When I Brought the Online Game Panel to the World of Immortality

If there was no CP behind it, this would definitely be the best novel I have ever read. It almost matches what I like. I love the author so much. [Shy][Shy]

It's quite novel. It's rare to see a female protagonist in a fairy tale whose profession is a nanny, even if it's not pure. It's also the first time I've seen a pseudo-spiritual root setting. The plot is novel, and the disciples of the immortal sect are also rare and positive. In the world of immortality, there is not only love and hatred, but also a group of high-spirited immortal cultivators who regard the common people as their own responsibility. What attracts me most about this book is that the disciples of the various sects of immortality are not so brainless, and they fight desperately to protect the common people. It is very comfortable to read. The more I watch, the more I like it ~ [Blow a kiss] Confess your love [Blow a kiss]

I stayed up late to read Chapter 121. It is the best book I have read in recent times. The heroine travels through the world of immortals. There is a game panel. The others are immortals. She is the kind who can grind monsters and upgrade. I think anyone who has played online games will like it. It is very immersive. Moreover, the book is not like other novels with bloody and bloody battles. Now that I have read Chapter 232, I feel that Chapter 120 is a watershed. The first part is very exciting, but the second part is just like nothing. The first upgrade is more reasonable, and the cheat code is logical and acceptable. The latter part is really too big. The heroine's achievements in a few months reach the level of a genius in decades or the level of an ordinary person in hundreds of years. I think the game panel function is really good in the early stage. Based on the world of cultivating immortals, the game panel is just a golden finger for the heroine. Most of it is written according to the world of cultivating immortals. It doesn't work anymore later on, it feels like the heroine is just leading everyone to do tasks according to the rules of the game world, because in the game the golden fingers are stronger than each other, outperforming all the immortal cultivators, and the elements of cultivating immortals are getting less and less, which is really not good-looking.

It's a very cute novel, and makes people feel warm after reading it. In fact, I felt a little uncomfortable in the previous article, because most of the supporting characters are male characters, and there are only a few rare female characters, which are more related to love. However, the description of the appearance of the male characters makes up for this very well. As for female stories, isn't it normal to have some beautiful and attractive male characters? The most important thing is that the author really reads the comments very carefully. When I read the 100th chapter, there have been obvious improvements. There are more female characters and their personalities are more distinct. Everyone is a very good person.

It takes the game system to travel through the world of cultivating immortals. It is a bit of an online game. There are no weird supporting characters. The disadvantage is that it is too thin at the moment. I look forward to the follow-up.

Particularly good, Chai, the female protagonist is a wet nurse, and there is a game panel for cultivating immortals.

There are too many descriptions of male characters in the early stage. In the first half, except for a few female characters who are friendly with the heroine, they are basically male characters. However, they are not the kind of misogyny. There are just few female characters, which is a small lightning protection point. It is better in the middle and later stages. The setting is relatively complete and quite enjoyable. The ending is half a dumpling. It is quite good. To be honest, it is a bit boring after reading the main plot, but the logic loop can be rounded off and there is no C. P (If you don't talk about CP, I don't recommend that you will be criticized at the beginning of the review. After all, there are many male characters in the early stage). Another little poisonous point is that the high-ranking female characters Yun Chu Hua Jing Hua Qing Yu, including the previous Han Yue, are a bit lustful or have a facial expression in love. As a result, in the end, besides the heroine, my favorite is the cousin Chen Huayue who is against the heroine. She has a distinctive personality and is not addicted to petty love. She has her own purpose and cruelty and is not stupid. [Chigua] If you can tolerate these points, you will probably like it.

It's super good-looking. To be honest, I have followed the same type of articles in Xiaolujiang, but this one is more in line with my taste. The only bad thing is that it is too thin. I hope you can update it more! ! ! ! ! !

Beautiful, love watching. I think this book is really logical and the author writes it in detail. Anyway, the author really pays attention to small details. I also like the character of the heroine. Really, I would be sad if I didn't watch it. I hope it will be updated soon [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It describes the feeling of a real nanny, really, too real. This novel is so good. The author should write more. It's simply not good enough.

