After Turning into a Girl, My Enemy Showed Up at My Door

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It suits my taste. I just hope it's not too cruel. Just reach the level of sweet suffer. Don't go too far.

What I want to say is... Isn't the protagonist's temperament change a bit too curved, suddenly happy and suddenly sad? In fact, Lily could have been written in a more depressed tone. After all, she was bullied so badly before and yet one day later she seemed fine. The emotional change was too sudden. Of course, this kind of thing is just a suggestion, the specific details will depend on the author [laughs]

All I can say after watching this is that it's so cruel. It's a masterpiece among Chusheng's novels. The ultimate sword makes people want to stop. Although the protagonist is not a good person, but there is also the Newborn King outside the Newborn circle. He has witnessed the protagonist being restrained and free, and being beaten in all kinds of SM ways. And because he caused the death of his friend's family, he was reluctantly abandoned by his family. All kinds of buffs are superimposed. I sympathize with the protagonist. It hurts. It hurts too much. It belongs to the "Don't Watch It and Regret It for Billion Years" series. The five stars have been paid in installments. If the ending is not unfinished, it will also be the existence of T1 in Transformation. One last comment, Chen Heyue can chase his wife in the crematorium in the end but forget about the cp. Di Ying is the true love. The price paid is too great. Let Di Ying get a happy ending.

This book has been greatly revised. I don't know if the author is interested in setting up a fan group to post the original version in it. Some of the small details that are more erotic have been deleted. I will add a little bit to the first few pictures. You can read the comments, but I only gave a general description because I read it at night and fell asleep after reading it. I can't remember it.

You can write the emperor's infant to death first, and then write the protagonist's parents to death. In the end, the protagonist collapses and commits suicide, suffers from mental problems, or dies of depression, leaving the heroine... (My own imagination [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing])

Okay, okay, sadistic writing suits my taste

It's very good. The heroine's behavior seems quite refreshing, and it feels like reading a refreshing novel. Chen Heyue dared to love and hate, and he also had the brains to kill Guangduan. Even if you want to pursue someone, it's not just mindless licking and pleasing. Much better than a certain Feng Aotian with a similar name. (After being bullied and humiliated like that, he didn't take revenge after being reborn, but licked people like a dog. The other one was even more ridiculous, chasing his wife in the crematorium. He clearly didn't show any sincerity to her, but he still said that he liked her. Everything he did was done with purpose. She wanted to run away and do the mission, but she was so bright and grand, and the settings of the two protagonists were completely ruined.) The description of Bai Lili in this book is also very good. She bullied and humiliated others before, but now she is in the hands of others, no matter how they treat her, she can accept atonement. The plot also progresses very quickly, without too much drama. For example, when dealing with a pink-haired friend, he quickly brought down the company as well. It's really fun to watch. Poor people must be hateful. This book is really cool to read from Chen Heyue's perspective. A proper villain and protagonist character, removing all obstacles and forcing love at the same time 🤭 I was really disgusted. Became frustrated and speechless. Especially in this ending, Chen Heyue became a complete clown.

If the book looks good and is written like this, will it be blocked?

I feel like it's still not BT enough, or maybe I'm too BT [laughing]