Surviving on an Uncharted Island

Let me share my personal opinion. I don't know how the author conceived it? But I personally feel that the island survival plot is okay. Even if the eldest lady's character change is a bit abrupt, the overall story is still okay and can still attract readers. But is this emotional plot of yours real? Author, are you an island survival type? Either life or death? It's not an urban romance. Your emotional line is directly out of touch with the island novel. Personally, I feel that this is a good island novel that suddenly collapses on the emotional line [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua]

In fact, there is no need to add superfluous characters to write about LOL characters. I think your desert island series is very interesting. My personal suggestion is that it is best to write a desert island series. This is very interesting. Come on, author.

I can only say that the writing was good, decisive and not too holy, but the emotional scenes were really messed up and the number of words was too low. It is too exaggerated to say that it turned into a pervert because of psychological problems. Even though I'm physically healthy, I can't see it because of my psychological problems. It's too disgusting. Others are pretty average.

The author didn't want to write a harem/immortality/superpower novel with the appearance of a desert island. The protagonist is not a dog-licker, and he pays attention to an equal exchange. But at the moment, I personally feel that the character description through dialogue and natural self-talk is a bit too hard, and the proportion of the page is a bit too much, making it seem like a chatterbox. After more than 20 chapters on the desert island, I feel that the progress bar has not moved at all. I hope the author can make the female characters more useful in the future, instead of being like a vase in many novels. Then it focuses more on desert island survival, construction, exploration, and fighting against nature (if you want to watch fighting with people, wouldn't it be good to read novels on other themes?).

The original text pasted below, some outrageous sentences are marked with asterisks "Me?" Zhang Xifeng raised his eyebrows, "I'm not afraid to tell you. I've eaten a lot of food, and now my body is not weak. If you ask me to guard two beautiful women, it's better to just kill me." ★★★★""Pfft..." Lin Xueer chuckled softly: "If you ask me, you are just a virgin who has the heart but not the courage."★★★★ "Hmph, you haven't eaten it or seen it before, so you have the nerve to blame me." Zhang Xifeng waved his hand, ★★★★""As a sheep, don't wander around the wolf all day long, be careful because I really can't help but eat you up one day.""★★★★★ "Come here, I want to take a look. I heard that there are only exhausted cows and no plowed fields." Lin Xueer looked at Zhang Xifeng quite charmingly, which made Zhang Xifeng couldn't help but stare straight in the eyes, ★★★★" After reacting, he quickly looked away. I don't know how this girl changed her gender."★★★★ "Pfft..." Lin Xueer watched Zhang Xifeng turn his head, especially when he quickly covered his lower abdomen with a blanket, and knew what had happened. This guy was just a prude. It was really difficult for a man to remain undefeated in front of a woman, especially a loser like Zhang Xifeng. "Actually, I don't mind you sleeping with us. The body temperature of boys is higher than that of girls," Lin Xueer pretended to be calm and continued: "And I don't mean to blame you. Since you can get back medicine and energy bars, you must have got other food, so you must be healthier than us now." "Farewell." Zhang Xifeng shook his head, ★★★★""I don't like taking advantage of others in this situation. In the final analysis, even if you allow me to do something now, it is just the survival instinct of relying on the strong and the suspension bridge effect caused by the threat of survival.""★★★★ "Besides, I have 20 million in my hand now, why don't I live well?" Zhang Xifeng resisted the man's impulse, and then breathed out gently: "Once we go out, even for a girl with the best appearance like you, if I change one every day, it will be enough for me to change for at least a year." ★★★★""Once something happens, our transaction will not be pure.""★★★★Zhang Xifeng shook his head: "Who knows how long we will stay in this ghost place, for a little instinctive impulse, I ruined my survival plan. As a hunter, the first thing to do is★★★★"Restrain yourself",★★★★I learned this when I was 8 years old, but now I have been away from that kind of environment for too long, so"I am easily attracted to you" Identification summary: Protagonist: (Control yourself version) Diaosi Catchphrase: I am a loser Hobbies: Fantasy Mentality: Betting on dogs, turtle man Island survival purpose: hydrology, full attendance award Talent: Jade Girl, Cerebral Palsy Parallel world characters: Riban world, like the green turtle Watching suggestion: Not as good as the Dragon King's son-in-law

I like the male protagonist's character very much, it's well written.

I'm sorry, Desert Island Survival is so well written, but the setting of Runeterra is suddenly added. I really don't know how to write and add a system that is better than Runeterra. How do you think of Desert Island Survival and Runeterra coming together? It's too abstract, and it's only seven or eight chapters long. It's not like you would open temporary cheats like this, right?

He is very bloody, and he dares to kill people when provoked at the beginning. He is not timid at all. Even the women give him away on his own initiative, but the male protagonist does not dare to touch him.

When you look at a person, you have to look at what he does, not what he says. He talks about making excuses for equal value, but in reality he is really a dog-licking tool.

First of all, it is a person, not a beast. It is right to write decisively and decisively, but there is no need to write it so ruthlessly. It seems very depressing. Women can't write anything. Isn't it possible that they can't be taught? Although girls are weaker, they are not that bad. There are too many psychological activities, most of them are.