Nice! Super awesome! The rating is inexplicably low. Fortunately, I am interested in this type of article and clicked on it. Has the author considered adding an emotional line? In addition to upgrades, the interaction between the heroine and other supporting characters, the description of friendship, love, teachers and students, can make the article more motivational and interesting to read. It doesn't have to be a cp, it can be someone else's single-arrow heroine. Come on!

When I saw the third chapter, I rushed to praise it, especially the scene description of the Shenxiao Palace when I first arrived. I rushed over to praise it. I have already entered that scene. It was so well written, very humorous, but the details were rigorously described. I felt like having fun when I saw the psychological activities of the protagonist. However, the descriptions of the high-ranking immortals in the first two chapters gave me a feeling of suffocation, which made me feel breathless. I love the bitter tea.

① God direction, no cp ②The writing is very good. The story line is very complete. Everyone has a separate story and their own life trajectory, which are interlocking with each other. The time span is very large because it is a world of immortality. The storyline spans many, many years. ③The characters are described very well. They are neither purely good nor purely evil. The descriptions are particularly, well, complex. Human personalities are diverse. ④I always feel like I'm always challenging big bosses or something. Anyway, it's very beautiful! Five-star recommendation! ! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It's really nice. I've read articles similar to the game system before, but it's different from this one, because I played Mushi and Nizi, and I also played Yunmeng and Suwen, so to be honest, I sometimes encountered this kind of game system when I traveled through Goldfinger. What kind of milk is given to the patient to survive? But because it was just sex, I only fantasized about a few scenes. The author writes superbly! And the writing is very clear. For example, the spirit beasts in the game are different from the real spirit beasts. One is data and the other is living creature. Come on, come on, like it!

It's okay. The first three hundred or so chapters are very interesting and interesting, especially when it comes to the Northern War. However, when it comes to the post-apocalyptic farming part, there are dozens of chapters. Although it is connected logically, it is still a bit overwhelming. I can read that part at a glance. Moreover, the author laid out the world view too broadly. The boss that was laid out for hundreds of chapters in the early stage was thought to be very difficult, but it turns out that the boss is actually a little Karami. After solving him, there are still several bigger problems. I don't know why it felt so long-winded and rushed at the end. Overall it is a good book and worth reading Another point is that the book will spend a lot of space talking about the setting in the later or later stages of the book, which makes it less enjoyable as you read later. The heroine's scenes have also been reduced, especially the part about farming in the apocalypse. The heroine's scenes are so small that I even wondered if the book had been changed. But correspondingly, the holes dug by this book have basically been filled in. All the staff are good people. Those who like to read logical closed loops are more suitable to read this book.

A rare novel about cultivating immortality on the right path. A sect is a righteous one. With the open-mindedness that an immortal should have, the masters of the sect can be regarded as progressive people, serving the common people and bringing peace to the world. It can be regarded as an excellent work. I'm looking forward to future stories. Finally, I would like to thank the author for bringing me this book, it is beautiful! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Nice. Although I skipped all the attribute descriptions, it didn't affect my feeling that the protagonist was slowly growing up, and that he was slowly developing a character. It was refreshing, but when there were too many characters at the beginning, I couldn't remember who the names were. It would definitely look better if it were made into a cartoon. I'm really looking forward to the protagonist's later performance and whether he can continue to enjoy it.

The world view is quite complete, and it seems that there are no poisonous points so far. The whole framework is also very beautiful. It does not stick to a personal perspective, but takes the world as the situation. Different races are planning a way out and reach the same goal. Although the villains do have selfish motives, but how can I put it, the superiors all have the same goal, but some of them take the wrong path, or they are forced to have no choice. At present, it seems that the protagonist should be the mutation that saves the world. This routine is actually used in many books, but the content expansion is different. This book will give me a strong sense of integrity, but at the same time, it is destined that the world view is not particularly grand. The rhythm is relatively tight. Compared to the protagonist's personal love story, slap in the face and other plots, I prefer the story that is holistic, has a clear world view, a clear layout, and a great love. Therefore, in a not very long article, this book is quite well written. Unfortunately, I wasn't very impressed when I saw it later.

So far, everyone in the world of immortality has chosen to become a god in order to protect the world from exploding. The villain Chaos King also aims to become a god, but I don't know whether his purpose is good or bad. Originally, I thought that the heroine was about to reach level 100 and the story would be almost over, but suddenly I changed my writing direction and started writing about the real world, and I felt like I could write many more stories. The heroine is uniquely beautiful, and the senior brothers and sisters around her are also well matched. There is no random couplets, and there are not a lot of dog-licking. There is currently no male protagonist. It is very good. It is a light-hearted and enjoyable book. The author does not add too many emotional dramas. Good reviews!

