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Reader comments
He is indeed doted on by God, who sheds tears every day. He doesn't tell anyone if he can, and calls it a beautiful name without knowing how to explain it. He hides his identity and avoids his wife and daughter when doing things. Then his wife and daughter are always afraid that he will be beaten to death, and they are frightened every time.
Single heroine?
There are many typos, the realm alternates between transformation and inner energy (the same chapter has been wrong several times). The protagonist killed several transformations before. After more than ten chapters, all the people and forces present at that time have never seen the transformation, let alone killed. There are also mirror realm divisions, and some small realms such as the early stage of inner strength are nested within small realms.
I have the following thoughts about this novel:
First, the author is probably a young male author between 20 and 40 years old, because the novel contains a lot of swear words and modern language. Women cannot write it.
Second, the male protagonist has been cultivating immortals for three thousand years and has lived in the human world for ten years. So how did the child come about in these ten years? Did the husband and wife separate in these ten years?
Third, it's a bit ridiculous to return to the human world and almost build a foundation. How can you still be so powerful?
There are too many typos, the chapters are not connected, and the order is out of order.
Hmm hmm hmm hmm
Not bad, I like it
Beautifully written
Another name, another new book?
NT plot text
The male protagonist is rubbish, verbose and useless, and he acts like he is invincible all day long. After reading more than ten chapters, his low IQ dropped even further [shocked]
Have my previous negative reviews been deleted? [Laughing]
He is indeed doted on by God, who sheds tears every day. He doesn't tell anyone if he can, and calls it a beautiful name without knowing how to explain it. He hides his identity and avoids his wife and daughter when doing things. Then his wife and daughter are always afraid that he will be beaten to death, and they are frightened every time.
Single heroine?
There are many typos, the realm alternates between transformation and inner energy (the same chapter has been wrong several times). The protagonist killed several transformations before. After more than ten chapters, all the people and forces present at that time have never seen the transformation, let alone killed. There are also mirror realm divisions, and some small realms such as the early stage of inner strength are nested within small realms.
I have the following thoughts about this novel: First, the author is probably a young male author between 20 and 40 years old, because the novel contains a lot of swear words and modern language. Women cannot write it. Second, the male protagonist has been cultivating immortals for three thousand years and has lived in the human world for ten years. So how did the child come about in these ten years? Did the husband and wife separate in these ten years? Third, it's a bit ridiculous to return to the human world and almost build a foundation. How can you still be so powerful?
There are too many typos, the chapters are not connected, and the order is out of order.
Hmm hmm hmm hmm
Not bad, I like it
Beautifully written
Another name, another new book?
NT plot text
The male protagonist is rubbish, verbose and useless, and he acts like he is invincible all day long. After reading more than ten chapters, his low IQ dropped even further [shocked]
Have my previous negative reviews been deleted? [Laughing]