The Reincarnated Bone King Failed and Met the Vampire Princess

It looks good [like it], the church is also a true church, there is no other kind of bloody plot where the church must be dark. Looking forward to subsequent updates

The setting and plot are quite good, and it feels similar to my novel writing. We are both new authors, so let's follow each other! We can give each other opinions, who will become popular in the whole linkage or something [laughing]

A good book that is delayed by the title and introduction. Although the title looks like a Bone King fanfic, it is actually an original world view. The introduction is full of information about an ordinary Western fantasy world. There is nothing about the content of the book. If I were not bored, I would have missed it. To put it simply, it's a level-1 professional brother who travels to the game world. Although he has become level 1, he uses his knowledge of the game to become stronger. It's very well written.

I can only say that the writing is very delicate, each character has his or her own plot, and the emotional aspect is also very well written, very sweet, and I love it! Also, you are one of the few people who can write harem stories so perfectly. It is my current ideal type and the different world I expect. Unlike some recent harem stories, which are simply unbearable to look at. It has a good world background and I can see that you have put your heart into it. I look forward to the follow-up [Like] [Please update]

The look and feel is good. The church is the light type that I like rather than the dark church. The characterization... How should I put it, above average, which is considered good among similar novels. The writing is not bad, but it is not very good, but it is still worthy of five stars.

[Wei, many, 12➕] "slow" I haven't watched too much, but I personally feel it's a bit like Sword Art Online. That one is Tower Breaking, and this one is originally a continent. If you are interested, you can try it. This book is not suitable for me at the moment, because recently I just want to read something mindless to relax myself [facepalm]. I looked at the catalog and noticed something, so I randomly selected a few dozen and checked them out. The plot should be good, with multiple women and emotional lines. I have watched a few clips of the female protagonists so far. There should be no template for the female protagonists, and they all have their own characteristics. (Don't take this comment seriously, just refer to it. After all, I don't read much.)

Why is the rating so low? The author's writing is very good. In fact, the introduction can be changed. I was attracted by the title of the book, but after reading it for a while, I found that it was not related to the name, but I was attracted by the plot. In addition, the author, please come on, I'm optimistic about you, don't give up, I love you [love]

As someone who has read for nearly 1,000 hours, this is my first time to comment on a book. I found out about this book two days after it was finished, and it took me three days to read it. The author's portrayal of different characters is quite delicate, and the plot does not drag out. It can be said that the mystery is connected link by link, allowing me to read a million-word novel without skipping chapters for the first time. The author's ideas are really admirable. The nested mysteries and the scientific theories involved all require good literacy. After reading chapter by chapter, I followed the protagonist to analyze the truth of the world. In the end, I didn't have a good understanding, but the explanation given by the author at the end told the reader the truth very clearly. I hope you can read the entire novel patiently before reading the final explanation. I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time. I would like to support the author here.

(There are a little spoilers, but not too much) How can I put it, I have been following it until now, and the character's personality and portrayal are all very online, but the fly in the ointment is that some plots (maybe not the focus now, who knows if they are foreshadowing) are a little too long. I hope the author can keep it as short as possible without affecting the story line. On the basis of this, recycle as much foreshadowing as possible (maybe two updates a day are not enough, hahahahaha, can the author add one more chapter every day? It is really not enough). I understand that the author wants to meet the needs of readers, and balance daily and main lines as much as possible. I think 7:3 for main line: daily is more comfortable (it depends on how big a framework the author wants to build). Recently I was looking through the reviews of this book, and some people said that after reading the first 100 or 200 chapters, I felt like I couldn't finish it anymore. I felt the same way. At the beginning, I was a little confused, such as why Tia has a yandere personality, etc., But after seeing the ideas gradually become clearer, I felt like "Oh, so that's how it is." This is a good book, but the number of readers and popularity are a bit low. Although I know that ratings are not the standard for evaluating the quality of a book. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers, but in my heart this book should be above 9.3. I hope that friends who can read this book review will be patient and follow it. I believe that this book will be considered good. Readers who think it is good should not be stingy about rating it. I think this book deserves a high score from everyone. At the same time, I hope the author can persevere and perfectly depict the grand world view of Oud continent in your heart and in the hearts of our readers. [Laughing]

