Pirate************

You can tell. It must be the first time for the author to write a book, and the outline is definitely not much. I suggest the author to read more works of great masters. There are many places that can actually be lubricated and read more smoothly. Although of no use. But it feels comfortable to read, and more readers will definitely stay. Although I cannot write at the current level of the author. But I can't help it, I've seen too much. To some extent, I have developed some appreciation skills.

The writing is pretty good, but I don't know why, but I've only seen it recommended once. There is another novel that is similar to this novel and was published at the same time. Called the Mechanic is similar to the title of this book, but the title has been changed a bit. His style at that time was completely opposite to this book. The writing was pretty good, but it was a little pessimistic in the early stages, but I didn't know about it later on, because I was a bit eeo at the time, and after it was over, I didn't want to read it. Yu Fan created some bad emotions for me and then brought them into reality. But I often see this book on recommendations. I don't know why, but this book should be written quite well.

So far it looks pretty good, author, cheers

Not bad, come on, I have a question, I wonder what kind of weapons can be forged from devil fruits [laughing] [laughing]

The protagonist setting is quite interesting

So far so good. If there are too many words, it might become popular.

I really like forging novels

Not bad, not bad, a pretty good novel, keep up the good work

Different pirate stories

Not bad, relatively excellent

The identity setting of the blacksmith is very interesting, and I'm really looking forward to how the author will write it later.

It's a pretty good ending. The closing part is skipped very cleverly. It's much better than most chapters that don't know how to deal with the East China Sea.

One chapter is 4,000 words. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not do that.

Don't say anything, just go and see for yourself [blowing kiss]

Five-star encouragement. There are too few tomatoes and boats. Come on, author.

I like this setting and the protagonist's force system

I am Ornn with the hammer, the horn blast,

I think it looks pretty good so far.

Is Chopper gone? [Laughing awkwardly]

A very good book, keep up the good work, the author is great