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Not bad, the idea is novel, but I feel that the protagonist is not suitable for having a girlfriend. I am mainly afraid that the author will not be able to write emotional scenes, which will lead to a waste of a novel with a better idea. Of course, the author can write it... (Preferably without a female protagonist). It is okay for now. I hope the author will not stop updating it. After it is completed, I will read it again and see if I want to change the five stars. Finally, cheers to the author＾0＾~! As for the writing style~ I don't have much objection (the above is my own opinion, don't read it if you don't like it), of course it's too short now, only 50 chapters! Not enough, I hope the author can update it soon! ! !

It's hard to come across an interesting book. Can you write more about the player's perspective? I want to see players go crazy (◦˙▽˙◦) The book the author is currently writing has been showing a downward trend in fan views. I would like to make a small suggestion, which is to write more interesting points and more interactive plots between the protagonist and real players. In addition, it should be updated every day. If it is not updated for too long, readers will no longer expect it so much. Finally, I will always be a loyal reader of the author! (◦˙▽˙◦)

I think this book has the potential to become a big fire. It has 5 stars at this time. When will there be more?

Do you understand "Sinner's Dance Steps"? If you change it for Xiao Li, they will definitely be very happy if it doesn't become popular again.

There are opinions, but I feel that the main attraction should be the game. You can give more exposure to the characters and show them from multiple perspectives. For example, other characters' evaluations of the protagonist can be imitated and written according to the game format, and then add various guesses from the strategy masters.

Five-star Xiaoli (Tonghe): Taihang Balance (combat skill) creates a Bagua array, and our damage is increased by 10%. Mechanism: Divided into [good omen] and [bad omen] Good omens include: [Offense as defense] All attack power increased by %20 [Sturdy as a rock] Defense power increased [Swift as a fierce fire] Speed increased [Everything is ready, only the east wind is needed] All enemies are weathered [Fire Burning] Burn all over [Omen] [Blade of Destruction] Increase the attack power of all enemies [Guardian of Ice] Increase the defense power of all enemies [Scorching Sun] Burn all allies [Strike Sweep] Needless to say, [Destruction Day] starts counting rounds, and the battle fails after four rounds [Lord of Annihilation] All allies lose 99% of their HP. [Balance Array] mechanism: Whenever our character uses a combat skill or attack (ultimate move), an effect is randomly selected from the fortune. The buff effect is yellow and the bad omen effect is red. If the balance array is used again, the fortune will be reset. The ultimate move [Destroy Equilibrium] causes damage to all enemies and restores luck. You should think about your own behavior, don't criticize if you don't do well. [Good omen] Shake hands and make peace: Restore all record points [Good luck] [Revenge] Damage increased by 50% [Bad omen] Don't say goodbye: Lose record points

The cover is a bit stretchy, but the content is good. There should be no female protagonist, and the male protagonist is a combination of the best of a hundred schools of thought, having fun everywhere. I would like to make a suggestion, the author can let the male protagonist hand out knives to the players. Ah, it's interesting to think about it. Isn't it more popular to be beautiful, strong and miserable? I'm not a noob at writing, but I can read it, and I'll give it a try if I'm short on books. I'll stock up on the content before I review it. I saw a book with similar content on other platforms, but this one was simply blown away by others. Come on, author, it's good to write well and practice your writing.

It's nice to watch. Although I don't play railways, this type of theme is quite novel. It's the first time I've seen it. The protagonist's ability is optimized based on the popularity of the protagonist. Moreover, it's also a lot of fun to draw cards outside the game and bet on dogs in the game✧(≖◡≖✿)

It's a good subject matter, but I think there's too little description of the main character's appearance. I can't imagine it and draw a fanart. Wow.

