An update is coming.

Although the book is average, the author wrote it seriously

I didn't expect someone to write a sword essay and write it so well. It's awesome [like]

The plot concept is okay, but the update is a bit slow, huh huh huh huh, it's still a bit lacking, uh, I wonder if there is an outline? I read the whole book and I think it should have an outline. Personally, I think this book is okay. Worth a look

It's a very good-looking sword novel. So far, it doesn't have any bad points. I look forward to the follow-up. So far, it's still good food.

Not many people can write about Big Sword, and even fewer can write about it so well. The plot is smooth and the protagonist's characterization is also very vivid. That is to say, Dinisha feels a little bit uninterested, but only slightly. Overall first-class, five stars The update speed has increased in recent days. Are you feeling better? [Laughing] Don't stop the chicken blood [laughing and crying]

I watched the anime a long time ago. At that time, I slowly found it on the Internet and almost forgot about it. There probably aren't many people writing about Big Sword. The author's writing is quite good. I must support it [Blow Kiss]

The sword chapter is very exciting, I have read it several times! I'm almost done with it! Duen Tuen was completed and was actually blocked.