Genshin Impact: Dance of Sinners

A great novel [Like] When I was reading the plot, I also hated Funina, thinking she had no strength and liked to pretend. However, as the plot developed, I found that she was not like a water god, but like a naive little girl. I gradually regarded her as a younger sister. I have gradually become a Fufu chef, but I am very angry and angry with the new plot. I even want to quit the game, ah, I really feel sorry for Fufu [crying] and I hope the author can give her a good ending. I also hope it will be a real single female protagonist. Although this is the first time I read the author's novel, I was shocked by the author's excellent writing style. I don't understand why the book's rating is so low. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better and can keep updating. I really like reading it [laughs]

A very good book The protagonist's almost pathological character brings ultimate elegance and nobility. The coordinated and ups and downs plot is like a concerto. In summary it's great

I know that Lao Luo's books are well written and really good, but if you really can't write a single female protagonist, why not stop struggling, so that the author can feel comfortable writing it, and people who like single female protagonists won't be disappointed after reading it, right? [Cover face]

The analysis of human nature is so perfect, So much so that the plot is so reasonable and superb. But the most joyful thing is Silly Fu. It's something she can do. I hope the author will continue to do it. Come on.

The author's writing style is good and he has certain literary skills. Especially the psychological description and emotional portrayal at the end of Chapter 53 are quite vivid. If you accept the protagonist's setting and have a certain understanding, then this book can be said to be quite worth reading. (The comments are only personal opinions. There are no trolls, no wars, no shady behavior, etc.; I am not a literary professional, so please forgive me for any inappropriate wording or fallacies. I would be grateful if you could correct me.)

The emotions are delicate and the characters are full-bodied. There is also a lot of Fontaine among them, my favorite character. The protagonist has a refreshing personality. The article is mainly about daily life, without the main line of writing about a master, which can better reflect the author's literary talent. Mainly, my favorite Fufu is here

This book is the best one I have read among the Fufu fanfics. I can even say that there is no other one. The character Link is very similar to the male protagonist in another book that I like. From confusion and uncertainty to self-doubt and inseparability in the end, you will begin to feel that the protagonist has a cold and ruthless personality. Why does he suddenly fall in love with someone when everything is for profit? This is very well written, because this cold and ruthless look is not the main personality, but because of the things he experienced when he was a child, he became like this. At this time, the self-narration becomes a good thing, and the author is the same. He did not waste this opportunity. Rather than saying that Link redeemed Fufu, it is better to say that Fufu redeemed Link. There are also descriptions of some characters. For example, Linny may be a little arrogant and look down on others, but this is also based on the fact that after his sister was abducted by the nobles, he hates the nobles, and the protagonist happens to be a noble, so it is understandable. It's growing. For example, Linnette and Femini. Linnette didn't need to say anything. Once the energy-saving mode was turned on, she couldn't compete with the world. Not to mention Femini, she just couldn't compete with the world. Another example is the servant. I have a problem with the servant. The servant is the fourth seat of the executive officer. Emmm, I carefully recalled every fight between the servant and Link in my mind. Emmm, the combat power is reasonable. In the trial, there was no fight because Link had the power, so Link won, which is reasonable. Then, there is nothing much to say about Clolinde and Navia. Basically, what you see of these two people in the plot is what they are in this book. The only difference is Navilight. I can feel that Navilight has been cut down, but I don't have any objection. After all, it didn't have any power before, and it's almost the same as the plot. There is not much to say about the other characters. One good thing is that there is no porn in this book, good! Let me see! I have seen many comments saying that the author understands all the single heroines written by the author. I also read it from the previous article. I also had doubts because I don't like reading harem stories, but I did not abandon the book. Until now, I read one book a day. I am also very glad that I did not abandon it just like that. This is my thought process based on some comments I saw while reading the book. These words should not appear in book reviews. Let me also talk about some of my personal views on single-female protagonists. I don't hate those one-step emotional assembly line articles. I just feel that it is very abrupt because I don't know where the emotional foundation of the male and female protagonists who say "I like you" comes from. Is it because love at first sight is caused by hormones and comes naturally? Starting from the woman's various incest to the man's tolerance? This kind of assembly line love, I think it is better to forget it. This is just like, not love. This is also the reason why I like this book. The author did not write this. I hope that future readers can see some of the answers I left for you when they read the review of this book. 1. This article is about a single female protagonist 2. The description of emotions in the article is not a love assembly line. 3. Among the people the protagonist comes into contact with, interests outweigh everything, and it is not ambiguous. 4. I didn't think about it👌🏻 The two things I mentioned about my love and the single heroine are superfluous, but if I don't delete them, I'm just wasting your time [laughing evilly], and you can't beat me, hehe [laughing evilly]

It is rare to see such fan works, which fully highlight the character of Fu Nina in the game, and also carve out the emotional lines of the protagonist in great detail. I look forward to the following chapters, it is worth reading [Like][Like][Like]

This is really my first time reading a Genshin Impact novel. It is such a real novel with very good characters. The character of the protagonist is portrayed so well, I gave it five stars mainly because of Fufu. In addition, this one definitely has a single heroine, and the others are basically using friendships. Fufu is so cute, she must be the heroine. Fumen.