This could have been done, but it wasn't entirely based on the system's/strong female's formula. It had some of my own imagination in it, and it felt very smooth when I watched it. It wasn't like those other sloppy and sloppy movies that just show up as a licker. Then I think the most attractive point is that the heroine knows that she is very strong and will be even stronger in the future, but she does not deliberately develop in a wretched way, so she just tries her best to improve and keep her bottom line. But objectively speaking, the overall quality is about nine points, which is the limit, although I personally like the author's character perception.

For me, it is a group portrait. Of course, Yunqing is the absolute protagonist. She is kind, brave and selfless, with a unique personality charm. Her beautiful character allows her to move towards the future step by step. "Master's little apprentice" Xuan Zhengqing is a genius in both Talisman and Sword who guarded the sect after his family was ruined. He was also a child who didn't like to wear pink clothes and idolized his elder sister. Meng Qianji tried his best to pursue Xuan Yue Xianjun, Hua Yu fell in love with Wu Lingyun, and Hua Qingyi was "trapped by love" in Shi Yan. They either grew up together, or it was difficult to distinguish the authenticity. There are strong men from the sect who voluntarily take on the responsibility, and there are also childish children who make their own aspirations. Those with rising Qi are spirits, so most of them are spiritual practitioners of justice and passion, which brings tears to people's eyes. This book has created many lives with distinctive characters, including the original chaos who spent half of his cultivation to find a way out for the original world, the spirit demon emperor who wanted to protect his people but was deceived, Zhang Huayue who lived in a whirlpool and was dragged along, as well as the trio of small figures, Han Yue, Lan Xiangzi and other vivid images! Many of them are super cute. I really want to wear the blue spirit butterfly and little fox costumes, touch the Third Highness and the Mermaid Princess, and feel the original world where technology and immortality coexist. Finally, I wish we all get what we want like Yunqing!

See updates in one go! ! ! ! It's super beautiful and very novel. I've never seen anything like this before! (This may be the first time I've seen it. I really don't know if it's happened before.) And I don't play games, so I feel I understand a lot after reading it. Highly recommended, I laughed out loud several times when I saw it, it was so unintentionally funny, but it made you realize what this character can do! ! ! This feeling is really amazing [laughs]

The rhythm and world view of the whole story are very good. I particularly like the characters in it. Although some are evil and mostly good, I really think the heroine and Xuan Zhengqing have a good fight. It's so good. I want this. CP stories about two people are so touching, so touching, so touching, so touching. I like this kind of text with a lot of emotional lines, but when I look at the story of two people getting along with each other, there are many sub-CPs that are also very touching, and I am blown away by it. The plot is not draggy, there is no female rivalry, and the ending is also very happy. It's so awesome. Please give me a cp between the female lead and the male lead. Woohoo.

It's a good book. It's a novel about immortality with a novel theme. The author's writing style is really good. The storyline is light and interesting. It's my favorite type. It's not sadistic, refreshing, and relaxing. No loss in investing. Slowly fattening up...

It's not bad. It's a very novel plot. The game interface is well used in the world of cultivating immortals. It is not a cultivation system like cultivating immortals, and the essence of the game has not been lost. The reason I gave it four stars is because there are some straightforward and hazy male pornographic themes in it, and I personally don't like pornography very much. . If these are excluded, I can definitely give it five stars. I have understood with the author and another reader that it is my own misunderstanding of the male-corruption orientation in the article. Except for the deviation in my understanding, reading this novel is like playing a game, which is a bit refreshing and quite good.

The writing is very good, but the only flaw is that most of the women in the book are quite love-minded, but there is no disgusting female rivalry, nor is there that annoying vicious female partner. Although the heroine's cousin is annoying at first, there are bright spots later. Although Han Yue misunderstood that Xie Dangpao liked the heroine at the beginning, he did not exclude the heroine like in most books. There is no male protagonist. Although some people criticize the female protagonist and the master, the writing in the book is not ambiguous. In my opinion, it is a normal relationship between seniors and juniors. Overall, this is a good book with no flaws.

