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Master and Disciple+Puishu+Next Year+Qiangqiang
Don't get killed casually! ! !
The writing is bad and the plot is like a wild horse! ! !
There are so many articles, don't stick to me! ! ! !
It's green tea, it's tea. If you don't accept it, don't enter! ! !
There may be some saints who accept it, if you don't accept it, don't come in, don't come in! ! !
The attack and reception settings are terrible! The original setting of the book is terrible! If you don't accept it, don't enter! ! ! Don't come in! ! ! !
Gu Tianlang, who was killed 2999 times, has no complaints! ! First, he only wore the book after his death! The second test server felt no pain! The third role-playing Shen Xiangyu killed was not Gu himself! The fourth performance time is very short and very fast! If you have a preconceived notion that this is unacceptable, please do not enter! ! ! Don't come in! ! ! !
As the protagonist of his favorite cool article, Gu Tianlang sees that Shen Xiangyu has a fan filter, and if he doesn't accept it, don't enter! ! ! Don't come in! ! !
This year's attack will help you get started very early! ! ! But it's just an enlightenment! ! If you don't accept it, don't enter! ! Don't come in! ! ! !
The double arrow is obvious! ! ! If you don't accept it, don't enter! ! ! Don't come in! ! !
Lightly darkened and deeply green tea protagonist Shen Xiangyu x collapses and cheerful but straight-ball is favored by Gu Tianlang.
Reader comments
I think the author is quite thick and long. Very conscientious. [Shy][shy][shy][shy]
Let me talk about the conclusion first (personal perspective is very subjective) [Xianpin] [True two-way rush]
Let me first talk about the bad aspects of this book. The author said that this was the first time he wrote a long novel. There was no outline when writing it, so the plot connection was not smooth in some places. For me, some places were a bit pretentious, and I could even tell that a lot of settings were added in the middle and later stages. If it was written well, it would not be a problem to write three times more words.
Okay, then I'll start praising you.
The writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, sweet and vulgar, and you can enjoy watching it without thinking.
In fact, after opening the first chapter, I can roughly guess the direction of the plot. I think there are many parts that are very brilliant, and I can't finish them in detail.
I find the plot setting of the final boss very interesting, because in this article there is a blood feud between humans and demons, and their positions are extremely antagonistic. Han Yizhi, as the leader of the Immortal Sect, is a bit cliche whether he becomes a boss through evil, or randomly finds someone else to become a boss, or attacks someone and becomes a boss.
Attack and Shou have always walked hand in hand.
As he said, Gong's request is to live well with Shou from beginning to end. For this reason, he is willing to end the war and create a peaceful world.
Han Yizhi couldn't believe it, but in the end he gave in for peace and let go of his obsession.
They all have legitimate reasons for turning ugly, but none of them have it.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, I'm so sweet. I was so sweet when I watched it late at night. I finished reading their story without even realizing it. It's so awesome! ! In fact, I think this one was killed 2999 times, and I don't hate you. I really took this setting seriously for the first time! There is a feeling of "I just love you, I just like you, it doesn't matter even if you kill me, as long as you kill me", the plot is very good! Highly recommended! The processing and rendering of the middle part are great! It made me want to cry and laugh at the same time. I cried because I was really affected by the plot, and I laughed because Gu Tianlang and Shen Xiangyu are so cute. They are so invincible and cute, okay? ! ! I strongly recommend it, the plot is really great in a novel with so many bloody, forced love (there is no forced love in this book, I mean most of the Tomato Nantong novels are of this type now, don't rush to criticize, I also like forced love❤️), strong and powerful type novels, the plot is really great! Very novel! When it comes to the plot where tradition begins to force love, do you think it's about to begin? No, no, no, it's actually our Shen Xiaoyang who started playing sweet with you, getting us candies to eat [shy] [shy] Strong recommendation! Real! ! [Angry][angry][angry]
Really like it! This is the master-disciple story I've been looking for! There is no forced love (I really don't like the plot of forced love), and there is quite a lot of content before the blackening (I really like the sweet atmosphere in the early stage, but there is very little in this aspect in other stories). The master's character is good, and Xiang Yu is also very good. Hope they are all well! Don't be sad, it's really well written. (If you want to go further, I think the focus is on logic. The latter part is a bit unclear. In fact, the first part is okay. But the writing is very good, and it is a bit advanced. Keep up the good work) [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]
After reading it, Shen Xiangyu's life experience is really tragic, but fortunately, he met Gu Chenglang, and the rest is really sweet to me (I'm secretly mentioning it, Brother Shen, you are such a love brain) I really like Gu Chengqiu, not sloppy at all [Love]
This is the most comfortable book I have ever read in Tomato. There was no weird plot, no awkward character settings, it just went on so smoothly. It's very beautiful, the writing is great, and the characters' emotions are all on point. I love it.