This book is different from other harem novels. Each character has their own emotional line. The outline of this book is very well written. You can read it as a daily novel. The emotional line starts to develop in the middle of Tiantian. Fighting is fun! The protagonist's character is decisive, not procrastinating, and has a delicate mind Are there any similar ones? I think it's a bit similar to Sword Art Online (Tonga 99) and the main character also has two swords [anger] And all the foreshadowing laid in the early and middle stages have been filled in, but the only thing I'm not sure about is Tang Xin. I'm not sure about her identity after reading it. It's possible that I read it too quickly. Feel free to add more. The only thing that I think may bring down the score is the last chapter 100, which starts from the Golden Forbidden Court. It is obvious that the plot starts to be a little rushed and develops too fast. At the end, when Master Ai travels back to reality, I feel that I can't wrap up the ending. The ending is a bit unclear and not clearly written. The original part that is the final part and can increase the score is not written well, and I feel like something is missing. The concept is really good, the triple combination of dream reality and game, the concept is super perfect, but it is not written clearly, and the ending is a bit too hasty. However, the whole book is really good and interesting. Each protagonist has rich direct emotional lines. It's so sweet! ! ! At the end, you can taste it carefully and it will give you a different flavor. It is a novel worth reading [shy][shy][shy]

The plot, settings, and characters are all very good, and it makes you feel like watching Riqing. But there are also some plot issues, such as whether he died in the Bronze Trial (it was said to be saved at the beginning, but said to be dead later), whether he was given a verdict (the protagonist clearly paid it back in the chapter of guarding the princess castle, but took out the dragon valley again, and it was not explained in the middle), whether the male protagonist's appearance changed on his own in the chapter of the black dragon, etc. It felt like there was a lack of supplements. Overall, the novel is still great. I hope you will also like it. (If you don't like it, don't spray [turn your lips])

A good online game(?) Article, not much related to farming but with the same feeling and slow pace. One thing is that I am now reading chapter 300. The main character got divorced in chapter 64, and the second one has not been confirmed yet. He said he wanted a harem but kept putting it off. He didn't care about anything with Tia, and everything else came out. What pure love, what is impossible, and the favorability system is like he doesn't know how to use it. It gives me the feeling It's just dragging it out, it's obviously a great story at the beginning, the pace is good, the heroine has only been there for a few days, there is no plot, and then the relationship is confirmed, and they are single, and then there is no rush [Eat Melon] I didn't feel it at first, but now it feels more and more like the Asasi harem type. If it weren't for Tia, a proper Liu Xia Hui [Eat Melon] 64-341 would be pretty awesome

It has nothing to do with reality at all, it is almost a pure western fantasy, the system is only a little bit, and the harem is very cute The logic is very strong. It is not recommended for book lovers who don't like harems or yanderes. Finally, some of the settings here are really in line with my taste. The church is benevolent and bright, and the elves are elegant and kind. Also, this novel feels a bit like Sword Art Online + Inception + self-made, and judging from the ending, I personally think it would be better to change it to a single female protagonist.

I have read a hundred chapters so far. The plot is perfect and the characterization is very good, but many details are very abstract. I understand that you want to write a medieval European style communication, but what about your writing style? Laughing awkwardly] So I didn't give it five points, but this plot is really a highlight. I took a quick look and rated it only 7 points, but this book is already over 1 million words long. It can be said that it is really a good book that has been delayed. Next, I will continue to read if there are good ones, I will tell you about the bad ones, and I will also comment on the bad ones. I hope the author can persevere and finish writing this book! Come on!

What I saw was the fully retouched version. You can think of it as an online game in the early and middle stages. The fights are supported by strict logic and data, but not much in the later stages. The early stages are more fun, and the later stages are faster-paced. The last two hundred chapters are actually a bit boring, and I skipped more than a hundred chapters. I feel that the biggest shortcoming of this book is that the framework is too big, and the author's writing is not that large, which makes it feel strange to read. The character description, fighting support, and plot foreshadowing are all there, but not much. It is easy to not feel happy, or to say that you feel unhappy after a while. In addition, there is nothing unacceptable about this book (current version) (I have never read the previous version) (I am low-defense). It is a book that can be read by readers. I estimate it at 9.0. I hope the author writes better and better.

