Quick Transmigration: A Handbook for Raising a Heartthrob

How to say it? I like the original character of the heroine very much, but the author's description is too little. The story also brings into the life of the original heroine, and each story is quite concise, like a flesh-and-blood outline. I think the protagonist's perspective of the story can be brought into the heroine's perspective, but her behavior can be close to the original character, because this will give readers a better sense of involvement. The direction of the story will not change much from the author's original outline. On the contrary, it will be more interesting because of the interaction between the heroine and the system. I think the main problem with this article is that the story line is too short. I think it is necessary to have more scenes and some emotional twists and turns. After all, it is an otome emotional line. If the author could listen to some suggestions from readers, I think the standard of this article would be higher. The first world can be summarized in these few sentences. "You love me, but I love your brother, but you didn't agree with us, so we were forced to separate, and then ran away." It really tortured the male protagonist. Although the plot twist is cliché, it is indeed classic and interesting, but it is too dry and needs polishing.

Ah? I'm a new author, so it's hard to comment on the transition. The heroine's personality is quite different before and after, and it's not explained clearly. And I can't understand it. Didn't the original owner obviously want the emperor to love her? Why are you so entangled in your relationship with King Jing? I don't have a clear purpose, I can't fall in love, I don't have a career, I really don't understand what I want to do, it's weird

I feel like the chapters are a bit messy. The heroine suddenly dies in the first world. It feels a bit too fast. Overall, it's okay.

I admit that this novel is good, but can you please stop hanging me like this? It's like this every time. Once it reaches the climax, it's gone. It's so uncomfortable. 🌿 No reason for the foreshadowing was revealed. I was really convinced. This is more upsetting than reading a bad book. I came here to pursue happiness. Every time I reach the climax, it disappears. I'm not asking the author to write a side story. I just want to explain it clearly. Even if I know the follow-up from the system or the heroine's mouth, it's really frustrating to be neither good nor bad. Reading the book in the middle of the night made me angry😓

Uh, how come a world suddenly ends?

An immersive fast-travel heartthrob story, the heroine focuses on her own feelings and is not romantically inclined, and there is no lengthy description of her appearance. Personally, I think Little Fox World is the best written. Seeing the author's return, please support me with five stars

It's very beautiful. It's not very long or cumbersome. It has just the right feeling. The female protagonist is very cute and casual. The female protagonist is unclean, but the male protagonists are all clean. It's so beautiful. My family all went to see it 🥰 🥰 🥰 I think it's very interesting. The plot ends suddenly, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable, but it's actually quite good. After reading it for a long time, I just say don't care about these details and just imagine it yourself. It's really good to read. I really like the feeling of this book. The author doesn't have to care about other people's opinions. You write what you write, and there will definitely be people who like to read it, just like me, I like to read [][][]

I just want to know why the next world starts before one world ends.

It's good to watch, but the ending is too hasty. [Shocked] I only watched the third world. What happened to the wedding? Why did the heroine's parents and Song Du come to the wedding? What did Gu Shiyan mean by that sentence? [Shocked] [Shocked]

It was quite interesting, but the plot ended abruptly and I felt a bit frustrated.