Woohoo, I've read it three or four times, and I really can't find the meal replacement QAQ for this novel!
Every bit really pokes at me! It's really beautiful! And it really doesn't compete with females! And they are very gentle towards women! Maybe it's gentle to everyone's perspective? Although the word "female competition" is not often heard in dual-male protagonists, there are often male protagonists competing with female protagonists, and then creating some facial makeup female counterparts. But the two female supporting characters in this article have great personalities! And! It's not like he needs to be protected at all! The setting of this male patron is that men have almost no Yin spirit roots, and the Yin energy is heavier than that of women. When Nangong scolded him for not having a manly smell, his inner slander was what is a manly smell, and what a man should smell like. Oh, I can't explain clearly. Just like in real life, when someone scolds him for not having a manly smell, he responds with "What do I smell like? What does a man smell like?" The conflict with Nangong is also the same. Rather than killing her, wouldn't it be more satisfying to convince her to praise him for being handsome? Anyway, I think every character is really three-dimensional! Her two little apprentices are so cute in the extras! I really feel that I can't stand it! I really think the chapter about the little robber is very well written. Rather than being aloof and pointing out all beings just because you are strong, you have many perspectives, so you can empathize with the suffering of others, but your judgment of the facts will not be affected by excess sympathy. He is really bad (like Murong), he really wants to kill him! He is a truly kind and non-hypocritical person!
I really like it! ! ! ! I really feel that everyone is very three-dimensional! ! ! ! By the way, I really do! ! ! I want a side story! ! !
Ah... Just... Gone, how beautiful this is ಥ⌣ಥಥ⌣ಥಥ⌣ಥಥ⌣ಥ😭😭😭
It's a sweet story that's perfect for reading before going to bed [Sending Hearts] It's a little sad in the middle, but it's not a big problem! The boss loves every character he writes. Xiao Shen and Xiao Gu have a very healthy love. I will follow the boss next time he writes a story. Love you forever~
I really like it. It's a short story. I feel like the whole article is quite sweet.
I really like Master and Disciple, but I don't dare to watch Shen Xiang's side story. He will probably be very sadistic. I like it very much. I also like Gu Tianlang's kind and straight-forward attitude. I like it.
It's beautiful, very nice, a very gentle story, and the main character is sweet. The characters are each unique in their portrayalヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ノ"
Gu Gu and Brother Yu have the same philosophy. They are masters and disciples, confidants, lovers, and husbands. They will spend the rest of their lives happily together. I wish Baijiang CP, Building Blocks CP, and Gu Chen CP happiness. I am very happy ٩(๑^o^๑)۶. My colleagues who read this book enjoyed a wonderful journey together. Although there were regrets, it ended well.
Why is the score so low, but it's really beautiful
It's very interesting. It's hard for me to get out of this book. I just finished reading Shen's extra and immediately read the whole book again. I felt sorry for Shen Xiangyu. Before he was 14 years old, the world had not been kind to him. After he was 14 years old, Gu's arrival made his world warm and beautiful. This is a really touching book about redemption, and it directly touched my heart.
Who knows? I really like this kind of attack, it's so awesome
Among the many articles of the same type that I have read, this one is one of the rare ones that does not drag on. I really like the characters of the two protagonists. Many of the characters I have seen before are not particularly full-bodied, but this article about Shen made me feel very distressed. Fortunately, I have Gu by his side now. Unfortunately, this article has too few words and is a bit unfinished.
I really like this kind of [laughing][laughing][laughing]. It's this type of writing that really touches my heart. I really like it in big letters.
I can't use more words to describe this book. I can only say that it is very good-looking. You will feel that everyone has his own personality characteristics. He is not a one-sided paper person, and there is no need to rely on supporting characters to set off the protagonist. Each person's experience alone is a book. When you look at him, you will feel as if living with others should be so ordinary, without any excitement. The protagonist will consider problems from the perspective of others and will not be superior just because he has a God's perspective. The description of feelings in this book is also very delicate. You will feel as if you should be so sincere when you like someone. The most interesting thing about this book is that it is a sweet novel, but it is unambiguous. I burst into tears when I read it at night. I felt that the three years in the sect and the sweet time in the future were stained with a layer of sadness because of the ten-year difference. It is not an exaggeration to describe it as regret. It is like the shortcomings we will experience in life. It is not too painful, but there is always a shadow hanging over our heads and lingering. I'm not the main character and I can't sympathize with it, but I just feel a faint sense of regret rather than heart-wrenching pain. When you see some small characters, you will also feel that they are real. They also have their own lives in places that cannot be seen through the lens of the book. Although the author didn't do a good job of laying out and progressing the emotions at the beginning, and there are still some dissatisfactions at the end, there is nothing dissatisfying about it.
It really made me cry and laugh and cry and laugh sometimes.