It is really good-looking, and it can be considered a high-quality book in the original book circle. I swear with more than a thousand hours of reading, this book is absolutely good-looking. Big cheers for the author!

The description of the characters is very delicate and makes people feel very real (it looks good, if you like it, please come more)

I declare that this is the best book I have read in the second half of 2023, with some sweetness, some burning, and some knives. The protagonist is crazy, handsome, warm, silly and elegant (in different states), and Silly Fufu performs stably. The plot is more daily, divided into main plot (plot) and branch plot (original). Some places are a bit cumbersome but you can read it. It is recommended to lengthen the daily posts (give me more!!! I want to read Lin Fu's posts!!) In short, if you want to read Fufu fan fiction without being brainless, you can read this book. The recommendation index is 9.87 (Out of 10). At the same time, it is recommended that you watch rationally, pay attention to your words and deeds, and don't be reckless (extremist people are not allowed to enter, thank you)

This is a book worth reading. It describes the emotional details very well. From the initial hints and ambush to the later revelations, it gives readers many opportunities to guess, which leads to many comment sections filled with various guesses, but the chance of guessing is quite high. To be honest, the author's hints are so obvious, not too subtle, and easy to guess. Guess, you won't have a feeling of surprise after reading it, but I will still give it five stars. I feel that the best thing about this book is not the details, but the emotions. I don't know how to put it. The subject matter is quite novel and the content is also very good. I will definitely put it on the bookshelf. Of course, I hope the author will not be unfinished and will not be a eunuch. Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง It's good to keep it as it is now, but I feel that this book is about to end. After all, there is not much that can be written. After all, it is about Fontaine, and there is not much plot. And why hasn't the Traveler come out yet? Just, it's a bit strange, or is it a foreshadowing? Forget it, there's not much to say in the book review, five stars is fine

In the novels I have read, they are quite interesting to me. I see many similarities with myself in the protagonist Link, which makes me feel the same way.

What I said before is good, but unfortunately, the character of the male protagonist seems to have changed a bit suddenly. As a person who has received cold-blooded and ruthless training since childhood, he is also a diplomat appointed to an important position. Even if he meets someone who falls in love at first sight, he will definitely not ignore other matters later. Most of the things in his mind are related to the other half... The author's later description of the male protagonist feels a bit abrupt, I hope that the following content Try to consider the events from the perspective of the male protagonist as much as possible [Thinking] ~ As for Fu Nina, the new plot has unveiled her past pretending to be stupid. Although she is also very cute, it is obvious that she is not simple. For her subsequent portrayal, can she be cute while also showing a sense of responsibility and belief in this character? Personally, I feel that it will test the author's writing skills. I am looking forward to the author's next performance [top post] [please update]. Overall, for a second author and a new writer, the writing is great! But I also hope that the author can also read more about what other players think of the work. At the same time, I also hope that the author can strengthen his belief and continue to create, and not be frustrated because of disagreements about the concept of the work [currently working on the work]. Come on, come on, come on! [Like][Like][Like]

Very good. In this book, the silly... Uh, stupid... Um... Difufu's character is described very accurately and vividly, perfectly embodying the ahem of Difufu...

How should I put it, thank you to the author for fulfilling one of my obsessions. After finishing the plot of Fontaine 4.2, I suddenly felt that my little yellow hair had changed. There seemed to be more indifference and less kindness in his words. Although the people of Fontaine were saved after knowing the plot, Funina completed her 500-year mission. This should have been a happy ending. But when I heard the sentence "The prophecy is false." I still felt sad for Funina. Funina is strong and she deserves a better story. Anyway, thank you to the author for his great contribution. This book is a good book worth reading. The author doesn't need to listen to other people's disapproval. He can just do what he likes and write what he loves.

Let's put it this way, this is the book I read before Tomato's first 300,000-word book, and it is also the only book I have read the latest chapters. I thought that although some of the characters were different from what I thought (it may also be my problem), it is definitely a masterpiece. I originally gave it a five-star review, but I deleted it and re-wrote this review just to let more people know how excellent this book is (by the way, I am not trusting you). The author's writing skills are also beyond my imagination. If I could evaluate this book in one sentence, it would be that the Genshin Impact fanfic has become a god! Who is dissatisfied? If you don't agree, find one? Tomato has the most fanfics, but I searched all over Mi Huyou's fanfics. Either it's Crested Chicken Tail, it's the word count in the middle period, or it's that the character's personality has collapsed. Well, so far, I haven't found anything to complain about in this book, but now that the story of the Water God's self-trial is over, what else can I write next? I'm a little curious, but I still hope that the author can keep it up and don't start writing hydrology like other authors. I'm still very optimistic about you! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's invincible and beautiful, and the writing is so good. I can't find anything better than this in the entire Genshin Impact fanfic. The plot is also good, and the sense of substitution is strong. It's much more exciting than many plots in the original work. If you don't agree, let me argue [OK]

