One Piece: The Straw Hat Pirates' Master Smith

You can tell. It must be the first time for the author to write a book, and the outline is definitely not much. I suggest the author to read more works of great masters. There are many places that can actually be lubricated and read more smoothly. Although of no use. But it feels comfortable to read, and more readers will definitely stay. Although I cannot write at the current level of the author. But I can't help it, I've seen too much. To some extent, I have developed some appreciation skills.

This forging is too traditional. Not to mention the fanatic armor, MC enchantment and other buggy things, at least it can also forge the Imperial Equipment of the Red Killing World. Otherwise, these traditional equipment will be gone if they are too powerful to use.

The writing is pretty good, but I don't know why, but I've only seen it recommended once. There is another novel that is similar to this novel and was published at the same time. Called the Mechanic is similar to the title of this book, but the title has been changed a bit. His style at that time was completely opposite to this book. The writing was pretty good, but it was a little pessimistic in the early stages, but I didn't know about it later on, because I was a bit eeo at the time, and after it was over, I didn't want to read it. Yu Fan created some bad emotions for me and then brought them into reality. But I often see this book on recommendations. I don't know why, but this book should be written quite well.

Apart from the addition of a person, what are the differences from the original work?

About fifty chapters in, the protagonist went directly to the Celestial Dragons. If I hadn't known that the author was a newbie, I would have thought that the novel was written by someone else. Those who want to see the protagonist without fruit abilities should leave quickly. He was force-fed fruits and did not dare to die. This plot, my God, I thought that there was some novel work in the One Piece series of novels, but this is the result

The Blacksmith is indeed a good subject, but the author writes it too quickly and briefly. Many dialogues, conflicts, etc. Are just mentioned in one sentence. It is over in a few sentences. The previous point of the plot is not understood yet and it is on to the next one. We cannot directly assume that the reader completely remembers the plot, right? It would be better if you write something of your own to enrich the content.

Not bad, come on, I have a question, I wonder what kind of weapons can be forged from devil fruits 🤭 🤭

So far it looks pretty good, author, cheers

The type is good, the characters are well-balanced

The protagonist setting is quite interesting