It's been a long time since I've seen such good articles on Tomato, they're all good people T T…
Why does such a beautiful novel have such a low rating? My heart is about to be burst by it. Tears, pain, refreshment, dessert.
The content is rich and interesting, with both sweet and sadistic attacks. It's very interesting to watch.
After watching it, from the extra episode to the very beginning, someone who is so gentle even when he turns dark is really nice to watch.
The emotions are delicate, but there are bugs in some places and it's not very reasonable.
There may not be a bug, I just felt the ending was a bit rushed.
Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! !
Real! Really good-looking! Well written!
Beautiful, top quality [heartfelt gift]. Nothing to say!
Condensed review: So beautiful
Super pretty
Looks good, senior sister and senior brother are doing well
I think the author is quite thick and long. Very conscientious. [Shy][shy][shy][shy]
Let me talk about the conclusion first (personal perspective is very subjective) [Xianpin] [True two-way rush] Let me first talk about the bad aspects of this book. The author said that this was the first time he wrote a long novel. There was no outline when writing it, so the plot connection was not smooth in some places. For me, some places were a bit pretentious, and I could even tell that a lot of settings were added in the middle and later stages. If it was written well, it would not be a problem to write three times more words. Okay, then I'll start praising you. The writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, sweet and vulgar, and you can enjoy watching it without thinking. In fact, after opening the first chapter, I can roughly guess the direction of the plot. I think there are many parts that are very brilliant, and I can't finish them in detail. I find the plot setting of the final boss very interesting, because in this article there is a blood feud between humans and demons, and their positions are extremely antagonistic. Han Yizhi, as the leader of the Immortal Sect, is a bit cliche whether he becomes a boss through evil, or randomly finds someone else to become a boss, or attacks someone and becomes a boss. Attack and Shou have always walked hand in hand. As he said, Gong's request is to live well with Shou from beginning to end. For this reason, he is willing to end the war and create a peaceful world. Han Yizhi couldn't believe it, but in the end he gave in for peace and let go of his obsession. They all have legitimate reasons for turning ugly, but none of them have it.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, I'm so sweet. I was so sweet when I watched it late at night. I finished reading their story without even realizing it. It's so awesome! ! In fact, I think this one was killed 2999 times, and I don't hate you. I really took this setting seriously for the first time! There is a feeling of "I just love you, I just like you, it doesn't matter even if you kill me, as long as you kill me", the plot is very good! Highly recommended! The processing and rendering of the middle part are great! It made me want to cry and laugh at the same time. I cried because I was really affected by the plot, and I laughed because Gu Tianlang and Shen Xiangyu are so cute. They are so invincible and cute, okay? ! ! I strongly recommend it, the plot is really great in a novel with so many bloody, forced love (there is no forced love in this book, I mean most of the Tomato Nantong novels are of this type now, don't rush to criticize, I also like forced love❤️), strong and powerful type novels, the plot is really great! Very novel! When it comes to the plot where tradition begins to force love, do you think it's about to begin? No, no, no, it's actually our Shen Xiaoyang who started playing sweet with you, getting us candies to eat [shy] [shy] Strong recommendation! Real! ! [Angry][angry][angry]
Really like it! This is the master-disciple story I've been looking for! There is no forced love (I really don't like the plot of forced love), and there is quite a lot of content before the blackening (I really like the sweet atmosphere in the early stage, but there is very little in this aspect in other stories). The master's character is good, and Xiang Yu is also very good. Hope they are all well! Don't be sad, it's really well written. (If you want to go further, I think the focus is on logic. The latter part is a bit unclear. In fact, the first part is okay. But the writing is very good, and it is a bit advanced. Keep up the good work) [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]
After reading it, Shen Xiangyu's life experience is really tragic, but fortunately, he met Gu Chenglang, and the rest is really sweet to me (I'm secretly mentioning it, Brother Shen, you are such a love brain) I really like Gu Chengqiu, not sloppy at all [Love]
This is the most comfortable book I have ever read in Tomato. There was no weird plot, no awkward character settings, it just went on so smoothly. It's very beautiful, the writing is great, and the characters' emotions are all on point. I love it.