This will definitely become popular, give it a five-star rating

Nice! Great! But can you describe the appearance of the main character?👉👈 Various shapes, hair color, eye color, so far I can only see one who is delicate or good-looking, but I have no sense of immersion, and I can't think of the main character [I'm about to cry] But in one of the chapters, the protagonist leaned over and patted Sambo on the shoulder. He should be very tall. And the author's writing is great, come on! [Love]

Design role: Xiao Li Star rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Destiny: Preservation Attribute: fire Image: Wearing fiery red heavy armor, with giant hands similar to those of the Star God floating on his arms. Normal attack: Consume one action point to cause a fire element attack to a single enemy target, and cause an additional 50% attack to the two people next to the target, and cause a (thermal) effect. Skill: Consume one action point to cast a fire element shield on our target and yourself, and also cast a fire element shield with 50% effect on the two people next to the target. When the enemy attacks the shield, the current character will counterattack and cause a (heating) effect. Ultimate move: Consume one action point to summon the phantom of the guardian star god to cause fire element damage and a (heat burning) effect to the enemy group, and summon a layer of shield wall. The enemy's attacks will attack the shield wall first. The shield wall has an independent health value. Each attack ends After the end, patch the shield wall with bricks (brick patching effect: restore the health of the shield wall). After the round ends, the phantom of the Star God will cause fire element damage to the enemy group and cause a (heating) effect. (The shield wall and the phantom of the Star God last for three rounds) Hot burning: When the target causes hot burning effect, the character will continue to suffer fire attribute damage that day, and when the fire attribute damage is caused, the self-ignition effect will be detonated to cause additional damage.

It's beautiful and interesting, but I have a small expectation. I hope the author can refer to it. As a Mijia game, how can it not have a knife? ? There must be ah ah ah! Personally, I hope that the knife can ambush the light cone picture, such as the light cone picture of Xueyi. The four-star light cone picture has been decided, and I can wait for the five-star light cone picture. After all, the main character wouldn't be the main character if he didn't have a knife buried under him. Personally, I hope that the surface of the light cone is a withered potted plant, and then the background is the female version of Xiaoli with her eyes closed and crying. This way, the buff will be full, and it will have the smell of a knife and the incredible and interesting possibility of sexual transformation. It is so interesting! ! The skill of Light Vertebra is to burn blood

Mom gives you a thumbs up [blowing kiss] ~ Players can interact more, otherwise it will look a bit weird

It's pretty good. The main thing is to pay attention to the rationality of the protagonist's panel and the reactions of real players.

By the way, who actually voices Xiao Li [Chigua]

It looks good, I don't know what to say, that's all.

Suddenly there was a sense of joy. Aren't the silver branches talking to the potted plants? Will the novel feature potted plants and silver branches as the protagonists? Just thinking about it makes me happy [laughing evilly]

The subject matter is very new, imaginative but not obtrusive, just like the real original characters of the train group in Bengtie, good reviews!

The protagonist's exclusive light cone: 50% probability of releasing an extra time when releasing a combat skill. This combat skill does not consume combat skill points, and the light cone effect cannot be enjoyed. 1 Life: Basic attack has a 50% chance to add an effect to the enemy for 3 rounds: defense is reduced by 35%, speed is reduced by 35%, damage received is increased by 35%, and treatment received is reduced by 35%. Effective for 1 turn on elites and boss monsters 2 lives: 50% chance of becoming an overall effect when releasing a combat skill 4 lives: 50% chance of releasing an additional combat skill after releasing the ultimate move. This combat skill does not consume combat skill points. 6 Lives: After releasing the ultimate move, your own probability becomes 100% for 3 rounds, and you will gain an enhanced combat skill. (Enhanced combat skills: obtain 3 combat skills effects at the same time)

I used to want to find out if the protagonist is a four-star or five-star character in Star Iron, who is loved by players because of his strong skills. Now I found this book [Send Heart][Send Heart]

I watch the sky at night and do calculations with my fingers. This book is bound to be popular🔥

Although I can enjoy this novel alone, I might as well invite you all to enjoy it together! [Love][Please update]

The subject matter is relatively new among the fics I have read, and the plot cannot be said to be very exciting, but it is still relatively good, at least it will not make people feel bored.

I think it's quite interesting and novel. At least it's pretty good for now. I don't want to go further, I just want to maintain the status quo.

Please update the author! I give you five stars! Update soon! You haven't updated in a month! (Dark and twisted crawl)

I almost put this book away, but luckily I saw it.

I don't know why the rating isn't very high, but it's really good-looking. To be honest, I have played Star Railway for a while before, but I quit it after a short time, but I do want to go back to it after reading this novel. I hope the author can write better and better. Let our Mijia novels have a place among Tomato's free novels.

It's very nice to be ranked in the five-star ranking. "The task of walking with the silver branches to praise and say goodbye to the potted plants made me think about it."

Wuhu! It's a very novel setting. I hope the author can stick to it and finish it. Come on!