After Turning into a Girl, the Enemy Blocked the Door

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It suits my taste. I just hope it's not too cruel. Just reach the level of sweet suffer. Don't go too far.

What I want to say is... Isn't the protagonist's temperament change a bit too curved, suddenly happy and suddenly sad? In fact, Lily could have been written in a more depressed tone. After all, she was bullied so badly before and yet one day later she seemed fine. The emotional change was too sudden. Of course, this kind of thing is just a suggestion, the specific details will depend on the author [laughs]

Okay, okay, sadistic writing suits my taste

All I can say after watching this is that it's so cruel. It's a masterpiece among Chusheng's novels. The ultimate sword makes people want to stop. Although the protagonist is not a good person, but there is also the Newborn King outside the Newborn circle. He has witnessed the protagonist being restrained and free, and being beaten in all kinds of SM ways. And because he caused the death of his friend's family, he was reluctantly abandoned by his family. All kinds of buffs are superimposed. I sympathize with the protagonist. It hurts. It hurts too much. It belongs to the "Don't Watch It and Regret It for Billion Years" series. The five stars have been paid in installments. If the ending is not unfinished, it will also be the existence of T1 in Transformation. One last comment, Chen Heyue can chase his wife in the crematorium in the end but forget about the cp. Di Ying is the true love. The price paid is too great. Let Di Ying get a happy ending.

You can write the emperor's infant to death first, and then write the protagonist's parents to death. In the end, the protagonist collapses and commits suicide, suffers from mental problems, or dies of depression, leaving the heroine... (My own imagination [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing])

This book has been greatly revised. I don't know if the author is interested in setting up a fan group to post the original version in it. Some of the small details that are more erotic have been deleted. I will add a little bit to the first few pictures. You can read the comments, but I only gave a general description because I read it at night and fell asleep after reading it. I can't remember it.

If the book looks good and is written like this, will it be blocked?

It's very good. The heroine's behavior seems quite refreshing, and it feels like reading a refreshing novel. Chen Heyue dared to love and hate, and he also had the brains to kill Guangduan. Even if you want to pursue someone, it's not just mindless licking and pleasing. Much better than a certain Feng Aotian with a similar name. (After being bullied and humiliated like that, he didn't take revenge after being reborn, but licked people like a dog. The other one was even more ridiculous, chasing his wife in the crematorium. He clearly didn't show any sincerity to her, but he still said that he liked her. Everything he did was done with purpose. She wanted to run away and do the mission, but she was so bright and grand, and the settings of the two protagonists were completely ruined.) The description of Bai Lili in this book is also very good. She bullied and humiliated others before, but now she is in the hands of others, no matter how they treat her, she can accept atonement. The plot also progresses very quickly, without too much drama. For example, when dealing with a pink-haired friend, he quickly brought down the company as well. It's really fun to watch. Poor people must be hateful. This book is really cool to read from Chen Heyue's perspective. A proper villain and protagonist character, removing all obstacles and forcing love at the same time [laughing] I was really disgusted. Became frustrated and speechless. Especially in this ending, Chen Heyue became a complete clown.

I feel like it's still not BT enough, or maybe I'm too BT [laughing]

It's very well written, and I'm very satisfied with it, but I don't know why so few people have read it.

Although it's very funny and twisted, I really can't imagine that after what Chen did, will Bai really fall in love with her?

Give me good torture, either death or injury, hate caused by love, heartache that makes you unable to breathe, or mental collapse, these are my favorites There are also the protagonist's friends and family who died because of her. Everything the protagonist cherishes has turned into nothing. The ending was never thought of from the beginning.

It's okay, it's interesting. Just don't be a sweetheart. Watch it well, I didn't feel much at first, but when I saw the torture part, I was instantly excited [licking the screen], and it's quite bt, which suits my taste.

In the third chapter, there is rain from Qinchuan, entering the pass, and the torch of Afang, the king of Han is the true dragon, king and tiger. The king was speechless when Yu Jue mentioned it three times. Grandma Weng abandoned the cup of soup on the tripod. King Xiang was a real dragon and a rat in Han Dynasty. The beauty in Gaixia weeps in sorrowful songs, the beauty in Dingtao weeps in sorrow and dances, the real dragon is also a rat, the tiger is also a rat.

This is the first novel to be given 4 stars. If I hadn't entered it, the ending might have been different. After reading it, I doubted my mental state and views on hatred. I don't know how the author wrote it down. I still think the reason for entering the novel was

You can torture me some more 🤏 [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Even more nice

It's very beautiful, I like it a lot, but because I personally can't stand such abuse [laughing and crying] it's so sad It seems that we can only wait for Di Ying to stimulate the protagonist [laughing evilly] Ah... Ah? This, this, this... Is it over so soon? Σ(ŎдŎ|||)ﾉﾉ

Looks great, so cool! It must be five stars, otherwise I will feel sorry for the author!

It looks good, when will it become less cruel?

It's really good-looking. I suggest you make the main character as desperate as you can. Anyway, the knife won't kill you. It's really unpleasant to watch the perverted heroine being tortured to death by the knife.

I want to see rivers of blood╰(‵□′)╯

Good luck to the author!

Full marks, must be full marks, this is a natural decision

Torture it harder, torture it longer [licking the screen] Sweet or whatever, the ending is fine [Please update] I didn't expect it to be so short, and the torture wasn't enough. In the end, I forced a happy ending. An ending without procrastination and an ending that is almost cut in half are not the same thing. There was obviously a lot more that could be said, but in the end, "n years later", all grudges were gone, Chen killed Ying's whole family, and the landlord actually planned to keep Chen by force, without consulting Ying at all... It's interesting in the front, but it sucks in the back [sad]

The abuse story is very well written, and it makes people feel very desperate when entering it, but it still doesn't feel sad enough. After all, Bai Lili's treatment of Chen Heyue when he was a child was also abuse, and it could be more abusive.

It's a very creative Baihuawen, I like it. But there's something weird inside that I can't put my finger on. Give 5 stars⭐ to encourage the author [laughs]

Very nice, cheers author

Di Ying is quite pitiful

So perverted, I like it so much [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]