Woohoo, I've read it three or four times, and I really can't find the meal replacement QAQ for this novel! Every bit really pokes at me! It's really beautiful! And it really doesn't compete with females! And they are very gentle towards women! Maybe it's gentle to everyone's perspective? Although the word "female competition" is not often heard in dual-male protagonists, there are often male protagonists competing with female protagonists, and then creating some facial makeup female counterparts. But the two female supporting characters in this article have great personalities! And! It's not like he needs to be protected at all! The setting of this male patron is that men have almost no Yin spirit roots, and the Yin energy is heavier than that of women. When Nangong scolded him for not having a manly smell, his inner slander was what is a manly smell, and what a man should smell like. Oh, I can't explain clearly. Just like in real life, when someone scolds him for not having a manly smell, he responds with "What do I smell like? What does a man smell like?" The conflict with Nangong is also the same. Rather than killing her, wouldn't it be more satisfying to convince her to praise him for being handsome? Anyway, I think every character is really three-dimensional! Her two little apprentices are so cute in the extras! I really feel that I can't stand it! I really think the chapter about the little robber is very well written. Rather than being aloof and pointing out all beings just because you are strong, you have many perspectives, so you can empathize with the suffering of others, but your judgment of the facts will not be affected by excess sympathy. He is really bad (like Murong), he really wants to kill him! He is a truly kind and non-hypocritical person! I really like it! ! ! ! I really feel that everyone is very three-dimensional! ! ! ! By the way, I really do! ! ! I want a side story! ! !
Ah... Just... Gone, how beautiful this is ಥ⌣ಥಥ⌣ಥಥ⌣ಥಥ⌣ಥ😭😭😭
It's a sweet story that's perfect for reading before going to bed [Sending Hearts] It's a little sad in the middle, but it's not a big problem! The boss loves every character he writes. Xiao Shen and Xiao Gu have a very healthy love. I will follow the boss next time he writes a story. Love you forever~
I really like it. It's a short story. I feel like the whole article is quite sweet. I really like Master and Disciple, but I don't dare to watch Shen Xiang's side story. He will probably be very sadistic. I like it very much. I also like Gu Tianlang's kind and straight-forward attitude. I like it.
It's beautiful, very nice, a very gentle story, and the main character is sweet. The characters are each unique in their portrayalヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ノ" Gu Gu and Brother Yu have the same philosophy. They are masters and disciples, confidants, lovers, and husbands. They will spend the rest of their lives happily together. I wish Baijiang CP, Building Blocks CP, and Gu Chen CP happiness. I am very happy ٩(๑^o^๑)۶. My colleagues who read this book enjoyed a wonderful journey together. Although there were regrets, it ended well.
Why is the score so low, but it's really beautiful
It's very interesting. It's hard for me to get out of this book. I just finished reading Shen's extra and immediately read the whole book again. I felt sorry for Shen Xiangyu. Before he was 14 years old, the world had not been kind to him. After he was 14 years old, Gu's arrival made his world warm and beautiful. This is a really touching book about redemption, and it directly touched my heart.
Who knows? I really like this kind of attack, it's so awesome
Among the many articles of the same type that I have read, this one is one of the rare ones that does not drag on. I really like the characters of the two protagonists. Many of the characters I have seen before are not particularly full-bodied, but this article about Shen made me feel very distressed. Fortunately, I have Gu by his side now. Unfortunately, this article has too few words and is a bit unfinished.
Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good
Really very beautiful
I really like this kind of [laughing][laughing][laughing]. It's this type of writing that really touches my heart. I really like it in big letters.
I can't use more words to describe this book. I can only say that it is very good-looking. You will feel that everyone has his own personality characteristics. He is not a one-sided paper person, and there is no need to rely on supporting characters to set off the protagonist. Each person's experience alone is a book. When you look at him, you will feel as if living with others should be so ordinary, without any excitement. The protagonist will consider problems from the perspective of others and will not be superior just because he has a God's perspective. The description of feelings in this book is also very delicate. You will feel as if you should be so sincere when you like someone. The most interesting thing about this book is that it is a sweet novel, but it is unambiguous. I burst into tears when I read it at night. I felt that the three years in the sect and the sweet time in the future were stained with a layer of sadness because of the ten-year difference. It is not an exaggeration to describe it as regret. It is like the shortcomings we will experience in life. It is not too painful, but there is always a shadow hanging over our heads and lingering. I'm not the main character and I can't sympathize with it, but I just feel a faint sense of regret rather than heart-wrenching pain. When you see some small characters, you will also feel that they are real. They also have their own lives in places that cannot be seen through the lens of the book. Although the author didn't do a good job of laying out and progressing the emotions at the beginning, and there are still some dissatisfactions at the end, there is nothing dissatisfying about it.
It really made me cry and laugh and cry and laugh sometimes. It's been a long time since I've seen such good articles on Tomato, they're all good people T T…
Why does such a beautiful novel have such a low rating? My heart is about to be burst by it. Tears, pain, refreshment, dessert.
The content is rich and interesting, with both sweet and sadistic attacks. It's very interesting to watch.
After watching it, from the extra episode to the very beginning, someone who is so gentle even when he turns dark is really nice to watch.
The emotions are delicate, but there are bugs in some places and it's not very reasonable. There may not be a bug, I just felt the ending was a bit rushed.
Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! !
Real! Really good-looking! Well written!
Beautiful, top quality [heartfelt gift]. Nothing to say!
Condensed review: So beautiful
Super pretty
Looks good, senior sister and senior brother are doing well