The System Wants Me to Die a Worthy Death

Looking forward to it, it looks great! I hope I can keep writing!

1. Very good-looking, with well-drawn characters and fascinating characters. 2. I suggest changing the title of the book. The title is a bit of a drag. 3. Personally, I feel that cheating is a bit strong, and the system can also help with poisoning.

It's pretty good. The change and progression of the protagonist's thoughts are pretty good. ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ Come on

There is no CP in this article, the description of the protagonist is likable, and there is a clear growth line. As long as there are no pitfalls, it will definitely be a good article with a score of 9 or above. Big boost to the author💕