It's a very new theme. I'm tired of seeing all kinds of themes. The game panel is very lifelike and very in-depth research [laughs]. The author doesn't stick to the clichés of immortality, male-female love, vicious female supporting characters, and sect fighting within the clan. Help the world, save the common people, world peace, see my corpse warm. In order to solve the overflow of divine power, the author opened a world, and the extra divine power circulated into another "real" world that was about to collapse. I personally don't like this part very much. The subsequent ups and downs, over and over again, a complete closed loop is so surprising, reversing and reversing. But the eternal formula is that the heroine is ×. The subsequent sequence of solving the Chaos King was a bit taxing, so I stopped watching it. I've basically finished watching it, and it's still great!

It's really good to watch. I've been following it on and off for several months. I thought it would be over when the heroine's level was about to reach level 100, but then she returned to the real world, and there was another map to develop on. It was a very light and enjoyable story, and there were no particularly weird sisters or brothers. , There are also many women with strong personalities, either the ones who are all powerful in the world of immortality, or the ones with a couple of sub-CPs. I don't like to read articles with sub-CPs, but the author's writing is more natural and smooth, and the more you write, the better. It's just that it's so difficult to wait for the completion [crying]

I think it's quite interesting. The subject matter is novel, the data is rigorous, the plot is rhythmic, and the characters have distinctive personalities. It is a rare good article. But some people always talk about balancing in the comments. I don't quite understand what they mean. The protagonist does have no CP, but most of the supporting characters have CP, but these CPs are not obtrusive and not forced, and the CP plot does not make people uncomfortable. I don't think there is any problem. I think as long as they are not the kind of people who are not willing to see others with CP, they can still accept this book. The ending is average. Some of the unlikable supporting characters managed to end well (such as the former leader of Lingyuan Sect, the villain heroine Zhang Huayue and Meng Qianji) minus one point, but overall it is still worth watching despite the flaws.

This is a fairy-cultivating narrative with both highlights and regrets. Overall rating: This is a work with distinct advantages and disadvantages. Although it does not reach a perfect score, its innovative setting and degree of completion still make it a novel worth recommending. Core advantages: 1. Novel setting and closed-loop narrative Breaking away from the traditional "changing map" routine of immortality novels, through early foreshadowing and later recycling, a logical and self-consistent narrative closed loop is formed, breaking the conventional framework of genre novels. 2. Concise writing style and tight rhythm The writing is beautiful and concise, without redundant hydrology, the plot advances smoothly, and the reading experience is smooth. 3. The characters are three-dimensional and logically consistent Each character has an independent story line and behavioral logic. Even if it is contrary to the protagonist's position, his choices are consistent with the character's personality and avoid becoming a "tool man". Main disadvantages: 1. Complex characters and confusing naming There are a large number of characters and some of them have similar names (such as those with the surname Xuan, those with the surname Hua, and Meng Qianji mixed with the original name of Zhang). The superimposed foreshadowing is intertwined, making it easy for readers to confuse their identities. 2. Conceptual innovation and imbalance in interpretation The traditional elements of cultivating immortals (such as "divine soul seizing body" and "human-demon race") are forcibly renamed to "divine soul entering weapons", "spirit race (human race?)/Spirit demon", etc., But they are not fully explained, which increases the cost of understanding. 3. Long dialogue and flawed logic When decrypting or discussing plots, character dialogues are often lengthy and cumbersome, and some sentences have grammatical errors that affect logical coherence. 4. Details play a role, and the times are misplaced. Immortal cultivators occasionally use modern vocabulary or Internet slang, which conflicts with the worldview setting and destroys immersion. Conclusion: With its groundbreaking setting and solid narrative skills, it has shown unique value in the theme of cultivating immortals. Its advantages are enough to support it as a high-scoring work, but problems such as confusing naming and dialogue flaws cannot be ignored. It is worth mentioning that the plot of Zhang Huayue's sister and the heroine's second uncle being kidnapped by the Chaos King's subordinates has not been filled in until the ending. The Chaos King's subordinates don't care anymore? Or leave it blank for the author, or leave it for subsequent expansion, or what is its purpose? Overall, if you can accept the threshold of understanding brought about by its innovation, this book is still a reading experience worth trying.