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Overall, it's pretty good. The male protagonist's family created a demon, but he was attracted by the exotic god "Funina". The lonely girl also took off her mask in his company. The story of the two people's mutual redemption is really beautiful. In addition, the author's writing style is also very good, and I have gained a lot from it. In addition, as for the plot, the author can ensure that the content is exciting and rich, while also writing about daily life in the process, which only represents his personal opinion. . All in all, I'm quite satisfied. It's still very good so far. I'm looking forward to future development~

After reading it, there are no OOC characters, and the author has created each character completely. Although the plot of Fontaine in the early stage is a bit lengthy, after reading it again, it is a portrayal of Ling Krypton's high-spiritedness and the process of changing his mind, and the progress is just right. The details are appropriate. When writing in detail, many foreshadowings are buried in the slow-paced plot. When it is concluded in the later period, it is also mixed with the daily life that slows down the pace. The climax is clear and the rhythm is well grasped. When I think of the sentence "The gray line of grass and snakes appears thousands of miles away", this is also the charm of traveling back in time. I will write this much.

The character of Link is perfectly created. He fell into the abyss at the beginning and was illuminated by a ray of light (Fu Nina). Fu Nina has no OOC at all. She is sweet and has a plot. I love the author's writing style.

The innovative integration of the plot on the original basis is silky and smooth, and the emotional development is richly described. The climax satisfies the reader's fantasy of redemption for Funina, and the protagonist also wins his own redemption from the perspective of the protagonist. The writing is rich and the readers will not be bored despite the excessive plot.

It's pretty good. Come on, I think the writing is also good. Don't read too many negative comments. I'm looking forward to the next story. If some people think it's too watery, I personally think it's the plot with the three children. Although the author wants to write the main plot, it's obvious that the three children have very little role in Judgment Day. In that plot, Linnette had more plots. Then on Judgment Day, the protagonist beat Linnette. Linnette's eyes were red and she raised her sword to slash at the protagonist. In fact, I think this paragraph can add a little inner drama or a second or two of hesitation. After all, the protagonist helped her and was very kind to her. But when it comes to the three children, I really like the plot. Maybe I will write some plots related to them later. Finally, the author, please use less words and read less negative comments. The writing is very good. Come on [rushing] [please update]

I feel like this protagonist is myself, because there are many similarities between Link and I. Unfortunately, he has power but I don't. The author wrote it very well and it touched my heart [almost crying] [love] [like]

Alas, there is an indescribable feeling that in order to change the ending, Hu Tao finally became Link's fiancée. After the trip, the story line was finally changed to what he wanted, but it seemed that they were not together, but there was no difference between them. I think this book written by Lao Luo is the best among fan fictions, and the writing style is very good. We changed a lot of the plot and changed it to what we wanted. The sinners dance, the two sinners redeem each other, Link is no longer paranoid and hypocritical, and Fufu gets real redemption and the future she deserves. Thank you Lao Luo for writing such a good work for us

It's a masterpiece. I can accept both the harem and the single female protagonist, but I can't accept the male protagonist's secretary Monica who ends up following Diluc. I don't mean to say that the author's writing is not good, it's just a matter of personal possessiveness. Putting aside these personal preferences, this book is indeed a rare masterpiece. If you can accept this recommendation, read it.

It's quite interesting. It was the first Genshin Impact fanfic I came into contact with, and I've been following it for a while. The author also has a good foundation, and the writing is very good whether it is daily life or battles, especially the last few scenes where Dawson and the Queen sacrifice themselves to create a new world. The ending is also interesting, it seems to be he, but it leaves a lot of regrets. All in all worth seeing

This book is really good, but it gave me a feeling that it had a good beginning but a bad ending. The plot of Link's transformation in the middle was a bit abrupt. It can't be called abrupt, but it was a bit uncomfortable to read. I quit Chapter 148 halfway because there was a bit of a transition from Fengdan to Liyue. Suddenly, and then the writing during that period made me a little confused, because it was updated once a day, which made me very annoyed and uncomfortable watching it. But now that I have finished watching it and looking back, I feel that it is not so sudden. Mainly because the plot became more reasonable before Lin Xiaoxiao appeared, but I still think it sucks in the middle. But as a fanfic, I think it's pretty good. This book is also the only one that I think is a good single heroine in Genshin Impact. It's not like other single heroines who just give out candy, and has a complete story chain. Let me tell you why I like this book. First, there is a complete plot (unlike the kind that digs holes everywhere without burying them) Second, I am a futao chef, so I am very happy to have the role of Hutao in the end. Third, it's not that kind of mindless love. I still like the part where two sinners redeem each other. Fourth, I haven't thought about it yet. I'll make it up later. Fifth... Personality! Start up!