Starting at Foundation Establishment, I Become the Strongest Adventurer

This new book may have some unsatisfactory aspects, so I hope you can bear with me. In addition, please give me a good review QAQ here. 😢😢😢

There are many plot twists, and there are many bloody scenes. Nice! And I'm really curious when the brave man who writes the diary will appear.

The plot always exceeds my expectations. At the beginning, I thought that the beast-eared girl would be taken as a disciple by the protagonist and then go out for revenge or something. When I met that team at the beginning, I thought there would be some key plot, but later on, she stabbed the protagonist in the back. Later, when the protagonist's team completed the mission, I thought that team would backstab the protagonist and then be wiped out by the protagonist. The result was that the team was wiped out, but it was a group wiped out by wild monsters, which was somewhat unexpected. It looks pretty good, I hope there will be more!

Warm reminder: Do not substitute your own values ​​​​into a different world, otherwise you will feel weird when reading this book, but reality is often weird. I felt uncomfortable when I first read this book, because the evil between people is very pure, and the good between people is also very pure. I suggest the author be more steady. I almost gave up when I saw so many knives and twisted values ​​at the beginning, but I persisted and wanted to see the protagonist regain his strength and found this book to be very interesting. I hope Bai Qiming and Luka live well. The book is quite good, with a lot of foreshadowing, and makes people want to read on. The interesting settings, such as the Dice of Destiny, are indeed strange. It is not recommended for immature readers. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. However, the structure is a bit messy, and I didn't react to the changes in the scene several times. Five star support

The latest chapter so far: Chapter 81 Read: 81 chapters It's a good book, but the comparison of the combat power between the immortal cultivation system and the Japanese adventure system is not very good. It is clearly stated at the beginning that a C-level magician's magic is comparable to the full blow of the golden elixir, but the protagonist is said to be able to fight with a C-level at the peak of foundation building, which means that the protagonist can fight across a large realm without dying. However, the author did not say how talented the protagonist is. I just remember that the protagonist is just an ordinary immortal cultivator. I don't understand this. I may have missed it or read it wrong. Please give me some advice. Then there is the storyline. The storyline is quite interesting. Heishencan is indeed well written. In the rules of this world, none of the beliefs are normal and there are not many good things. There is a pure land in the Borderlands, but it is gone now. Each country has its own characteristics and beliefs. The people are basically in dire straits. Because of the existence of magic and gods, the proletariat It is difficult for civilians to carry out a revolution or uprising, so the people are numb, ignorant, and ignorant, which is very weird. The protagonist can save civilians, but my suggestion is to save some people who can be representative. The current Luca is very representative. Don't save one after another (I know there is no such thing now, I just mentioned it, lest you spend a lot of space writing about the protagonist rescuing civilians later). Keep up the good work, it's not enough!

The emotions must be exaggerated in place, and finally highlight the sense of weight, depression, loneliness and emptiness. Then it will be sad. Then be as close as possible to highlight the macro theme. In some of these articles, the characters are a bit flat, which is not enough. It is best to bring a feeling similar to Dream of Red Mansions and Three-Body Problem. Step by step, lay the groundwork. Slow down. The pace is too fast now. Give some cold explanation. After all, not everyone can understand it. It is necessary to embody feelings with things and create feelings with scenes. Let readers feel the immersive emotional fluctuations. After all, this is a depression article. And it's dark and deep. Author, let us see you become better. I believe you can write this work beyond the standards of ordinary Internet articles. After all, there is a saying that a good tragedy is to tear beautiful things into pieces for people to watch. A great work must have connotation. I just came here after reading your topic. I think it's a grand tragedy, similar to that of Dragon Clan. In short, I suggest you wait until your emotions are heightened before you do it. Otherwise, I really wouldn't be able to appreciate the tragedy, and the male protagonist's lines are too mediocre. I don't understand some of the male protagonist's behaviors. Maybe it's because I don't know his past. I can write about this. Could be more philosophical. This book is not intended to praise beautiful qualities. Instead, we should write about human nature. After that, use excellent writing to write out a certain thought and a profound theme. You can also refer to the plot of The Red Eye. Take your time. This is much more difficult to write than pure cool writing.

So far, it seems to be okay, as long as the author doesn't have a seizure, and there are fewer characters to die for me. Hey, at least there are a few girls left! OK, the plot is starting to get better later. The poison of the protagonist has been cured. The witch and the little girl have survived for the time being. I look forward to the future development.

As a work that travels from east to west and is not an invincible novel, this is a rare work. I have wanted to find this kind of work before, but there have been two, one is broken, and the other is written as too invincible. In essence, the difference in energy system and traveling to a new world are inevitable for the world's will to reject outsiders, and the perspective of the same event will be different due to different time periods. This is the value brought by slow growth, which I am looking forward to.

We have also read a lot of books on cultivating immortality and Western fantasy. I didn't expect to read Cultivation of Immortality in Western Fantasy. I have read the latest chapter now. The author's writing is good, the plot has tension and relaxation, and the emotional description is good. The world view is relatively dark, but there is a beautiful side. It is good, but it is not enough.

I took a look at the comment section before reading. I was almost led astray by some people in the comment section. I almost missed a good book. Come on, author.