The content is of high quality, especially the author's writing is really good, and the plot is well matched, which is really comfortable and exciting to watch. Old readers are here, cheers for the author's new book!

The emotions are well described, there is no outrageous sense of fragmentation, the logic is smooth, and it does not fall into homogeneity. It has come out of its own writing style, which is very comfortable to read. It also reminds some names of some people who have appeared for a long time or are easy to forget. It is very careful.

Md, absolutely amazing, so shocking, Recommended by bookworms who vomited blood after reading for 3,000 hours I dare say that when you pick up this article, you won't be able to put it down. Especially the part about chanting the words of judgment, it's great [Like][Like][Like][Like]

If you like the medieval sword and magic genre, the author can give you a good experience, and this book is huge and beautiful (it's still huge, and I don't have a knife at the moment). The description may be quite long, but it is also in line with the author's style. In short, don't be fooled by the rating. Trust me, you won't regret it [get it]

The author must finish it. I read more than 7,000 pages in 4 days. I was really attracted by the rich personalities of the heroines. I felt like I was back when I was a child watching Dragons. I miss this feeling of physical and mental substitution @

It is very beautiful, with delicate emotional descriptions and a lot of daily life. It is very rare as a harem novel. It is not like ordinary stallion novels. However, the ending is a bit rushed. In the end - where is Nika's holy marriage? ! ! !

This is a very good book. It is a very good article in this world of literature where the routines are the same. I like it very much. The characters are very fleshed out. I really want the protagonist to grow up in the real world. Although it is a harem, it is the best harem I have ever seen. You might as well calm down and savor this article. I can't use too many words to describe this article. Go and read it. Also, I also like the male protagonist here very much. He is not the kind who always swears or is brainless and cool. The male protagonist here can reflect and think. Some people may think it is nonsense. After reading too many la ji novels, this kind of thinking will be formed subtly. Cherish this kind of novel! Not much left

It's quite interesting, and the content is very novel. I like to see Western beauties from other worlds. There are no international alliance brawls, no knives and no bull heads.

The plot structure is relatively complete, and the character creation is also good. Each harem has a relatively independent emotional line. The combat power improvement part is not described in too much detail due to space limitations. If you like the delicate description of the harem's emotions, you can give it a try.

Although there are some online game settings, it does not affect the Western fantasy feel at all. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] The plot line is clear, although there are many women, it is handled well, and the emotional line is delicate. It is a rare novel [Top post][Top post][Top post] Dog head saves life [doge] [smile] [smile] [smile]

I've finished reading it. The western fantasy turned into science fiction in the end. The ending was actually confusing to me. It's a harem story. Except for Fenlong Fei, all the other female protagonists appeared. Overall, it's a good novel on Tomato. If you're short of books, you can read it.

The protagonist's character design is good, and the heroine's personality is relatively diverse. I feel that some of the villains should not be written as outright bad guys. The diversity of characters can add a lot of points.

The framework of the novel is very good and the writing is very attractive. But I think there are some problems with the emotional handling of the characters in the novel, especially the emotional changes of the female protagonists are too sudden or unreasonable, and the male protagonist's personality is very awkward, which makes people not optimistic in the early stage. Only then will a lot of poison points be revealed. The author has explanations in some paragraphs. I think the author thinks that writing this way will be poisonous. But the explanations are sometimes a bit darker. But the work is still very interesting. [Love]

Now that I have seen it, I feel that it is very well created and the characters have distinct personalities. At least I can have an impression of the heroine's character and not have the same person with different names. The protagonist's character is also okay. It has a high score. There is nothing poisonous about it if you eliminate small problems.

Finished reading it, it's pretty good. Although the introduction lists multiple heroines, I think 3 or 4 are enough, and there are actually more than a dozen.