Douluo Dalu: Devouring Tang San from the Start

The writing is indeed a bit rubbish. The protagonist can't even defeat Dai Mubai. He insists on getting a Blue Silver Grass martial spirit and the Haotian Hammer. Why does the protagonist have to be named Tang Lin? What kind of rewards does this system reward? It's useless at all. Have you ever seen a system that doesn't reward awesome treasures or cultivation and soul rings? What kind of garbage is your system's rewards?

The forced restriction is too harsh. Even with such a great start, it would be difficult to defeat Dai Mubai. . . . Slipping away [covering face] [covering face]

Not bad, great

The protagonist has been completely destroyed by you. He has just awakened and reached level 20. That's it. If you want to write a systematic article, then write it well, without imposing any restrictions. Let's take a look. . Rubbish

The writing is generally readable

Everyone, go back and look at it from the beginning.

Rubbish…

Unfinished building garbage